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Message de cokecola posté le 25-05-2012 à 19:50:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,

j'ai un cv à écrire en anglais pour l'école. Je voudrais savoir s'il vous plaît si cela parait correct.Je souhaiterais seulement savoir s'il y a des erreurs.
Merci d'avance.
Cordialement

Dear Sir,
I'm French and actually I would like to be a French assistant in your school. This is my favorite language and I admit that it is a real passion as a consequence Ispeak English all the days (je veux dire tous les jours) with my Britains friends. I have been learning this language for four years at the University of Paris. MoreoverI have got experience, I know adolescents very well because Igive severals private curse to pupils and teenagers who must have difficulty. At last, I live in England since I have finished to go at school and that I have got my English master. At present I Would like a good job that's why I write to you.

Yours truly
Marie.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-05-2012 21:10

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Réponse: Rédaction/CV de notrepere, postée le 26-05-2012 à 16:28:12 (S | E)
Hello

I'm French and actually I would like to be a French assistant in your school.(To teach English?) This is my favorite language and I admit that it is a real passion as a consequence I speak English all the days (every day) (je veux dire tous les jours) with my Britains friends. I have been learning this language for four years at the University of Paris. Moreover I have got experience, I know adolescents very well because I give severals private curse to pupils and teenagers who must have difficulty. At last, I live in England since I have finished to go at school and that I have got my English master. At present I Would like a good job that's why I write(forme continue) to you.

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