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Message de rayane07 posté le 27-03-2012 à 20:38:40 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois passer à l'oral sur ce texte pouvez-vous me le corriger s'il vous plait?
Merci pour votre aide.
This text is an extract from the book "The mysteries of Udelpho" by Anne Radcliff. This text was published in 1795 in Italy.
The heroine of the text is Emily. She is a prisoner in the castle of Count Manfredi, and she is desperate waiting for her lover Valencourt saves her.
Sister Agnès came to help Emilie to go out of her prison.
Having run, sister agnès removes her hood. It was the count Monfredi.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2012 21:12
Message de rayane07 posté le 27-03-2012 à 20:38:40 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, je dois passer à l'oral sur ce texte pouvez-vous me le corriger s'il vous plait?
Merci pour votre aide.
This text is an extract from the book "The mysteries of Udelpho" by Anne Radcliff. This text was published in 1795 in Italy.
The heroine of the text is Emily. She is a prisoner in the castle of Count Manfredi, and she is desperate waiting for her lover Valencourt saves her.
Sister Agnès came to help Emilie to go out of her prison.
Having run, sister agnès removes her hood. It was the count Monfredi.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2012 21:12
Réponse: Correction/Running away de sherry48, postée le 27-03-2012 à 21:05:03 (S | E)
Hello rayane07.
Take a look at these sentences.
She is a prisoner in the castle of Count Manfredi, and she is desperate (adverb) waiting for her lover Valencourt saves (infinitive) her.
Sister Agnès came to help Emilie to go out of her prison.
Having run, Sister Agnès removes her hood. (This sentence could be clearer-did Sister Agnès remove her own hood?)
I hope this helps.
Sherry
Réponse: Correction/Running away de rayane07, postée le 27-03-2012 à 21:24:58 (S | E)
Pour la dernière phrase je voulais dire: "Après avoir couru, Soeur Agnès enleva sa capuche"
En anglais ça donne ça:
"After running, Sister Agnes took off his hood".
Est-ce correct?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2012 21:33
his hood
Réponse: Correction/Running away de sherry48, postée le 27-03-2012 à 21:48:17 (S | E)
Hello again.
Après avoir couru...if you include après and keep avoir as the gerund as you first had it, I think it will be better. You were right the first time with 'her' hood, unless you want to use the hood. Sherry
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Modifié par sherry48 le 27-03-2012 21:49
Réponse: Correction/Running away de notrepere, postée le 27-03-2012 à 22:31:07 (S | E)
HelloI thought she meant that she would take off Valencourt's hood?
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