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Message de vincentlc posté le 12-04-2014 à 15:10:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ,
je voudrais savoir si mon texte pour le passage à l'oral sur la problématique " est-ce que internet est une menace ou un progrés pour notre société ? " est correct?
Merci à tous de bien vouloir jeter un coup d'oeil (sûrement des fautes mais je ne suis pas super fort )
I will talk about the influence of the internet on our society. This influence makes progress and or a threat ?
Since 2000 the Internet has expanded greatly with the global entrepreneurship as Google, wikilieaks or facebook, twitter ...
It is now developed software that allows to help people but it does not prevent that this software comes increasingly into our privacy .
First we will see how the internet and social networks provide Secondly progress and we will see how the Internet is a danger.
To begin with, when we had to do a search now the first reflex is to go to Google and then wikilieaks . Internet reduces search time , it made our lives easier . Social networks like Facebook allow exchange, post pictures and talk to the world. Before they fallaient us several days to receive a letter from the end of the world , thanks to the internet time is spent a few seconds .
In my opinion the internet and social networks help make our lives easier , and to be in touch with the world.
For example, during the Arab Spring has become an internet swap space without borders.
But the internet is also a risk and a threat.
Indeed there has confidentiality concerns , google wikileaks facebook receive our photos and receive our messages so they can read them . Internet and social networks thus enters our privacy. In addition, many people become addicte . We saw several current document and interview showing an additive phenomenon among young people. That night their studies and their sociability.
To conclude, I think that all documents, all publications of researchers, doctor on internet phenomena prove to be a warning . Internet allows many things , it helped to advance trade , advancing the scientific community. Internet and social networks are especially dangerous and a threat to our privacy because they have access to everything. Know what moderate solution is the control of what we do on the internet.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-04-2014 15:12
Message de vincentlc posté le 12-04-2014 à 15:10:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ,
je voudrais savoir si mon texte pour le passage à l'oral sur la problématique " est-ce que internet est une menace ou un progrés pour notre société ? " est correct?
Merci à tous de bien vouloir jeter un coup d'oeil (sûrement des fautes mais je ne suis pas super fort )
I will talk about the influence of the internet on our society. This influence makes progress and or a threat ?
Since 2000 the Internet has expanded greatly with the global entrepreneurship as Google, wikilieaks or facebook, twitter ...
It is now developed software that allows to help people but it does not prevent that this software comes increasingly into our privacy .
First we will see how the internet and social networks provide Secondly progress and we will see how the Internet is a danger.
To begin with, when we had to do a search now the first reflex is to go to Google and then wikilieaks . Internet reduces search time , it made our lives easier . Social networks like Facebook allow exchange, post pictures and talk to the world. Before they fallaient us several days to receive a letter from the end of the world , thanks to the internet time is spent a few seconds .
In my opinion the internet and social networks help make our lives easier , and to be in touch with the world.
For example, during the Arab Spring has become an internet swap space without borders.
But the internet is also a risk and a threat.
Indeed there has confidentiality concerns , google wikileaks facebook receive our photos and receive our messages so they can read them . Internet and social networks thus enters our privacy. In addition, many people become addicte . We saw several current document and interview showing an additive phenomenon among young people. That night their studies and their sociability.
To conclude, I think that all documents, all publications of researchers, doctor on internet phenomena prove to be a warning . Internet allows many things , it helped to advance trade , advancing the scientific community. Internet and social networks are especially dangerous and a threat to our privacy because they have access to everything. Know what moderate solution is the control of what we do on the internet.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-04-2014 15:12
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