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Correction /lettre aux parents

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Correction /lettre aux parents
Message de maajda1 posté le 21-10-2011 à 19:58:21 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,

j'aimerais bien que vous m'aidiez pour mon exercice et que vous corrigiez les fautes de ma lettre svp s'il vous plaît.
Merci beaucoup.

Hello my beloved parents!
I am writing this letter to tell you that I am arrived for a month. I love the city, and the American spirit. I am now in a small apartment with a very nice roommate. She call'd Mary and we have the same interest: we love the two outputs, shopping, music and party! We created the decor aons two and it suits me completely! I also have a radio, so I am informed of any news. In addition there is a cinema close to home, I am so happy it allows me to go sometimes to relax after work. Indeed, I found a job! I like my job well, I work in a school: I watch the children. You remember how I love children? I loved taking care of little cousins ​​...
I really like here, and look forward to your visit although it is very expensive.

Big hugs!
Your daughter, Sophie

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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-10-2011 21:52


Réponse: Correction /lettre aux parents de notrepere, postée le 21-10-2011 à 22:58:19 (S | E)
Hello

Hello my beloved parents!
I am writing this letter to tell you that I am arrived for a month. I love the city, and the American spirit. I am now in a small apartment with a very nice roommate. She call'd (1) Mary and we have the same interests: we love the two outputs, shopping, music and parties! We created the decor aons two and it suits me completely! I also have a radio, so I am informed of any news. In addition, there is a cinema close to home, I am so happy it allows me to go sometimes to relax after work. Indeed, I found a job! I like my job well (2), I work in a school: I watch (3) the children. You remember how I love children? I loved taking care of my little cousins ​​...
I really like it here, and look forward to your visit although it is very expensive.

(1) On dirait: Her name is...
(2) mal dit
(3) Vous regardez les enfants ?



Réponse: Correction /lettre aux parents de maajda1, postée le 21-10-2011 à 23:17:53 (S | E)
Hello,

Hello my beloved parents!
I am writing this letter to tell you that I arrived for a month. I love the city, and the American spirit. I am now in a small apartment with a very nice roommate. Her name is Mary and we have the same interests: we love both, shopping, music and parties! We created the decor two (à deux) and it suits me completely! I also have a radio, so I am informed of any news. In addition, there is a cinema close to home, I am so happy it allows me to go sometimes to relax after work. Indeed, I found a job! I love my work, I work in a school: I keep the children. Do you remember how I love children? I loved taking care of my little cousins ​​...
I really like it here, and look forward to your visit although it is very expensive.

C'est ok maintenant ??
Merci pour votre réponse en tous cas

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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-10-2011 23:28



Réponse: Correction /lettre aux parents de notrepere, postée le 21-10-2011 à 23:38:16 (S | E)
Re-bonjour

I am writing this letter to tell you that I arrived for a month (1). I love the city, and the American spirit. I am now in a small apartment with a very nice roommate. Her name is Mary and we have the same interests: we love both (2), shopping, music and parties! We created the decor two (à deux) (3) and it suits me completely! I also have a radio, so I am informed of any news. In addition, there is a cinema close to home, I am so happy it which allows me a place to go sometimes to relax after work. Indeed (4), I found a job! I love my work, I work in a school: I keep (5) the children. Do you remember how I love children? I loved taking care of my little cousins ​​...
I really like it here, and look forward to your visit although it is very expensive.


(1) Vous voulez dire: I arrived a month ago -or- I have arrived for my one month stay?
(2) We both love
(3) together
(4) Also
(5) look after vaut mieux






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