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RYB/ let's suggest 6

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RYB/ let's suggest 6
Message de here4u posté le 11-01-2022 à 22:44:29 (S | E | F)
Hello, dear Workers!

Encore et toujours les incertitudes et inquiétudes dues à la période ... De plus en plus de gens touchés (légèrement, espérons ...) et il reste pour beaucoup difficile de se concentrer sur du travail intellectuel, surtout s'il n'est pas indispensable ...
J'essaye tout de même de vous solliciter à nouveau, en espérant que le sujet vous inspirera ...

Voici le rappel des modalités de la première partie de l'exercice :
1. Je vous demande une EXPRESSION sur le sujet proposé (un sujet unique par exercice) à m’envoyer en mp dès que possible … (=> 130 - 150 mots au maximum - un seul envoi par personne.)

2. Le plus tôt possible, une première expression est publiée sur le Forum, et CHACUN est libre de « corriger » UNE FOIS ( en collant le texte et indiquant les erreurs EN BLEU, et en soulignant ce qui vous semble maladroit et que vous voudriez changer, sans donner la « correction » (forme correcte), comme il se doit.) Un seul devoir à la fois sera publié pour corriger…
Les modalités entières sont accessibles : Lien internet


( Je vous les rappellerai au fur et à mesure de la progression du travail ).

Le sujet sera ... ce que vous en ferez, ou Correction en ligne le mercredi 26 janvier 2022.
Voici le nouveau sujet !

- What quality do you value most in people? What flaw can't you bear? 130-150 words

May THE FORCE be with You (with many of you! ) Everybody's welcome!


Réponse : RYB/ let's suggest 6 de here4u, postée le 17-01-2022 à 09:13:58 (S | E)
Hello dear helping friends!

Here is EXPRESSION N°1 (which I had forgotten to post... )

The ability to respect other people is what I value most in people. Not only does it include politeness but it also encompasses consideration for others, empathy and the sense of compromise. It means understanding the needs of others and not ignoring them. Altruism is also an invaluable quality: I admire those who dedicate their lives to save people in distress : their self-sacrifice deserves infinite gratitude.
In contrast, violence is one of the flaws I can least stand. It can take many forms : physical, verbal, psychological or sexual. It arises from hatred, intolerance or the urge to dominate and control other people. Violent people are thoughtless, selfish and can be very dangerous for society : they sometimes have no regard for rules, laws and may take justice into their own hands. (131)

Please indicate possible mistakes in blue and underline what you think is clumsy...( suggestions en vert demain matin !)



Réponse : RYB/ let's suggest 6 de here4u, postée le 18-01-2022 à 11:18:00 (S | E)
Hello, Dears,

No volunteers to participate... I'll do it... but there aren't many "questionable" words...

Here is EXPRESSION N°1:

The ability to respect other people is what I value most in people. Not only does it include politeness but it also encompasses consideration for others, empathy and the sense of compromise. It means understanding the needs of others and not ignoring them. Altruism is also an invaluable quality: I admire those who dedicate their lives to save people in distress : their self-sacrifice deserves infinite gratitude.
In contrast, violence is one of the flaws I can least stand. It can take many forms : physical, verbal, psychological or sexual. It arises from hatred, intolerance or the urge to dominate and control other people. Violent people are thoughtless, selfish and can be very dangerous for society : they sometimes have no regard for rules, laws and may take justice into their own hands. (131)

Hope everyone's OK!



Réponse : RYB/ let's suggest 6 de maxwell, postée le 18-01-2022 à 20:34:25 (S | E)
Hello
I'm a volunteer but I can't see what's wrong with this text, even with what you've underlined

éventuellement : others' needs
Edit 19/1 20h35 : j'ai corrigé ma grossière étourderie ci-dessus



Réponse : RYB/ let's suggest 6 de lucile83, postée le 18-01-2022 à 21:30:33 (S | E)
Hello,
I think it should be:
It means to understand the others' needs and not to ignore them.



Réponse : RYB/ let's suggest 6 de here4u, postée le 18-01-2022 à 21:42:15 (S | E)
Hello!

Thanks a lot dear Friends! Hey, Max! Couldn't you find what's wrong (coloured in blue)?

Expression N°2 will be posted tomorrow morning!



Réponse : RYB/ let's suggest 6 de here4u, postée le 19-01-2022 à 09:41:31 (S | E)
Hello all of you!

Other suggestions regarding EXPRESSION N°1 will be given at the end of the session!

EXPRESSION N°2: de bien vouloir aider à indiquer les erreurs !

I think generousness is a best quality. Some people can give everything for others who have nothing or less that they have. Very often, the generous people haven’t a lot of money, but have the heart in gold, and the very riches do not give to others. Some other give to be admired, not to help. Franchise is an another very good quality. I don’t like people saying lies. Sometimes, they don’t remember their lies (because there are many)and they are just keep contradictions. Yes, I do hate liers ; I want to know someone is saying right things to me. I need to believe people and if people lie a little lie, I never think thay are saynig the right. I need to feel the confidence in people. 129
A lot of mistakes, sorry !

We need you to help make suggestions to correct this text... First: mistakes shown in blue, and what is clumsy should be underlined.

Thanks a lot for your help!



Réponse : RYB/ let's suggest 6 de maxwell, postée le 19-01-2022 à 20:38:27 (S | E)
Hello!

Dedicate their lives to saving

EXPRESSION N°2:

I think generousness is a best quality. Some people can give everything for others who have nothing or less that they have. Very often, the generous people haven’t a lot of money, but have the heart in gold, and the very riches do not give to others. Some other give to be admired, not to help. Franchise is an another very good quality. I don’t like people saying lies. Sometimes, they don’t remember their lies (because there are many) and they are just keep contradictions. Yes, I do hate liers ; I want to know someone XXX is saying right things to me. I need to believe people and if people lie a little lie, I never think thay are saynig the right. I need to feel the confidence in people. 129

J'hésite pour "is a best quality". Dans le doute, je souligne quand même



Réponse : RYB/ let's suggest 6 de here4u, postée le 21-01-2022 à 12:02:20 (S | E)
Hello Dears!

I hope you're doing well...
Though we're lacking the preliminary work, you're now allowed to suggest your solutions in green.
May THE FORCE be with you.



Réponse : RYB/ let's suggest 6 de maxwell, postée le 21-01-2022 à 20:32:55 (S | E)
Hello!

EXPRESSION N°2:

I think generosity is the best quality. Some people can give everything to those who have nothing or less than what they have. Very often, generous people don't have a lot of money, but they have a heart of gold while the very rich do not give as much as they could. Others give to be admired, not to help.
Frankness is an another very good quality. I don’t like people who tell lies. Sometimes, they don’t remember their lies (because there are many) and they just contradict themselves. Yes, I do hate liars; I want to know someone who says right things to me. I need to believe and trust people. If I'm told even a little lie, I'll never again believe they are telling the truth. 129

petit commentaire : ça fait beaucoup de "others" et de "people". J'ai essayé d'en enlever et d'alléger



Réponse : RYB/ let's suggest 6 de here4u, postée le 22-01-2022 à 11:19:04 (S | E)
Hello you all!

Thanks to you, Max, we'll consider this EXPRESSION N° 2 is ready to receive our combined suggestions... Maxwell for your work.

EXPRESSION N°3:

I salute anyone who has sincere feelings towards others who want to help people who need them in a time of weakness. I salute the people who can keep the secret when it is confessed to them. All my respects for a man to whom I can ask in case of need for money or protection. And also in my neighborhood, I'm so happy to have respectful neirbors. On the other hand I hate a whole human being who lies all the time to the point where I no longer believe it. I hate people who have hatred towards them, they are hypocritical people who smile at each other but they never help each other. The good and the bad must never cross paths on the same path because it is impossible for them to agree. 137 words

We expect you to write what you think is wrong in blue, and underline what might be clumsy...

Please, we need your help! Take care of yourselves!



Réponse : RYB/ let's suggest 6 de maxwell, postée le 22-01-2022 à 20:29:47 (S | E)
Hello!

EXPRESSION N°3:

I salute anyone who has sincere feelings towards others who want to help people who need them in a time of weakness. I salute the people who can keep the secret when it is confessed to them. All my respects for a man to whom I can ask in case of need for money or protection.(->Here4U would say it's not a sentence ...) And also in my neighborhood, I'm so happy to have respectful neirbors.

On the other hand(punctuation) I hate a whole human being who lies all the time to the point where I no longer believe it. I hate people who have hatred towards them, they are hypocritical people who smile at each other but they never help each other. The good and the bad must never cross paths on the same path because it is impossible for them to agree. 137 words




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