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Message de imane_16 posté le 25-01-2011 à 16:09:49 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
Could you please help me to correct these sentences and give me the explanations:

- Jammal is a little strong.
jamaal isn't very stronger

- Nabil is quite timid.
Nabil is very timid

-Jammal prefers basketball than the internet
jammal prefers basketball more than internet

- Nabil likes very much web chats.
Nabil adores web chats

- jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a personal computer
jammal doesn't have a cell phone neither a personal computer

- Nabil doesn't have a lot of friends.
nabil doesn't have lots of friends

- Jammal can drive, but Nabil not.
jammal can drive,instead of nabil

- However Nabil is shy, he is friendly.
although nabil is shy, he is friendly

- jamaal doesn't concentrate a lot on his schoolwork.
jamaal doesn't care about his schoolwork

- Nabil works hard for to get good marks.
Nabil works hard to get good marks

_ what is your opinion about children who take responsibility at a young age ?

my anwser : In my opinion, it's depent of the nature of this responsability, obviously,we should learn our children how to take their own responsibility in a sample thing like being tidiness,keeping toys and respect the rules, but living them alone and oblige them to take care of the whole house isn't a good thing,
thank you in advance

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Edited by imane_16 on 25-01-2011 16:50


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Edited by lucile83 on 25-01-2011 19:17
titre + forum + mise en page pour que ce soit lisible



Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 25-01-2011 à 17:36:46 (S | E)
Hi there,

what is your try?



Réponse: Correction/ sentences de imane_16, postée le 25-01-2011 à 18:52:19 (S | E)
Hello,
I have written my answers

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Edited by lucile83 on 25-01-2011 19:21
Ce n'était pas clair du tout! la présentation est importante.





Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 26-01-2011 à 09:17:04 (S | E)
Bonjour,

On vous demande de repérer les erreurs et de les corriger.

"- Jammal is a little strong.
jamaal isn't very stronger: faux

- Nabil is quite (cherchez un autre adverbe)timid.
Nabil is very timid

-Jammal prefers basketball than the internet
jammal prefers basketball more than internet

- Nabil likes very much (en fin de phrase)web chats.
Nabil adores web chats

- jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a (Il n'a aucun portable) personal computer
jammal doesn't have a cell phone neither a personal computer

- Nabil doesn't have a lot of friends.
nabil doesn't have lots of friends

- Jammal can drive, but Nabil not.
jammal can drive,instead of nabil

- However Nabil is shy (il faut inverser: adjectif/sujet/verbe), he is friendly.
although nabil is shy, he is friendly

- jamaal doesn't concentrate a lot on his schoolwork.
jamaal doesn't care about his schoolwork(On ne dit pas qu'il n'a rien à fiche de ses devoirs, on dit qu'il n'est pas concentré)

- Nabil works hard for to get good marks.
Nabil works hard to get good marks" Juste


Je vais revenir quand je serai un peu mieux réveillée.

Cordialement.

Headway.




Réponse: Correction/ sentences de imane_16, postée le 26-01-2011 à 13:55:34 (S | E)
bonjour,

-jamal isn't very strong.

-Nabil is very timid

-jammal prefers basketball to the internet

-Nabil likes web chats very much.

-jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a personal computer

- nabil doesn't have lots of friends

-jamal can drive, but nabil can't

-however shy is Nabil, he is friendly

- jamaal doesn't concentrate very much in his schoolwork


merci infiniment pour votre aide



Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 26-01-2011 à 14:09:54 (S | E)
Re-bonjour,

je vous aide un peu:

To prefer something to.

However tired I am, I'm willing to help you...

À vous d'apporter les corrections.

Headway.



Réponse: Correction/ sentences de imane_16, postée le 26-01-2011 à 21:01:26 (S | E)
good afternoon,

-jamal isn't very strong.

-Nabil is very timid

-jammal prefers basketball to the internet

-Nabil likes web chats very much.

-jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a personal computer

- nabil doesn't have lots of friends

-jamal can drive, but nabil can't

-however shy is Nabil, he is friendly

- jamaal doesn't concentrate very much in his schoolwork


it's ok now ?

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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-01-2011 21:03
Couleur du texte.


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Modifié par imane_16 le 26-01-2011 21:06



Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 26-01-2011 à 21:23:37 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

"jamal isn't very strong... Pourquoi "is" devient "isn't"?

-Nabil is very timid.. assez/plutôt

-jammal prefers basketball to the internet ok

-Nabil likes web chats very much.ok

-jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a personal computer

- nabil doesn't have lots of friends

-jamal can drive, but nabil can't...ok

-however shy is Nabil, he is friendly...However+ adjectif+sujet+verb

- jamaal doesn't concentrate very much in his schoolwork




Réponse: Correction/ sentences de may, postée le 27-01-2011 à 01:00:07 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

I correct the last part of yours


what is your opinion about children who take responsibility at a young age ?

my anwser : In my opinion, it 's depent also accorder avec sujet of the nature of this responsability,commencer une autre phrase obviously,we should learn le verbe est enseigner our children how to take their own responsibility in, autre prép. a sample thing like as est mieux being tidiness,keeping toys and respect en ing the rules, but living them alone and oblige (Ing) choisir un autre verbe them to take care of the whole house isn't (I prefer is not) a good thing,

Hope this helps,

About previous sentences, remember to capitalize all personal names please!



Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 29-01-2011 à 17:26:17 (S | E)
Bonjour,

- Nabil doesn't have a lot of friends.
nabil doesn't have lots of friends

Ici, la phrase est négative, "many" irait mieux.




Réponse: Correction/ sentences de imane_16, postée le 31-01-2011 à 16:25:24 (S | E)
merci bien pour votre aide



Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 31-01-2011 à 17:51:06 (S | E)
Bonjour,

Il faut corriger cette phrase:

"- jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a (Il n'a aucun portable) personal computer
jammal doesn't have a cell phone neither a personal computer"


Headway.





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