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Message de overwix posté le 01-04-2013 à 12:33:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît en corrigeant l'expression et l'orthographe?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Sujet: comparer deux villes (ici Lyon et un village, Parves) en utilisant le comparatif et le superlatif,
Le Texte:
Lyon and Parves are two cities in the Rhones Alpes region. Lyon is the capital of this region, as well as the capital of the smaller Rhône département. And Parves is a commune in the Ain department in eastern France.
You should know that Lyon is more important than Parves. Indeed, Lyon forms the largest conurbation in France outside Paris, with a population estimated to be 1,422,331. While, there are only four hundred and thirty habitants in Parves.
Parves is as pretty as Lyon, but Lyon is the most famous city: is a student city, there are cinemas, pubs, universities, ... Thus we can say that Lyon is livelier than Parves
For several centuries Lyon has been known as the biggest french city of gastronomy, due in part to the presence of many of France's finest chefs in the city and its surroundings. At smaller scales, Parves is also a gastronomic city with Brillat Savarin. But this chef is less known than Lyonnais chefs, like Paul BOCUSE.
Lyon with its population, circulation, … is more pollutded than Parves. Indeed, in Parves there are forests, animals, farms, …
Finaly, In France, Lyon is the second richest city after Paris. Of more Lyon and its region Rhône-Alpes represent one of the most important economies in Europe. Thus, we can say that Parves is as rich as single street at Lyon.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-04-2013 13:40
Message de overwix posté le 01-04-2013 à 12:33:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît en corrigeant l'expression et l'orthographe?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Sujet: comparer deux villes (ici Lyon et un village, Parves) en utilisant le comparatif et le superlatif,
Le Texte:
Lyon and Parves are two cities in the Rhones Alpes region. Lyon is the capital of this region, as well as the capital of the smaller Rhône département. And Parves is a commune in the Ain department in eastern France.
You should know that Lyon is more important than Parves. Indeed, Lyon forms the largest conurbation in France outside Paris, with a population estimated to be 1,422,331. While, there are only four hundred and thirty habitants in Parves.
Parves is as pretty as Lyon, but Lyon is the most famous city: is a student city, there are cinemas, pubs, universities, ... Thus we can say that Lyon is livelier than Parves
For several centuries Lyon has been known as the biggest french city of gastronomy, due in part to the presence of many of France's finest chefs in the city and its surroundings. At smaller scales, Parves is also a gastronomic city with Brillat Savarin. But this chef is less known than Lyonnais chefs, like Paul BOCUSE.
Lyon with its population, circulation, … is more pollutded than Parves. Indeed, in Parves there are forests, animals, farms, …
Finaly, In France, Lyon is the second richest city after Paris. Of more Lyon and its region Rhône-Alpes represent one of the most important economies in Europe. Thus, we can say that Parves is as rich as single street at Lyon.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-04-2013 13:40
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