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Correction /un mail à une amie
Message de juval posté le 31-10-2009 à 14:36:52 (S | E | F)
bonjour à tous et à toutes,
j'ai repris les études il y a peu de temps et l'anglais est une vraie catastrophe pour moi
j'ai un devoir à rendre bientôt, "un mail à une amie que je n'ai pas vue depuis longtemps"
j'ai essayé tant bien que mal de rédiger ce mail mais je pense avoir fait beaucoup d'erreurs...si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger ça serait super !
voici le mail :
Dear Jessica,
Do you remember me ? for sure !
We were in the same class in the secondary school.
I'm sorry i haven't written before but i lost my address book, i've just found it and i'm glad to find this.
What's become of you ? Where do you live now ?
I've so many questions !!!
I'll talk little about me...
I live in Grenoble, I'm married since two years and i'm pregnant !!!
It's my first child, the baby is due on the summer, i'm really exited and my husband too !
Right now, he's looking for a stroller, i didn't go whith him because i'm very tired, Pierre (is his name) is very understandable.
obviously, i no longer work, or i'm nurse in hospital.
I love my job and i haste to coming back but i must be patient.
Pierre is building painter, he works very hard because we just bought a house so he must work overtime to pay the credit.
I'm very happy to reconnect whit you and i hope they do lose most sight, you've missed all these years, i've so many fond memories of you and i think it's mutual.
lots of love.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-10-2009 14:47
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Message de juval posté le 31-10-2009 à 14:36:52 (S | E | F)
bonjour à tous et à toutes,
j'ai repris les études il y a peu de temps et l'anglais est une vraie catastrophe pour moi
j'ai un devoir à rendre bientôt, "un mail à une amie que je n'ai pas vue depuis longtemps"
j'ai essayé tant bien que mal de rédiger ce mail mais je pense avoir fait beaucoup d'erreurs...si quelqu'un pouvait me corriger ça serait super !
voici le mail :
Dear Jessica,
Do you remember me ? for sure !
We were in the same class in the secondary school.
I'm sorry i haven't written before but i lost my address book, i've just found it and i'm glad to find this.
What's become of you ? Where do you live now ?
I've so many questions !!!
I'll talk little about me...
I live in Grenoble, I'm married since two years and i'm pregnant !!!
It's my first child, the baby is due on the summer, i'm really exited and my husband too !
Right now, he's looking for a stroller, i didn't go whith him because i'm very tired, Pierre (is his name) is very understandable.
obviously, i no longer work, or i'm nurse in hospital.
I love my job and i haste to coming back but i must be patient.
Pierre is building painter, he works very hard because we just bought a house so he must work overtime to pay the credit.
I'm very happy to reconnect whit you and i hope they do lose most sight, you've missed all these years, i've so many fond memories of you and i think it's mutual.
lots of love.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-10-2009 14:47
+ forum
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