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Message de laolao posté le 24-02-2008 à 00:22:32 (S | E | F)
bonjour , j'ai écrit des phrases en anglais et je voudrais savoir si vous y voyez des erreurs et me les corriger , (juste mes erreurs pas tout recopier car c'est assez long ) merci beaucoup voici les 7 phrases
1/I think he's right to feel worry about his frankness and of bad she makes because by means of make suffer the others and specially the person who love him he'll stay alone
2/ the headmaster treat Sam like his son in law he spoil him and do everything he wants even give him 10 more days to make the test certainly for Sam's judjment is better
3/ Sam didn't like the headmaster's performance he told there's no need to continue his lesson it was already lost
4/Sam says that he thinks and don't care about the feelings of the other and specially his wife and his colleagues because he knows them , he allows himself to bless them .
To be frank is a quality but it's necessary to use the good words .
5/ Sam worry about the headmaster's note because he didn't make an important test which was to realize at home .
6/ finally Sam was wrong the headmaster wanted to invit him to listen to his music and have an opinion.Sam is a very frank person so his headmaster chose him to criticize and judge his new group
7/ the headmaster decide Sam give him the test the following day and Sam thinks about the evening and the time he'll need to do his 1OO papers
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Modifié par bridg le 24-02-2008 08:13
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
Message de laolao posté le 24-02-2008 à 00:22:32 (S | E | F)
bonjour , j'ai écrit des phrases en anglais et je voudrais savoir si vous y voyez des erreurs et me les corriger , (juste mes erreurs pas tout recopier car c'est assez long ) merci beaucoup voici les 7 phrases
1/I think he's right to feel worry about his frankness and of bad she makes because by means of make suffer the others and specially the person who love him he'll stay alone
2/ the headmaster treat Sam like his son in law he spoil him and do everything he wants even give him 10 more days to make the test certainly for Sam's judjment is better
3/ Sam didn't like the headmaster's performance he told there's no need to continue his lesson it was already lost
4/Sam says that he thinks and don't care about the feelings of the other and specially his wife and his colleagues because he knows them , he allows himself to bless them .
To be frank is a quality but it's necessary to use the good words .
5/ Sam worry about the headmaster's note because he didn't make an important test which was to realize at home .
6/ finally Sam was wrong the headmaster wanted to invit him to listen to his music and have an opinion.Sam is a very frank person so his headmaster chose him to criticize and judge his new group
7/ the headmaster decide Sam give him the test the following day and Sam thinks about the evening and the time he'll need to do his 1OO papers
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Modifié par bridg le 24-02-2008 08:13
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre de signaler les fautes, d'aider le demandeur à se corriger mais de ne jamais faire le travail à sa place. Cette règle est incontournable sur ce site d'apprentissage. Merci de votre participation.
Réponse: pouvez vous me corriger ? de lucile83, postée le 24-02-2008 à 09:59:09 (S | E)
Bonjour,
J'ai pris la phrase la plus courte en exemple:
3/ Sam didn't like the headmaster's performance
he told there's no need to continue his lesson it was already lost Cette phrase,comme les autres
, est pratiquement incompréhensible en l'état; il n'y a aucune ponctuation. = erreurVous devez tout reprendre; avez-vous utilisé un traducteur électronique?
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