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Message de zawa posté le 22-12-2010 à 19:30:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois présenter le métier que j'aimerais faire plus tard.
Voilà mon petit paragraphe.
Qu'en pensez-vous ? Quelqu'un pourrait-il me dire si la syntaxe des phrases est bonne s'il vous plaît ?
D'avance ! The job which I am going to present to you is a doctor in the armed. He can have various ranks, as captain, commanding, lieutenant-colonel, colonel, general.
The walk to follow this career is simple. Send his file to THE ESSA and present a competition. I believe that one takes place in Montpelier. This competition requires to be good in Math, Physics, Chemistry and Bio. It is also necessary to have physical qualities and good contact with people.
The health service of the armies has to assure in the first place the care the servicemen in operations. It also looks after the war veterans, after the redeemed servicemen and after the members of the families of the servicemen. The Health service of the armies also participates in the scientific and medical research. He can exercise humanitarian missions.
As doctor in the armed, we can be brought to meet other doctors in hospitals, or to look after foreign populations on the ground. English is a universal language which will thus facilitate these exchanges.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-12-2010 21:30
Réponse: What would you become ? de peet370, postée le 22-12-2010 à 22:59:03 (S | E)
Bonsoir Zawa,
The job which I am going to present to you is a doctor in the armed (Il ne sagit pas du verbe, mais du nom féminin) . He can (Il faut, ici, utiliser un modau de probabilité) have various ranks, as captain, commanding, lieutenant-colonel, colonel, general.
The walk to follow (Il manque une préposition) this career is simple. Send his file to THE ESSA and present a competition. I believe that one takes place in Montpelier. This competition requires to be good in Math, Physics, Chemistry and Bio. It is also necessary to have physical qualities and good contact with people.
The health service of the armies has (L'auxiliaire n'est pas correctement conjugué) to assure in the first place the care the servicemen in operations. It also looks after the war veterans, after the redeemed servicemen and after the members of the families of the servicemen. The Health service of the armies also participates in the scientific and medical research. He can exercise humanitarian missions.
As doctor in the armed, we can be brought to meet other doctors in hospitals, or to look after foreign populations on the ground. English is a universal language which will thus facilitate these exchanges.
Voilà je pense que c'est corrigé. Passez un bon Noël 
Peet370
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Modifié par peet370 le 22-12-2010 23:04
Réponse: What would you become ? de zawa, postée le 23-12-2010 à 13:54:49 (S | E)
The job which I am going to present to you is a doctor in the army . He could have various ranks, as captain, commanding, lieutenant-colonel, colonel, general.
The walk to follow in this career is simple. Send his file to THE ESSA and present a competition. I believe that one takes place in Montpelier. This competition requires to be good in Math, Physics, Chemistry and Bio. It is also necessary to have physical qualities and good contact with people.
The health service of the armies had to assure in the first place the care the servicemen in operations. It also looks after the war veterans, after the redeemed servicemen and after the members of the families of the servicemen. The Health service of the armies also participates in the scientific and medical research. He can exercise humanitarian missions.
As doctor in the army, we can be brought to meet other doctors in hospitals, or to look after foreign populations on the ground. English is a universal language which will thus facilitate these exchanges.
Voilà
Merci beaucoup .
Et bonnes fêtes de fin d'année
Réponse: What would you become ? de headway, postée le 23-12-2010 à 14:03:45 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Just to say that a daughter of mine is a Med student in the Military. Check for information on ESSA Site before you write your essay:
Lien Internet
Hope this helps.
Headway.
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