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Our country/correction

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Our country/correction
Message de jvictor posté le 06-10-2012 à 12:25:07 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

Pourrier-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît?
Merci d'avance,

Why should we do anything for our country?

It is an obvious fact that we can all serve our country by working for it. Indeed, we all consume and thins we contribute to our country’s prosperity and well-being. However, in our globalized world we are face a problem for example the computer are manufacture in china, our cars are made in Germany... Why should we even try to do anything for our country?
It goes without saying that the state of the country reflects the production and consumption of goods and services and the supply of money. Also, the country's goal is tax cuts to stimulate the economy.
However, we live in globalized world. In consequently, the government has the difficulties. So everybody must do everything possible for help her country. But, unknowingly, we help our country for example: people that serves in the military and public service are doing for their country instead of asking what their country can do for them. And we help our country, when we pay our tax in country where we live. Our country we help every day. Indeed, when we walk we have a sidewalk, when we are sick we have social security and we have an education free. The country we help each minute. Knowing that in some country the social security doesn't exist, for example the U.S
Thus, we must understand that the country have need of we, the economists said that the government is an agent economic of "need". And we must remember that the government we help every day. Also, we must take with a pinch of salt each decision, because our decision may have serious repercussion our country

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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-10-2012 16:01


Réponse: Our country/correction de gerondif, postée le 06-10-2012 à 14:24:34 (S | E)
Bonjour,

j'ai l'impression que vous avez fait un bon texte français et que vous l'avez traduit un peu mot-à-mot, soit par vous même, soit avec l'aide d'un traducteur, parce que certaines structures francaises perdurent dans votre texte:
par exemple:
Le pays, nous l'aidons tous les jours: The country, we help everyday !! traduction trop littérale, cette forme d'insistance ne serait pas la même en anglais.
FT: français traduit

It is an obvious fact that we can all serve our country by working for it. Indeed, we all consume and thins(penser to think, pas de s avec we) we contribute to our country’s prosperity and well-being. However, in our globalized world we are face a(nous sommes face à?FT) problem for example the computer are manufacture in china, our cars are made in Germany... Why should we even try to do anything for our country?
It goes without saying that the state of the country reflects the production and consumption of goods and services and the supply of money. Also, the country's goal is tax cuts to stimulate the economy.
However, we live in ** globalized world. In consequently,(en conséquence ? FT) the government has the difficulties. So everybody must do everything possible for help her country. But, unknowingly, we help our country for example: people that serves in the military and public service are doing for their country instead of asking what their country can do for them. And we help our country, when we pay our tax in the country where we live. Our country we help every day.(FT) Indeed, when we walk we have a sidewalk, when we are sick we have social security and we have an education free(mal placé). The country we help each minute(FT). Knowing that in some country the social security doesn't exist, for example the U.S
Thus, we must understand that the country have need of we,(a besoin de nous, FT) the economists said that the government is an agent economic (ordre des mots)of "need". And we must remember that the government we help every day.(FT) Also, we must take with a pinch of salt each decision(ordre des mots à la française), because our decision may have serious repercussion (pluriel) for our country.




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