Aide pour CV en anglais (1)

Aide pour CV en anglais

Message de nicbout posté le 08-10-2008 à 19:33:57 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

Je viens de rédiger mon CV en anglais mais j'ai peur qu'il y ait des fautes. Si quelqu'un a la gentillesse de m'aider à le corriger, je lui en serai infiniment reconnaissant. Voici le bout de mon CV qui me pose pb:


WORK EXPERIENCE :

02/2007 – 05/2007 Internship at the French Army Staff
Have been in charge of sociological studies about the French militaries

10/2006 – 12/2006 Internship at « Clients et relation », a Parisian audit firm
Realisation of a study about the French association « Bernard Gregory » : surveying, analysis of data and synthesis

12/2005 –03/2006 Internship at the French Army Staff
Have been in charge of sociological studies about the French militaries

SKILLS :

Computer: Windows, Linux, Internet, Word, Excel, Power Point and statistical softwares (SPSS, SPAD, Tosmana…)
Languages: Good working knowledge of English
Basic grounding of German

PERSONAL :

Interests: Reading : literature, philosophy and social sciences
Computer : internet, video games
Travel : Stayed in USA for one month and realised lots of travels in Europe and northern Africa
Sport : Swimming, cycling


Désolé pour la mise en page, j'ai fait un copié collé et je n'arrive à la corriger!
Merci par avance pour votre aide

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Réponse: Aide pour CV en anglais de gingernut, postée le 09-10-2008 à 14:17:11 (S | E)
Not knowing exactly what you've done, I've amended your CV as follows. Hope this helps.

WORK EXPERIENCE:

02/2007 – 05/2007 Internship with the French Army Staff
Responsible for sociological studies about the French military

10/2006 – 12/2006 Internship at “Clients et relation”, a Parisian audit firm
Produced a study about the French association “Bernard Gregory”. This involved the surveying, analysis and synthesis of data

12/2005 –03/2006 Internship with the French Army Staff
Responsible for sociological studies about the French military

SKILLS:

Computer: Proficient pc and keyboard skills including knowledge of the following products: Windows, Linux, Internet, Word, Excel, Power Point and statistical software (SPSS, SPAD, Tosmana)
Languages: Good working knowledge of English
Basic grounding in German

PERSONAL:

Interests: Reading: literature, philosophy and social sciences
Computer: internet, video games
Travel: Stayed in USA for one month and have travelled extensively in Europe and northern Africa
Sport: Swimming, cycling

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Réponse: Aide pour CV en anglais de nicbout, postée le 09-10-2008 à 15:16:17 (S | E)
Thank you very much!

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