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The life of Peter Einstein (1)

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The life of Peter Einstein
Message de lilipomme04 posté le 08-04-2009 à 14:38:55 (S | E | F)


Hello,

I would like to know if my text is correct. for your help


Peter Einstein was born the first of January 1951 in Brightown, in the north of England. He had a large family with four little sisters and three little brothers. Unfortunately, his family was as big as poor and they all lived in a miserable little house. He had to go to school by foot every day because his parents didn't have any car. The school was very far and he was often late. Then, the teacher hit his fingers with a stick because the rules were very strict.
But, Peter loved going to school. He was especially fond of mathematics and sciences. He also loved Sarah a school friend. They spent a lot of time together during their free time. But, one day, his parents died in an accident and he had to leave school to take care of his brothers and sisters. And, into the bargain, Sarah's parents didn't want that Peter see Sarah for he was poor. So, Peter decided to become rich so as to marry Sarah. During one year, he worked all nights and, a morning after all those hours of work, he found a new important mathematic formula that nowadays is very famous. Thanks to this discovery, he won the Nobel price and became rich. So, he could marry Sarah and they had a lot of children.


Réponse: The life of Peter Einstein de jean31, postée le 08-04-2009 à 15:06:34 (S | E)
Hello,

Peter Einstein was born on January 1, 1951 in Brightown, in the north of England. He was a member of a large family with four little sisters and three little brothers. Unfortunately, his family was as big as it was poor and they all lived in a miserable little house. He had to walk to school every day because his parents didn't have any car. The school was very far and he was often late. Then, the teacher hit his fingers with a stick because the rules were very strict.
But, Peter loved going to school. He was especially fond of mathematics and sciences. He also loved Sarah, a school friend. They spent a lot of time together during their free time. But, one day, his parents died in an accident and he had to leave school to take care of his brothers and sisters. And, to crown it all, Sarah's parents didn't want Peter to see Sarah for he was poor. So, Peter decided to become rich so as to marry Sarah. During one year, he worked all nights and, one morning after all those hours of work, he found a new important mathematical formula that is very famous nowadays. Thanks to this discovery, he won the Nobel prize and became rich. So, he could marry Sarah and they had a lot of children.

Nice story and good job!





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