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Message de milip posté le 14-05-2010 à 18:51:08 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai une rédaction à faire en anglais sur la nourriture à emporter, les fast food, etc...
" Takeaway food is becoming more and more popular. Account for this evolution in contemporary society."
J'aurais besoin d'une correction si possible !
Voilà mon travail :
These last years were marked in France by the americanization of lifestyles with as main example the disproportionate increase of the number of fast foods. Indeed, takeway food is becoming more and more popular.
Nowadays we devote less and less time to eating in our society. Thst's why when we leave our work, we are very satisfied to eat at a fast food. It is a small break which allows us to relax. It allows us to eat as quickly as possible to be back on time. Takeway food was very simple like a sandwich with ham and butter or salad.
But since one certain time, this type of catering has developped. Indeed, new restaurants opened their doors and propose a good and healthy food at moderate prices. They have allowed to change the image of takeaway food with the intention of getting out of commonness.
There are various takeway food out lets to answer at the custommer request. There is for everything tastes : sandwiches, pizzas, pasta, Chinese restaurant...
The advantages of takeaway food is that it allow everybody to eat cheaply and quickly.
More than a alimentation, fast food is away of life which consists of pressins people who don't want to lose their time around a table. Fast food attracts unmistakably young people as well as old people, but we shouldn't lose sight of the fact that eat in family and by taking his time is better. For that purpose, companies should not leave not leave to more time to his employees to eat ?
Je m'excuse d'avance pour mes nombreuses fautes. Toute recommandation est la bienvenue.
Merci.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-05-2010 18:53
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Message de milip posté le 14-05-2010 à 18:51:08 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai une rédaction à faire en anglais sur la nourriture à emporter, les fast food, etc...
" Takeaway food is becoming more and more popular. Account for this evolution in contemporary society."
J'aurais besoin d'une correction si possible !
Voilà mon travail :
These last years were marked in France by the americanization of lifestyles with as main example the disproportionate increase of the number of fast foods. Indeed, takeway food is becoming more and more popular.
Nowadays we devote less and less time to eating in our society. Thst's why when we leave our work, we are very satisfied to eat at a fast food. It is a small break which allows us to relax. It allows us to eat as quickly as possible to be back on time. Takeway food was very simple like a sandwich with ham and butter or salad.
But since one certain time, this type of catering has developped. Indeed, new restaurants opened their doors and propose a good and healthy food at moderate prices. They have allowed to change the image of takeaway food with the intention of getting out of commonness.
There are various takeway food out lets to answer at the custommer request. There is for everything tastes : sandwiches, pizzas, pasta, Chinese restaurant...
The advantages of takeaway food is that it allow everybody to eat cheaply and quickly.
More than a alimentation, fast food is away of life which consists of pressins people who don't want to lose their time around a table. Fast food attracts unmistakably young people as well as old people, but we shouldn't lose sight of the fact that eat in family and by taking his time is better. For that purpose, companies should not leave not leave to more time to his employees to eat ?
Je m'excuse d'avance pour mes nombreuses fautes. Toute recommandation est la bienvenue.
Merci.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-05-2010 18:53
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Réponse: Takeaway food/correction de milip, postée le 14-05-2010 à 20:36:03 (S | E)
Personne ne peut m'aider ?
Réponse: Takeaway food/correction de notrepere, postée le 15-05-2010 à 05:30:00 (S | E)
Hello! J'arrive!These last years were marked in France by the americanization of lifestyles with, as main example, the disproportionate increase of the number of fast foods.
Nowadays we devote less and less time to eating in our society. Thst's why when we leave our work, we are very satisfied (ce n'est pas le mot préféré) to eat at a fast food [il manque un mot].
It is a small (Quelle est la différence entre small and short? Quel est le mot préféré?) break which allows us to relax. It allows us to eat as quickly as possible to be back on time. Takeway food was (pourquoi au passé?) very simple like a sandwich with ham and butter or salad.
But since one certain time, this type of catering has developped. (Je ne comprends pas cette phrase)
Indeed, new restaurants opened (simple past? Is the action ongoing or has the trend stopped?) their doors and propose a good and healthy food at moderate prices. They have allowed to change the image of takeaway food with the intention of getting out of commonness. (This sentence needs more work)
There are various takeway food out lets (un mot pas deux) to answer at the custommer request. There is [il manque un mot] for everything (wrong word) tastes : sandwiches, pizzas, pasta, Chinese restaurant...
The advantages of takeaway food is (accord, quel est le sujet? singulier ou pluriel?) that it allow (accord) everybody to eat cheaply and quickly.
More than a (ce petit 'a', qu'est-ce qu'il manque?) alimentation, fast food is away of life which consists of pressins
people who don't want to lose their time (Quelle est la différence entre lose their time et spend their time ou take time?) around a table. Fast food attracts unmistakably (l'adjectif avant le verbe) young people as well as old people, but we shouldn't lose sight of the fact that eat in family (mal dit) and by taking his time is better. For that purpose, companies should not leave not leave to more time to his employees to eat ? For this reason, shouldn't companies leave more time for their employees to eat? (Je crois que oui)
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Modifié par notrepere le 15-05-2010 05:38
Réponse: Takeaway food/correction de milip, postée le 16-05-2010 à 14:24:56 (S | E)
Je n'arrive pas à tous corriger... Voilà ce que ça donne :
These last years were marked in France by the americanization of lifestyles with, as main example, the disproportionate increase of the number of fast foods.
Nowadays we devote less and less time to eating in our society. Thast's why when we leave our work, we are very happy to eat at a fast food ( Je ne vois pas quel mot il manque ? )
It is a short break which allows us to relax. It allows us to eat as quickly as possible to be back on time. Takeway food was (j'ai mis cette phrase au passé parce que je voulais dire qu'avant les plats de fast foods étaient tres simple, ça ne convient pas ? ) very simple like a sandwich with ham and butter or salad.
But since one certain time, this type of catering has developped. (Je voulais dire que depuis un certain temps, ce type de restauration c'est développé )
Indeed, new restaurants open their doors and propose a good and healthy food at moderate prices. They have allowed to change the image of takeaway food with the intention of getting out of commonness. (Je ne vois pas quel mot ajouté ?)
There are various takeway food outlets to answer at the custommer request. There is [il manque un mot ?] for all tastes : sandwiches, pizzas, pasta, Chinese restaurant...
The advantages of takeaway food are that it allows everybody to eat cheaply and quickly.
More than an alimentation, fast food is away of life which consists of pressins people who don't want spend their time around a table.
Fast food unmistakably attracts young people as well as old people, but we shouldn't lose sight of the fact that eat with the family and by taking his time is better.For this reason, shouldn't companies leave more time for their employees to eat?
En tout cas, merci beaucoup pour votre aide !
Réponse: Takeaway food/correction de notrepere, postée le 16-05-2010 à 18:17:40 (S | E)
Hello!These last years were marked in France by the Americanization of lifestyles with, as main example, the disproportionate increase of the number of fast foods.
Nowadays we devote less and less time to eating in our society. Thast's (orthographe) why when we leave our work, we are very happy to eat at a fast food [restaurant, outlet, or establishment].
It is a short break which allows us to relax. It allows us to eat as quickly as possible to be back on time. Takeway food was is very simple [like] [such as] a sandwich with ham and butter or salad.
But since one certain time, this type of catering has developped. (Je voulais dire que depuis un certain temps, ce type de restauration c'est développé )
Indeed, new restaurants are opening their doors and proposing a good and healthy food at moderate prices. They have allowed to change the image of takeaway food with the intention of getting out of commonness. (Dites-moi ce que vous voulez dire en français)
There are various takeway food outlets [to answer at the custommer (orthographe) request] (Do you mean using the telephone to place an order?). There is [something] for all tastes : sandwiches, pizzas, pasta, Chinese restaurant...
The advantages of takeaway food are that it allows everybody to eat cheaply and quickly.
More than an alimentation, fast food is a way of life which consists of pressins people who don't want spend their time around a table.
Fast food unmistakably attracts young people as well as old people, but we shouldn't lose sight of the fact that eating with the family and
En tout cas, merci beaucoup pour votre aide!
De rien.
Amicalement
Réponse: Takeaway food/correction de milip, postée le 16-05-2010 à 21:20:42 (S | E)
Merci encore pour ces corrections !
* Customer
*They have allowed to change the image of takeaway food with the intention of getting out of commonness.
Je voulais dire : "ils ont permis de changer l'image de la nourriture à emporter en sortant du commun ". Je ne sais meme pas si ça veut dire vraiment quelque chose en français !
* Pressing people
* Je ne comprend pas pourquoi vous parlez d'une commande par téléphone ? "answer" et/ou " request" correspondent à une commande par téléphone ? Je dois faire complètement fausse route !
Merci
Réponse: Takeaway food/correction de notrepere, postée le 17-05-2010 à 00:08:26 (S | E)
Hello:They have allowed to change the image of takeaway food with the intention of getting out of commonness.
There are various takeway food outlets [to answer at the custommer (orthographe) request] (Do you mean using the telephone to place an order?). There is [something] for all tastes : sandwiches, pizzas, pasta, Chinese restaurant...
I think what you mean is: The image of takeaway food has changed because people get bored with their food choices and there are so many different types from which to choose and to suit all tastes such as: sandwiches, pizzas, Chinese restaurants...
Réponse: Takeaway food/correction de may, postée le 17-05-2010 à 12:25:48 (S | E)
Bonjour,
There are various takeway food outlets to answer the custommer request. There is for everything tastes : sandwiches, pizzas, pasta, Chinese restaurant...
The advantages of takeaway food is that it allow everybody to eat cheaply and quickly.
I think the suitable word is: to respond to
Amicalement
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