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Message de chd3 posté le 18-11-2020 à 12:53:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
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Dictators rule a country and abuse their power. Nonetheless, people can revolt using the power of words. Why dictators are afraid of the power of words?
First, words can be louder or softer depending on the speech / text they are composing. Indeed, if the speech bears witness to a cause, words will be more touching. That’s to say, words should be well chosen when talking about a serious subject like racism.
Then, figures of speech can show determination: W. Churchill's speech of June 4, 1940, was captivating, as he used repetions, pictures, ...
So this power of words can be very strong and attract a lot of people to it and that's why dictators are afraid of it.
Merci d' avance pour vos réponses.
Message de chd3 posté le 18-11-2020 à 12:53:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pouvez-vous corriger mon texte s'il vous plait?
Dictators rule a country and abuse their power. Nonetheless, people can revolt using the power of words. Why dictators are afraid of the power of words?
First, words can be louder or softer depending on the speech / text they are composing. Indeed, if the speech bears witness to a cause, words will be more touching. That’s to say, words should be well chosen when talking about a serious subject like racism.
Then, figures of speech can show determination: W. Churchill's speech of June 4, 1940, was captivating, as he used repetions, pictures, ...
So this power of words can be very strong and attract a lot of people to it and that's why dictators are afraid of it.
Merci d' avance pour vos réponses.
Réponse : Aide/correction de gerondif, postée le 18-11-2020 à 13:12:04 (S | E)
Bonjour
Erreurs en bleu
Dictators rule a country and abuse their power. Nonetheless, people can revolt using the power of words. Why dictators are (inversez, question au style direct)afraid of the power of words?
First, words can be louder or softer depending on the speech / text they are composing. Indeed, if the speech bears witness to a cause, words will be more touching. That’s to say, words should be well chosen when talking about a serious subject like racism.
Then, figures of speech can show determination: W. Churchill's speech of June 4, 1940, was captivating, as he used repetitions, pictures, ...
So this power of words can be very strong and attract a lot of people to it(to them plutôt, on est attiré par les mots) and that's why dictators are afraid of it.
Réponse : Aide/correction de chd3, postée le 18-11-2020 à 14:31:40 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup
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