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 Comme2 millions de personnes, recevez gratuitement chaque semaine une leçon d'anglais... Cliquez ici! Recommandés: -Sites de langues -Autres sites de professeurs -Cours Assimil -Jeux gratuits -Traducteur anglais -Orientation &métiers -Tous les BTS -Nos autres sites | Me présenter en Anglais (1) << Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En bas Me présenter en Anglais Message de hitoui posté le 03-12-2008 à 10:46:22 (S | E | F) bonjour, je dois me présenter en anglais et j'ai un peu de mal voila le texte que j'ai rédigé, pouvez vous m'aider à corriger les fautes? merci d'avance I will introduce myself. My name is (hitoui). I’m French. I’m twenty four years old. I was born on twenty seventh May nineteen eighty four in Paris. I live in the north of france since I was born. I’m married since November two thousand seven (2007) so the last week it was my first marriage birthday. I live in lille with my husband and my cat. I have got one brother who study geography at the university. He want to be a professeur. i like swimming, cooking and reading. i love to go to the cinema, i go 4 (fois) by month. I'm in master of trade for beginning department supervisor. i hope this year is my last study year. After my degree scientific on high school in roubaix, I study Japanese one year, during this time I began to work in supermarket, fast food, shop, so I discover a passion for trade, so I began to study trade in lille in 2004. I was accepted here in 2006 for the trade licence and now I’m here. I’m doing my business internship in the () in the department of fresh products, I learn the job of organizational manager. merci de votre aide hitoui Réponse: Me présenter en Anglais de linsey34, postée le 03-12-2008 à 13:53:23 (S | E) Dear hitoui, en rouge les erreurs à corriger: I will introduce myself. My name is (hitoui). I’m French. I’m twenty four years old. I was born on (the) twenty seventh (of) May nineteen eighty four in Paris. I live in the north of France since I was born. I’m married since November two thousand (and) seven (2007) so the last week it was my first marriage birthday. I live in Lille with my husband and my cat. I have got one brother who study geography at the university. He want to be a professeur. i like swimming, cooking and reading. i love to go to the cinema, i go 4 (fois) by month. I'm in master of trade for beginning department supervisor. i hope this year is my last study year. After my degree scientific on high school in roubaix, I study Japanese one year, during this time I began to work in a supermarket, a fast food, a shop, so I discover a passion for trade, so I began to study trade in lille in 2004. I was accepted here in 2006 for the trade licence and now I’m here. I’m doing my business internship in the () in the department of fresh products, I learn the job of organizational manager. |
