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Sum up/Correction

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Sum up/Correction
Message de perfect posté le 05-12-2020 à 11:16:17 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Can you help me please ? Here's the sum up of the scenes of a moovie.

At the beginning, we assist to a match between Marc and another guy. Marc wins but his adversary asks for a vengeance, to which Marc refuses. Marc has a monitor on him but the last step in the state programm in which Marc is enrolled, is the remove of his monitor to see how he reacts without. The monitor allows the State to see and to hear what Marc sees and hears. Just after his monitor was removed, he's taken to task by the loser of the last match and his friends. He managed to get by this predicament by beating the guy and threat his buddies. In the next scene, we saw him at home with his siblings : his sister's sympathising but the brother is jealous. Suddenly, two members of the state's programm come at Marc's house and require an explanation of his threats towards his bullyers. Marc explains his strategy very clever in the eyes of the two members. Finally, they propose him to integrate the state's programm.

Thanks a lot for all the corrections made.


Réponse : Sum up/Correction de gerold, postée le 05-12-2020 à 14:24:05 (S | E)
Bonjour perfect

At the beginning, we assist to "assist" a rarement ce sens en anglais moderne, en plus ce n'est pas la bonne préposition a match between Marc and another guy. Marc wins but his adversary asks for a vengeance autre mot, to to refuse something, pas to something which Marc refuses. Marc has a monitor on him lui-même but the last step in the state programm orthographe in which Marc is enrolled, virgule à enlever is the remove c'est un verbe, il faut le nom correspondant of his monitor to see how he reacts without it. The monitor allows the State to see and to hear what Marc sees and hears. Just after his monitor was autre temps removed, he's taken to task by the loser of the last match and his friends. He managed ne mélangez pas le passé et le présent, idem dans la phrase suivante to get by autre préposition (deux mots) this predicament by beating the guy and threat c'est un nom, cherchez le verbe correspondant et mettez-le à la bonne forme his buddies. In the next scene, we saw him at home with his siblings : his sister's sympathising cela signifie plutôt être compatissant, est-ce ce que vous voulez dire ? but the his brother is jealous. Suddenly, two members of the state's programm come at autre préposition Marc's house and require an explanation of une autre préposition conviendrait mieux his threats towards his bullyers. Marc explains his strategy very clever c'est un adjectif, il faut un adverbe in the eyes of the two members. Finally, they propose him to integrate the state's programm.(la fin n'est pas très claire puisqu'il est déjà "enrolled" dans le programme)



Réponse : Sum up/Correction de gerondif, postée le 05-12-2020 à 14:27:47 (S | E)
Bonjour
Des maladresses de type "français traduit".
Erreurs en bleu.
At the beginning, we assist to a match between Marc and another guy. Marc wins but his adversary asks for a vengeance (revenge), to which Marc refuses. Marc has a monitor on him but the last step in the state programm in which Marc is enrolled, is the remove (est un verbe) of his monitor to see how he reacts without. The monitor allows the State to see and to hear what Marc sees and hears. Just after his monitor was(concordance des temps) removed, he's taken to task by the loser of the last match and his friends. He managed(il faudrait un présent) to get by this predicament by beating the guy and threat(est un nom, pas un verbe. Conjuguer soit au présent soit au gérondif) his buddies. In the next scene, we saw (présent)him at home with his siblings : his sister's sympathising but the brother is jealous. Suddenly, two members of the state's programm come at(at : on y est. to : on y va) Marc's house and require an explanation of(for) his threats towards his bullyers. Marc explains his strategy very clever(à mettre en épithète) in the eyes of (sens ?)the two members. Finally, they propose him(him n'est pas cod de propose) to integrate the state's programm.(mettez plutôt u nom composé, the state program)



Réponse : Sum up/Correction de hattrick, postée le 06-12-2020 à 15:54:17 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Quelques remarques, (juste) en passant...
"the sum up of the scenes of a moovie"
- "sum up" : mot incorrect. "sum up" est un verbe. Il vous faut un nom.
- "moovie" orthographe incorrecte.
- "bullyer" mot inconnu. Il y a plus simple...




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