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Message de plumebl posté le 01-02-2021 à 23:24:30 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
J'aimerais savoir si j'ai ~~effectuer~~ fait des fautes au niveau de la traduction d'un texte et surtout si mon anglais est correct. Pouvez-vous m'aider ~~svp~~ s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.

1. Cleanse your skin with micellar water adapted for your skin type.
2. Spray your face with thermal water. It's many virtues (soothing, protective, anti-irritant ...) allow you to respect the natural balance of your skin. Dry your skin with a paper towel.
3. Apply your moisturizer adapted to your skin type.

It's strongly recommended to don't apply makeup to these pimples / scars even if it's not obvious to let your skin breathe.

1. Remove make-up on your skin with micellar water suitable for your skin type.
2. Moisten a disc to remove make-up and apply its foaming gel (adapted to your skin type). Cleanse your skin with.
3. Rinse your face with water and then dry with a paper towel.
4. Apply the mask to pimples and scars (see advice on use on the back of the product).
5. Clean the affected areas with micellar water.
6. Spray your face with thermal water.
7. Apply the serum on pimples and scars.
8 Wait at least 30 minutes before applying the oil.

Rule # 1 is to never pop / touch your pimples even if it's very tempting. Above all, don't lose hope, be assiduous in this routine and say bye bye to your pimples and scars.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-02-2021 07:42
Gris

Réponse : Besoin d'aide/fautes de gerondif, postée le 01-02-2021 à 23:55:57 (S | E)
Bonjour
Erreurs en bleu.
Votre expression sonne parfois trop "français" comme dans la traduction de "c'est pas évident de" it is not obvious to... ne se dirait pas.

1. Cleanse your skin with micellar water adapted for to your skin type.
2. Spray your face with thermal water. It's its (adj. possessif neutre) many virtues (soothing, protective, anti-irritant ...) (un futur irait bien ici) allow you to respect the natural balance of your skin. Dry your skin with a paper towel.
3. Apply your moisturizer adapted to your skin type.

It's strongly recommended to don't(not to apply, infinitif négatif) apply makeup to these pimples / scars even if it's not obvious to let your skin breathe. (je ne comprends pas ce que vous voulez dire. Le maquillage en bouchant les pores, empêcherait la peau de respirer, alors dire : "ne pas appliquer de maquillage sur ces boutons ou cicatrices, même si ce n'est pas évident de laisser votre peau respirer" me parait un contresens. Mais si c'est vraiment le sens , on dirait "it is far from simple to let your skin breathe / it is not that simple to let your skin breathe.")

1. Remove make-up on your skin with micellar water suitable for your skin type.
2. Moisten a disc to remove make-up and apply its foaming gel (adapted to your skin type). Cleanse your skin with it.
3. Rinse your face with water and then dry it with a paper towel.
4. Apply the mask to pimples and scars (see advice on use on the back of the product).
5. Clean the affected areas with micellar water.
6. Spray your face with thermal water.
7. Apply the serum on pimples and scars.
8 Wait at least 30 minutes before applying the oil.

Rule # 1 is to never(inversez ! never to) pop / touch your pimples even if it's very tempting. Above all, don't lose hope, be assiduous in this routine and say bye bye to your pimples and scars.

Réponse : Besoin d'aide/fautes de plumebl, postée le 05-02-2021 à 21:57:28 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Merci beaucoup pour votre réponse +++
Oui effectivement je sais que j'écris un peu trop comme en français et j'ai du mal à y remédier.
D'ailleurs, est ce qu'il y a des phrases que je peux plus tourner en anglais ? j'espère que vous m'avez comprise :/

1. Cleanse your skin with micellar water adapted to your skin type.
2. Spray your face with thermal water. Its many virtues (soothing, protective, anti-irritant…) allow you to respect the natural balance of your skin. Dry your skin with a paper towel. // Vous m'avez dit qu'un futur serais mieux mais je n'arrive pas le visualiser. Pouvez vous m'éclairer.
3. Apply your moisturizer adapted to your skin type.

It is ( est ce que je doit mettre its plutôt ?) strongly recommended not to make up these pimples / scars even if it is not easy in order to let your skin breathe. // Je voulais dire qu'il ne faut pas maquiller ses boutons, même si cela n'est pas facile afin de laisser sa peau respirer)

1. Remove makeup on your skin with micellar water suitable for your skin type.
2. Moisten a disc to remove make up and apply its foaming gel (adapted to your skin type). Cleanse your skin with it.
3. Rinse your face with water and then dry it with a paper towel.
4. Apply the mask to pimples and scars (see advice on use on the back of the product).
5. Clean the affected areas with micellar water.
6. Spray your face with the thermal water.
7. Apply the serum on pimples and scars.
8. Wait at least 30 minutes before applying the oil.

The rule n°1 to never pop /touch your pimples even if it’s very tempting. Above all, don’t lose hope, be assiduous in this routine and say bye bye to your pimples and scars.

It is important to make a preliminary test to check any allergic reactions. To do this, apply the product to the folds of your elbow and wait 48 hours that any allergic reactions appear.

Merci beaucoup

Réponse : Besoin d'aide/fautes de gerondif, postée le 06-02-2021 à 14:56:37 (S | E)
Bonjour
1. Cleanse your skin with micellar water adapted to your skin type.
2. Spray your face with thermal water. Its many virtues (soothing, protective, anti-irritant…) allow you to respect the natural balance of your skin. Dry your skin with a paper towel. // Vous m'avez dit qu'un futur serais mieux mais je n'arrive pas le visualiser. Pouvez vous m'éclairer? "Visualiser" un futur , C'est mettre will devant la base verbale. Its many/numerous virtues will allow you to....
3. Apply your moisturizer adapted to your skin type.

It is ( est ce que je doit mettre its plutôt ? Ben non, its est l'adjectif possessif neutre : I like your car but I don't like its color. it's est it is avec l’auxiliaire être abrégé : It's five o'clock) strongly recommended not to (apply) make up (to) these pimples / scars even if it is not easy in order to let your skin breathe. // Je voulais dire qu'il ne faut pas maquiller ses boutons, même si cela n'est pas facile afin de laisser sa peau respirer)
Peut-être : Even if it is not an easy decision, refrain from trying to mask these pimples or scars by applying make up to them, it is better to let your skin breathe.

1. Remove makeup on your skin with micellar water suitable for your skin type.
2. Moisten a disc to remove make up and apply its foaming gel (adapted to your skin type). Cleanse your skin with it.
3. Rinse your face with water and then dry it with a paper towel.
4. Apply the mask to pimples and scars (see advice on use on the back of the product).
5. Clean the affected areas with micellar water.
6. Spray your face with the thermal water. the implique que vous l'avez mentionnée, qu'elle est livrée avec le kit. Sinon, supprimez-le
7. Apply the serum on pimples and scars. Idem, c'est le serum de la pochette...
8. Wait at least 30 minutes before applying the oil.

The(à ôter. number 1 définit la règle) rule n°1 to never never to pop /touch your pimples even if it’s very tempting. Above all, don’t lose hope, be assiduous in this routine and say bye bye to your pimples and scars.

It is important to make a preliminary test to check any allergic reactions. To do this, apply the product to the folds of your elbow and wait 48 hours that(mauvaise construction : j'attends qu'il vienne : I am waiting for him to come) any allergic reactions appear.

Réponse : Besoin d'aide/fautes de plumebl, postée le 09-02-2021 à 09:54:37 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour vos réponses

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