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Message de wushu posté le 11-04-2012 à 12:13:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je viens de rédiger avec l'aide d'un copain une lettre et CV pour postuler dans le plus de McDo possible au Royaume-Uni.
Car je souhaite travailler là-bas pour me confronter à la langue et surtout connaître un autre environnement =) !!
Voici ma lettre et mon CV, veuillez s'il vous plaît y jeter un coup d'oeil et me dire ce qui ne va pas ou ce qui serait maladroit.
nom prenom
xxx, av. De xxxxx ap. XXXX
31000 xxxxx
FRANCE
12 April 2012
The Manager
McDonald's Edinburgh
xxxxxx
xxxxxx
Dear Sir, Madam,
An international company such as McDonald's is an excellent environment to practice communication skills and enjoy teamwork in multicultural crew. That's why, an opportunity to become a member of McDonald's team in London would be a good chance to discover new culture, to live and work in another society.
I am a first year student at Management in University of TOULOUSE III and I have already some experience as a crew member in McDonald's (xxxxxx, France) where I worked as a sales-assistant during my summer holidays. I am serious and well-motivated person and I would like to take advantage of three free months to taste new lifestyle under habitual working conditions. Moreover, such company values as team spirit and desire to do your best are also common for me.
I am able to supply any further information you require. Please feel free to contact me by e-mail or phone.
Yours faithfully,
Nom prénom
Inc : CV
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mon CV:
CURRICULUM VITAE
Name: Prénom Nom
Address: xxxx, avenue de xxxxx
Résidence xxxxx xxxxxx
31400 xxxxxx
Mobile: 033 xxx xxx xxx
E-mail: xxxx
Date of Birth: xx.xx.xx (20 years olds)
Nationality: French
Marital Status: single
Other: Driving licence
EDUCATION
2011-2012 University of xxxx in Management.
First year Management degree Student
Subjects covered: Accounting, law lessons and economy lessons.
2010-2011 Lycée xxxxx, Baccalauréat S
(equivalent to an upper secondary school diploma in Maths, Physics and Biology). A levels with 2 : 1
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
November 2011 Worked as sales assistant at the xxxx, xxxxxx (near xxx.)
-March 2012 Sold and adviced customers on different products
Placed orders with suppliers
Looked after the cleaning and disinfecting of the cumpter.
Cleaned counter, floor and toilet.
Summer 2011 Two-month summer job as crew member in McDonald’s Restaurant
in xxxxxx.
Summer 2010 Two-month summer job as crew member in McDonald’s Restaurant
EXTRA-PROFESSIONAL ACTIVITIES
Member of xxxxxx Club in xxxxx
INTEREST
Currents affairs, finance and politics
HOBBIES
Jogging, athletics
COMPUTER SKILLS
Computer literate
REFERENCES
Mrs XXXXX (english teacher)
Mobile: XX XX XX XX
Merci, je vous aime =)! vive anglaisfacile.com :D!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-04-2012 12:52
Message de wushu posté le 11-04-2012 à 12:13:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je viens de rédiger avec l'aide d'un copain une lettre et CV pour postuler dans le plus de McDo possible au Royaume-Uni.
Car je souhaite travailler là-bas pour me confronter à la langue et surtout connaître un autre environnement =) !!
Voici ma lettre et mon CV, veuillez s'il vous plaît y jeter un coup d'oeil et me dire ce qui ne va pas ou ce qui serait maladroit.
nom prenom
xxx, av. De xxxxx ap. XXXX
31000 xxxxx
FRANCE
12 April 2012
The Manager
McDonald's Edinburgh
xxxxxx
xxxxxx
Dear Sir, Madam,
An international company such as McDonald's is an excellent environment to practice communication skills and enjoy teamwork in multicultural crew. That's why, an opportunity to become a member of McDonald's team in London would be a good chance to discover new culture, to live and work in another society.
I am a first year student at Management in University of TOULOUSE III and I have already some experience as a crew member in McDonald's (xxxxxx, France) where I worked as a sales-assistant during my summer holidays. I am serious and well-motivated person and I would like to take advantage of three free months to taste new lifestyle under habitual working conditions. Moreover, such company values as team spirit and desire to do your best are also common for me.
I am able to supply any further information you require. Please feel free to contact me by e-mail or phone.
Yours faithfully,
Nom prénom
Inc : CV
-------------------------
mon CV:
CURRICULUM VITAE
Name: Prénom Nom
Address: xxxx, avenue de xxxxx
Résidence xxxxx xxxxxx
31400 xxxxxx
Mobile: 033 xxx xxx xxx
E-mail: xxxx
Date of Birth: xx.xx.xx (20 years olds)
Nationality: French
Marital Status: single
Other: Driving licence
EDUCATION
2011-2012 University of xxxx in Management.
First year Management degree Student
Subjects covered: Accounting, law lessons and economy lessons.
2010-2011 Lycée xxxxx, Baccalauréat S
(equivalent to an upper secondary school diploma in Maths, Physics and Biology). A levels with 2 : 1
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
November 2011 Worked as sales assistant at the xxxx, xxxxxx (near xxx.)
-March 2012 Sold and adviced customers on different products
Placed orders with suppliers
Looked after the cleaning and disinfecting of the cumpter.
Cleaned counter, floor and toilet.
Summer 2011 Two-month summer job as crew member in McDonald’s Restaurant
in xxxxxx.
Summer 2010 Two-month summer job as crew member in McDonald’s Restaurant
EXTRA-PROFESSIONAL ACTIVITIES
Member of xxxxxx Club in xxxxx
INTEREST
Currents affairs, finance and politics
HOBBIES
Jogging, athletics
COMPUTER SKILLS
Computer literate
REFERENCES
Mrs XXXXX (english teacher)
Mobile: XX XX XX XX
Merci, je vous aime =)! vive anglaisfacile.com :D!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-04-2012 12:52
Réponse: Cover letter +cv / job UK de wushu, postée le 17-04-2012 à 13:13:30 (S | E)
can you help me, please!
Réponse: Cover letter +cv / job UK de bluestar, postée le 17-04-2012 à 16:45:01 (S | E)
Bonjour...
You should start by saying what you can do for them rather than what they can do for you. Make..."I am a first year student etc.,.." your first paragraph...and "An international company such as McDonalds .." your second paragraph
Dear Sir, Madam,
An international company such as McDonalds's is an excellent environment to practice communication skills and enjoy teamwork in a multicultural crew.
I am a first year student at Management in University of TOULOUSE (>(capitals not needed) III and I have already some experience as a crew member in McDonalds's (xxxxxx, France) where I worked as a sales-assistant during my summer holidays. I am a serious and well-motivated person and I would like to take advantage of three free months to taste a new lifestyle under
Yours faithfully,
Nom prénom
Inc : CV
-------------------------
mon CV:
CURRICULUM VITAE
Name: Prénom Nom
Address: xxxx, avenue de xxxxx
Résidence xxxxx xxxxxx
31400 xxxxxx
Mobile: 033 xxx xxx xxx
E-mail: xxxx
Date of Birth: xx.xx.xx (20 years olds)
Nationality: French
Marital Status: Ssingle
Other: Driving licence
EDUCATION
2011-2012 University of xxxx in Management.
First year Management
Subjects covered: Accounting,
2010-2011 Lycée xxxxx, Baccalauréat S
(equivalent to an upper secondary school diploma in Maths, Physics and Biology). A levels with 2 : 1
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
November 2011 Worked as sales assistant at the xxxx, xxxxxx (near xxx.)
-March 2012 Sold and
Placed orders with suppliers.
Looked after the cleaning and disinfecting of the cumpter.
(What is this?)Cleaned counter,floor and toilet.
Summer 2011 Two-month summer job as crew member in McDonald’s Restaurant
in xxxxxx.
Summer 2010 Two-month summer job as crew member in McDonald’s Restaurant
EXTRA-PROFESSIONAL ACTIVITIES
Member of xxxxxx Club in xxxxx
INTEREST
Currents affairs, finance and politics (use capitals for first letters here)HOBBIES
Jogging, athletics
COMPUTER SKILLS
Computer literate
REFERENCES
Mrs XXXXX (
Mobile: XX XX XX XX
Merci, je vous aime =)! vive anglaisfacile.com :D!
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