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Correction /Tom's new idea
Message de liylie posté le 01-03-2009 à 01:03:34 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir!
J'ai un devoir à faire et je dois répondre à des questions sur un texte; donc je voudrais que vous corrigiez mes réponses ainsi que mes expressions qui à mon avis ne sont pas très anglaises!
voici mes questions:
1.What is Tom's new idea?
Tom's new idea is to form a band of robbers who will call(appelerons)Tom's Sawyer's Gang. This band has his proper rules theirs that they are due to respect.
2.What do you have to do to join the band?
To join the band, it's about "de tout" a ritual. In fact,he must swear in and to write his name in the blood for proof that he is a member of the gang. Then he mustn't divulge the secrets of the band for "y" to stay, in the same way as if anybody done anything to any boy in the band, whichever boy of the band he must(devra) kill this person as well as his family and he mustn't eat, sleep till he had killed them and hacked a cross in their breats, which was the sign of the band.
Voilà mes premières réponses ;j'espère que vous pourrez les corriger ainsi que les suivantes que j'enverrai plus tard.
Thanks et à bientôt!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-03-2009 07:56
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Message de liylie posté le 01-03-2009 à 01:03:34 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir!
J'ai un devoir à faire et je dois répondre à des questions sur un texte; donc je voudrais que vous corrigiez mes réponses ainsi que mes expressions qui à mon avis ne sont pas très anglaises!
voici mes questions:
1.What is Tom's new idea?
Tom's new idea is to form a band of robbers who will call(appelerons)Tom's Sawyer's Gang. This band has his proper rules theirs that they are due to respect.
2.What do you have to do to join the band?
To join the band, it's about "de tout" a ritual. In fact,he must swear in and to write his name in the blood for proof that he is a member of the gang. Then he mustn't divulge the secrets of the band for "y" to stay, in the same way as if anybody done anything to any boy in the band, whichever boy of the band he must(devra) kill this person as well as his family and he mustn't eat, sleep till he had killed them and hacked a cross in their breats, which was the sign of the band.
Voilà mes premières réponses ;j'espère que vous pourrez les corriger ainsi que les suivantes que j'enverrai plus tard.
Thanks et à bientôt!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-03-2009 07:56
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Réponse: Correction /Tom's new idea de linsey34, postée le 01-03-2009 à 10:05:53 (S | E)
Dear Liylie,
Tom's new idea is to form a band of robbers who will call(appelerons)Tom's Sawyer's Gang.
"qui s'appeleront": who will be called
his proper rules: its own rules
theirs that they are due to respect.
What do you mean here??
it's about "de tout" a ritual.
C'est quoi la phrase en français??
he must swear in and
for "y"
??
as if anybody done anything
temps du verbe ??
whichever boy of the band he must(devra) kill
he will have to kill
he mustn't eat,
he won't be able to eat...
Réponse: Correction /Tom's new idea de liylie, postée le 01-03-2009 à 18:12:16 (S | E)
Bonjour!
Merci de m'avoir corriger! j'éspère que vous pourrez encore car j'ai d'autres questions auquels je voudriez que vous me corrigiez! Si j'ai traduis en francais quelque fois c'est pour montrer ce que j'ai voulu dire car à mon avis ce n'est pas la meme expression en français et en anglais.
1.What is Tom's new idea?
Tom's new idea is to form a band of robbers who will be call(s'appellera)Tom's Sawyer's Gang. This band has its own rules.
2.What do you have to do to join the band?
first of all to join(pour rejoindre) the band, you must respect the rules imposed to the band. In fact, you must take oath and write your name in blood to proof(pour prouver) that you are a member of the band. Then, you musn't disclove the gang's secrets otherwise you are killed, burned, you has(tu as) a curse and your family must be killed what implicate to have a family. Just as, if anybody does (fait) to any boy in the band, a boy gang(un garçon de la bande) must kill taht person as well as his family. More he can't sleep, eat before to have killed them and hacked a cross in their chest which the sign of the gang. Lastly, a person who doesn't belong to the band can't use the mark otherwise he is sued(sinon il est poursuivi en justice) and if he starts again he must be killed.
The gang's rules(les règles du gang) are very stricts and dangerous because there is a register who turns(qui tourne)around of the death.
4.Say where Tom drew his inspiration from.
Tom drew his inspiration from the books like robber-books, pirate-books and of course of his own head.
5.What is the problem with Huck Finn? How does he solve it?
The trouble with Huck Finn, it's that he hasn't got family(il n'a pas de famille)whereas to integrate(pour integrer) the group he needs to have(on doit avoir) a family, or somebody to kill as he is write(comme il est ecrit) in the oath otherwise he can't be a member of the band. However, Finn has a father but he is few present(peu present) because he drinks a lot so he very rarely see him(il le voit très rarement). that way(ainsi) to solve this problem, Huck Finn suggest Miss Watson in exchange for his father to have(pour avoir)somebody to kill.
8.Describe and explain Tom Baines' behaviour.
While Tom slept(dormait) we have him to wake(on l'a reveille)he was afraid, cried and he wanted to go home likewise he didn't want to become a robber. then, others(les autres)laughed at him and L'ON called cry-baby, what him drove crazy( ce qui l'a rendu fou). Tom Barnes' behaviour is childish because he would like to tell all the gang's secrets(les secrets du gang) and for calm down him(pour le calmer)Tom must give him(doit lui donner) five cents.
Voici mes questions, j'espere que vous pourrez me corrigez et coriger aussi mes fautes de syntaxe, la place des adjectifs avec qui j'ai vraiment du mal, les temps verbaux et leurs accords.N'hesitez pas surtout à changer les expression si cela ne se dit pas en anglais.
Merci de votre aide et à bientot.
Réponse: Correction /Tom's new idea de linsey34, postée le 01-03-2009 à 21:52:13 (S | E)
Tom's new idea is to form a band of robbers who will be called(s'appellera)Tom's Sawyer's Gang. This band has its own rules.
write your name in blood to proof(pour prouver)
verbe = proove
you musn't disclove
à l'orthographe de mustn'tyou has(tu as) a curse and your family must be killed what implicate to have a family.
You are cursed
your family will be killed
what implies you have a family
Just as, if anybody does (fait) to any boy in the band, a boy gang(un garçon de la bande) must kill taht person as well as his family.
Désolée mais je ne comprends pas le sens de cette phrase
More he can't sleep
Moreover
before to have killed them
as long as he hasn't killed them
which is the sign of the gang.
The gang's rules(les règles du gang) are very stricts and dangerous because there is a register who which turns(qui tourne)around
and of course of his own head.
from
The trouble with Huck Finn, it's is that he hasn't got any family
as he is write(comme il est ecrit) in the oath
as it is written in the oath
he is few hardly present(peu present) because he drinks a lot so he very rarely sees him(il le voit très rarement).
In that way(ainsi)
Huck Finn suggests Miss Watson in exchange for his father to have(pour avoir)somebody to kill.
While Tom slept was sleeping(dormait) we have him to wake he was waken up(on l'a reveille)he was afraid, cried and he wanted to go home likewise he didn't want to become a robber. then, others(les autres)laughed at him and L'ON called him cry-baby, what him drove drove him crazy( ce qui l'a rendu fou). Tom Barnes' behaviour is childish because he would like to tell all the gang's secrets(les secrets du gang) and for calm down him to calm him down(pour le calmer)Tom must give him(doit lui donner) five cents.
Réponse: Correction /Tom's new idea de liylie, postée le 02-03-2009 à 23:40:38 (S | E)
Bonsoir!
Je vous remercie pour votre aide, cela m'a beaucoup fait plaisir! j'aurais encore quelques corrections à vous demander si cela n'est pas trop vous demander!
6.What are the goals of the gang? What are they ready to do reach their goals?
The goals of the gang are to robber and to kill, but they doesn't want to robber cattle or houses because it's burglary whereas they are highwaymen. To reach(pour atteindre) their goals, the band is ready to kill(est pret à tuer) the people for take(pour prendre) their watches and money.
Voila ma question merci , j'espere que vous pourrez la corriger!
A bientot!
Réponse: Correction /Tom's new idea de linsey34, postée le 03-03-2009 à 18:06:48 (S | E)
Dear liylie,
6.What are the goals of the gang?
What are they ready to do so as to reach their goals?
The goals of the gang are to rob
to take = pour prendre
traduction de "pour" = to + verbe / for + nom
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