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Correction/The USA
Message de jeje68130 posté le 20-04-2011 à 21:41:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai besoin d'aide s'il vous plaît pour corriger quelques phrases pour mon devoir.
Pour mon introduction :
My presentation talking about the USA. The United States of America is situated in the continent of North America. The United States of America was founded in 1776. The USA surface has an area of 9,629,048 km² and there are 300,112,631 inhabitants. First, I will talk about the history and the meaninf of the flag of America. Then I will present the capital of the united States and the government of the USA. Finally I talking about the culture of the USA and the Inventions.
Pour ma Conclusion
New York and Los Angles are American cities that most people will dream of visiting.Down there and everything seems fine but he can not forget that the U.S. is drowning indebt
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-04-2011 21:57
Message de jeje68130 posté le 20-04-2011 à 21:41:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai besoin d'aide s'il vous plaît pour corriger quelques phrases pour mon devoir.
Pour mon introduction :
My presentation talking about the USA. The United States of America is situated in the continent of North America. The United States of America was founded in 1776. The USA surface has an area of 9,629,048 km² and there are 300,112,631 inhabitants. First, I will talk about the history and the meaninf of the flag of America. Then I will present the capital of the united States and the government of the USA. Finally I talking about the culture of the USA and the Inventions.
Pour ma Conclusion
New York and Los Angles are American cities that most people will dream of visiting.Down there and everything seems fine but he can not forget that the U.S. is drowning indebt
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-04-2011 21:57
Réponse: Correction/The USA de notrepere, postée le 21-04-2011 à 07:07:37 (S | E)
HelloMy presentation talking (1) about the USA. The United States of America is situated in (2) the continent of North America (3). The United States of America was founded (4) in 1776. The USA surface has an area of 9,629,048 km² and there are 300,112,631 inhabitants. First, I will talk about the history and the meaninf of the flag of America (3). Then I will present (5) the capital of the united States and
Pour ma Conclusion
New York and Los Angeles are American cities that most people will (7) dream of visiting. Down there and (6) everything seems fine but
(1) verbe "be" present tense va mieux
(2) mauvaise préposition; comme 'sur' en français
(3) ordre des mots ; utilisez 'America' en forme d'un adjectif = American
(4) un autre verbe ; en général, un pays n'est pas "founded"
(5) verbe à particule vaut mieux; comme 'parler de' en français
(6) mots superflus
(7) au passé
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Modifié par notrepere le 21-04-2011 07:09
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