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Correction /The best job

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Correction /The best job
Message de mareee posté le 31-12-2017 à 20:17:49 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
serait-il possible pour vous de me corriger le dialogue ci-dessous, s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance.

Hi, I’m ***, and I’m the friendliest and most energetic and smiling person you’ll ever meet!
I want to be a wildlife caretaker in Australia for many reasons.
First, Australia is one of the best places in the world with its beautiful landscapes and breathtaking sunrises.
Moreover, I’m very keen on traveling, discovering new places, meeting new people. learning about different cultures and languages (I speak 5 languages : French, Spanish, English, Portuguese and Japanese).
Last year I visited many parts around South America. There I climbed mountains like the colossus of America called « The Aconcagua » in Argentine ; I also hiked, ran marathons,, biked in the sacred valley of the Incas (and in the middle of nowhere), went elastic jumping on the cascades roads, went snorkeling and scuba diving. I’m quite athletic as well.
In all my years of living, I’ve seen a lot of animals, and I love them all equally, just like they love me back. With all that said, I think that I would be perfect for this job.
I also have a youtube channel to share my experiences with others and I’d love to do the same if I’m chosen, we could learn more about the Great Barrier Reef and Queensland together.
Next, I’m a great reporter and photographer. With these two skills, I travel around the world and gain more information about places than the common visitor would.
So please pick me for this job! I’m ready to be hired!
-At the best girl in the world to do the best job in the world-.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-12-2017 20:54


Réponse : Correction /The best job de gerondif, postée le 02-01-2018 à 20:00:24 (S | E)
Bonsoir
Hi, I’m ***, and I’m the friendliest and most energetic and smiling person you’ll ever meet!
I want to be a wildlife caretaker in Australia for many reasons.
First, Australia is one of the best places in the world with its beautiful landscapes and breathtaking sunrises.
Moreover, I’m very keen on traveling, discovering new places, meeting new people. learning about different cultures and languages (I speak 5 languages : French, Spanish, English, Portuguese and Japanese).
Last year I visited many parts around South America. There I climbed mountains like the colossus of America called « The Aconcagua » in Argentine(le pays, c'est Argentina) ; I also hiked, ran marathons,, biked in the sacred valley of the Incas (and in the middle of nowhere), went elastic jumping on the cascades roads, went snorkeling and scuba diving. I’m quite athletic as well.
In all my years of living, I’ve seen a lot of animals, and I love them all equally, just like they love me back. With all that said,(maladroit)(je dirais, all that being said, ou bien, to put it in a nutshell, ou encore Need I say more ? ) I think that I would be perfect for this job.
I also have a youtube channel to share my experiences with others and I’d love to do the same if I’m chosen, we could learn more about the Great Barrier Reef and Queensland together.
Next, I’m a great reporter and photographer. With these two skills, I travel around the world and gain more information about places than the common visitor would.
So please pick me (up) for this job! I’m ready to be hired!
-At the best girl in the world to do the best job in the world-.(que voulez-vous dire par cette ligne?)




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