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A room (correction)
Message de sarsoure2 posté le 09-12-2007 à 11:34:00 (S | E | F | I)
Hello.
Please help me
This is my paragraph
it's a big rectangular room , in its entrance , on the left there is a small round table with four chairs , behind the table thers is a big window , in the opposite side on the right thers is a small shest and there is a lot of books in it , on this shest there is a lamp . next to the shest there is a fireplace , and there is on it some (bubelots), next to this fireplace there is a desk with five drawers and a chair on wheels , in the middle of the room , there is a low table , on it there is some magazines and a lamp , beside the table there is an armchair , in the back of the room there is a side board , on it there is a vase . the flower is covered with a carpet .really , it's a beautiful room.
Thank you.
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Modifié par bridg le 09-12-2007 11:44
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Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
Message de sarsoure2 posté le 09-12-2007 à 11:34:00 (S | E | F | I)
Hello.
Please help me
This is my paragraph
it's a big rectangular room , in its entrance , on the left there is a small round table with four chairs , behind the table thers is a big window , in the opposite side on the right thers is a small shest and there is a lot of books in it , on this shest there is a lamp . next to the shest there is a fireplace , and there is on it some (bubelots), next to this fireplace there is a desk with five drawers and a chair on wheels , in the middle of the room , there is a low table , on it there is some magazines and a lamp , beside the table there is an armchair , in the back of the room there is a side board , on it there is a vase . the flower is covered with a carpet .really , it's a beautiful room.
Thank you.
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Modifié par bridg le 09-12-2007 11:44
Titre
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
Réponse: A room (correction) de williamengland, postée le 10-12-2007 à 00:40:31 (S | E)
Hi Sarsoure,
La plupart de tes problèmes sont causés par des erreurs d'orthographe.
On dit There is ou there's, jamais thers.
Un coffre/armoire, est un chest
Bibelots sont des knick-knacks ou curios.
Books, knick-knacks and magazines sont pluriel alors au lieu de there is, on dit ???
Sideboard un seul mot.
Flower est une fleur, plancher c'est quoi?
Hope this helps, sinon n'hésite pas de me contacter.
Good effort.
William.
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