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Message de kamilya4004 posté le 05-11-2010 à 10:46:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
j'ai un exercice à corriger;
merci de m'aider svp s'il vous plaît; c'est urgent ,
voici le sujet :
You are staying with a host family In paris for two weeks.you have juste received an e-email from a friend. Answer It! (100 words)
E-mail from a friend:
Hi! So ,how are you? Do you like It In paris? Sounds so exciting! Anyway ,I want to know everything:please tell me about the journey ,the weather, your host family(ages/jobs),What you did yesterday ,your plans for tomorrow...bye now! Jim
Voici ma réponse:
Hello
I am very well,I have fun well In this town ,I make height of things In my day: I discover this beautiful town,It is paysage,cooking ,Everything pleases me.
It make very well,I am at a host family who are king,a young couple of thirty years ,them work in the education.
Today we have decide to visit a museum,and tomorrow, we are going to see some monument and to pass after noon in the paris beach
bye now!
(pardon s'il y a des fautes d'orthographe)
maria
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-11-2010 10:55
Message de kamilya4004 posté le 05-11-2010 à 10:46:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
j'ai un exercice à corriger;
merci de m'aider
voici le sujet :
You are staying with a host family In paris for two weeks.you have juste received an e-email from a friend. Answer It! (100 words)
E-mail from a friend:
Hi! So ,how are you? Do you like It In paris? Sounds so exciting! Anyway ,I want to know everything:please tell me about the journey ,the weather, your host family(ages/jobs),What you did yesterday ,your plans for tomorrow...bye now! Jim
Voici ma réponse:
Hello
I am very well,I have fun well In this town ,I make height of things In my day: I discover this beautiful town,It is paysage,cooking ,Everything pleases me.
It make very well,I am at a host family who are king,a young couple of thirty years ,them work in the education.
Today we have decide to visit a museum,and tomorrow, we are going to see some monument and to pass after noon in the paris beach
bye now!
(pardon s'il y a des fautes d'orthographe)
maria
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-11-2010 10:55
Réponse: Correction / e-mail de mon ami de kamilya4004, postée le 06-11-2010 à 16:53:06 (S | E)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-11-2010 18:44
Réponse: Correction / e-mail de mon ami de notrepere, postée le 06-11-2010 à 19:04:44 (S | E)
Hello! You are staying with a host family In paris for two weeks. you have just received an e-email from a friend. Answer It! (100 words)
E-mail from a friend:
Hi! So, how are you? Do you like It In paris? Sounds so exciting! Anyway, I want to know everything: please tell me about the journey, the weather, your host family(ages/jobs), what you did yesterday, your plans for tomorrow...bye now! Jim
Voici ma réponse:
Hello
I am very well, [point ou il faut une préposition: 'and'] I have (présent continu) fun well [mal dit] In this town. I make height of things [ça ne veut rien dire] In my day: I discover [présent continu] this beautiful town,It is paysage,cooking , [Je ne comprends pas] Everything pleases me.
It make very well [ça ne veut rien dire], I am at (staying with) a host family who are king [orthographe], a young couple of thirty years. them (They) work in
Today we have decide [temps: au passé] to visit a museum, and tomorrow, we are going to see some monument [après 'some' on utilise un mot au pluriel] and to pass [mauvaise traduction du mot 'passer'] the afternoon in [mauvaise préposition] the (a) paris beach.
Bye now!
Cordialement
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Modifié par notrepere le 06-11-2010 19:06
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-11-2010 21:52
peet370 a supprimé son post qui était erroné.
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Modifié par notrepere le 06-11-2010 22:07
Réponse: Correction / e-mail de mon ami de kamilya4004, postée le 07-11-2010 à 18:58:22 (S | E)
ok merci notrepere
Réponse: Correction / e-mail de mon ami de anonyme, postée le 08-11-2010 à 08:11:50 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Les consignes sont faites pour être respectées ! La vôtre -> 100 words
Votre devoir -> 84 mots (selon la fonction Statistiques de mon Mac ...)
D'accord, je "pinaille" (comme dit ma descendance), mais ..
Cordialement.
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Modifié par anonyme le 08-11-2010 08:12
Réponse: Correction / e-mail de mon ami de kamilya4004, postée le 11-11-2010 à 19:57:44 (S | E)
je vous remercie
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