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Message de seven7xcx posté le 20-01-2016 à 18:04:14 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'ai un dialogue à faire, j'aimerais être corrigé si possible, merci d'avance.
Le sujet : Imagine un dialogue entre la jeune femme et le policier à la fin du clip "Wake Me Up" d'Aloe Blacc (200 à 300 mots).
Hareth has participated to a demonstration this afternoon to stop her father’s deportation. Two hours after the demonstration, she stayed on the place to talk with one of the policemen about the deportation.
‘Please, let my dad in the United States, he works very hard, he deserves to stay there!’ Hareth said with sadness.
‘I’m aware of that, but there are too many immigrants and we have to stop this now, I’m sorry’ the policeman explain, keeping his calm.
‘I thought the country needed some workers, please keep my dad!” she beg.
‘I can’t, the rules are the rules and I mustn’t break them’ the man tell.
‘Why? He worked for many years, he fought for me and my family. It’s all because of him that I still alive!’ she insist.
‘I told you once that I can’t, and I won’t tell you a third time, go back to your home now please’ the man retort with a little anger.
‘And tell me who will work for the country after my father’s deportation?’ the young woman ask.
‘I don’t know and I really don’t care, I’m doing my job and I’m paid for that.’ the policeman replied, ‘The government is in charge’, and he wants to be through with her.
Hareth sighs desperately, ‘You’ll all regret, I mean, it’s a pathetic decision’.
Hareth leaves the place to rejoin her family. She hopes her father will stay in the United States to work.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-01-2016 22:07
Message de seven7xcx posté le 20-01-2016 à 18:04:14 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'ai un dialogue à faire, j'aimerais être corrigé si possible, merci d'avance.
Le sujet : Imagine un dialogue entre la jeune femme et le policier à la fin du clip "Wake Me Up" d'Aloe Blacc (200 à 300 mots).
Hareth has participated to a demonstration this afternoon to stop her father’s deportation. Two hours after the demonstration, she stayed on the place to talk with one of the policemen about the deportation.
‘Please, let my dad in the United States, he works very hard, he deserves to stay there!’ Hareth said with sadness.
‘I’m aware of that, but there are too many immigrants and we have to stop this now, I’m sorry’ the policeman explain, keeping his calm.
‘I thought the country needed some workers, please keep my dad!” she beg.
‘I can’t, the rules are the rules and I mustn’t break them’ the man tell.
‘Why? He worked for many years, he fought for me and my family. It’s all because of him that I still alive!’ she insist.
‘I told you once that I can’t, and I won’t tell you a third time, go back to your home now please’ the man retort with a little anger.
‘And tell me who will work for the country after my father’s deportation?’ the young woman ask.
‘I don’t know and I really don’t care, I’m doing my job and I’m paid for that.’ the policeman replied, ‘The government is in charge’, and he wants to be through with her.
Hareth sighs desperately, ‘You’ll all regret, I mean, it’s a pathetic decision’.
Hareth leaves the place to rejoin her family. She hopes her father will stay in the United States to work.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-01-2016 22:07
Réponse: Dialogue/aide de here4u, postée le 20-01-2016 à 18:43:05 (S | E)
Hello !
Hareth has participated to a demonstration this afternoon to stop her father’s deportation. Two hours after the demonstration, she stayed on the place to talk with one of the policemen about the deportation.
‘Please, let my dad in the United States, he works very hard, he deserves to stay there!’ Hareth said with sadness.
‘I’m aware of that, but there are too many immigrants and we have to stop this now, I’m sorry’ the policeman explain, keeping
‘I thought the country needed some workers, please keep my dad!” she beg.
‘I can’t, the rules are the rules and I mustn’t break them’ the man tell.
‘Why? He worked for many years, he fought for me and my family. It’s all because of him that I still(auxiliary missing!) alive!’ she insist.
‘I told you once that I can’t, and I won’t tell you a third time, go back to your home now please’ the man retort with a little anger.
‘And tell me who will work for the country after my father’s deportation?’ the young woman ask.
‘I don’t know and I really don’t care, I’m doing my job and I’m paid for that.’ the policeman replied, ‘The government is in charge’, and he wants to be through with her.
Hareth sighs desperately, ‘You’ll all regret, I mean, it’s a pathetic decision’.
Hareth leaves the place to rejoin her family. She hopes her father will stay in the United States to work.
Réponse: Dialogue/aide de seven7xcx, postée le 20-01-2016 à 19:05:38 (S | E)
Les parties en couleurs sont à corriger si j'ai bien compris?
Réponse: Dialogue/aide de gerondif, postée le 20-01-2016 à 21:12:26 (S | E)
Hello,
oui, vos verbes introduisant le dialogue sont à mettre au prétérit par exemple.
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