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Préparation/ oral bac

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Préparation/ oral bac
Message de jozo10 posté le 08-05-2013 à 21:45:21 (S | E | F)
Good evening,

Je vais passer l'oral du bac dans quelques jours, j'ai donc préparé ce que je pourrais dire à l'oral.
Pouvez vous corriger mes fautes d'orthographes/grammaires.
Thank you.

The notion of myth and hero :

In a first time I will define the notion of myth and heroes :
Originally, a hero was a demigod : a mortal man gifted with superhumans powers. Today a hero is more a person, a man or woman who is characterized with his bravery, his mental or physical strength. A man illustrious and famous for his exploits and actions, who has realised heroic actions. A hero can be a main character in a movie, a story or a poem. A hero has many human quality, he is generous, loyal, just, determined, nice, brave, courageous. A hero can also be an illustrious person who is venerated and idealized.
A myth is a wonderful narrative, located outside of historical time and starring for characters of divine or heroic character. It is a fictional story, a tale legendary with the presence of imaginary characters (god, demigod) or supernatural (angels, demons, monsters), the presence of imaginary actions (person with powers, he can fly for example).

Now I will talk heroes study in classroom. In the classroom we studied of heroes in the career success. Some people like Oprah winfrey, Steve jobs, Thomas Edinson.

Oprah Winfrey is a woman, a TV presenter, a journalist. She came from poor family, from the lower class. She is now one of the most influential women in America and is the world. She has influenced millions of people worlwide. It's a person who is very famous and very media. She is mainly known for his talk show The Oprah Winfrey Show, which has won several award.
Steve Jobs had an ordinary life story bur it's a genius. He overcame a lot of hardsships, he was as vulnerable as others people, for example he left school, fought to make his firm work, he was fired and had very important health problems. Steve Jobs was a inventors, he had improved and advanced the computer and the computing.
Thomas Edinson was also an inventor. He was born into a modest family, he was recognized like a very important American inventors. It's an icons of the past with his invention, like the microphone, phonographe, bulbe, electric chair, phone. He worked lot for his inventions. With this inventions he improved and facilitated the daily life. In his life he had difficulty, he was deaf of the left hear.

With his example on Steve Jobs, Edison, Oprah Winfrey we can notice that be a hero in the career succes to come with difficulties met in the life.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2013 21:47


Réponse: Préparation/ oral bac de lucile83, postée le 09-05-2013 à 22:45:30 (S | E)
Hello

In a first time I will define the notion of myth and heroes :
Originally, a hero was a demigod : a mortal man gifted with superhumans powers. Today a hero is more a person, a man or woman who is characterized with his bravery, his mental or physical strength. A man illustrious and famous for his exploits and actions, who has realised heroic actions. A hero can be a main character in a movie, a story or a poem. A hero has many human quality, he is generous, loyal, just, determined, nice, brave, courageous. A hero can also be an illustrious person who is venerated and idealized.
A myth is a wonderful narrative, located outside of historical time and starring for characters of divine or heroic character. It is a fictional story, a tale legendary with the presence of imaginary characters (god, demigod) or supernatural (angels, demons, monsters), the presence of imaginary actions (person with powers, he can fly for example).

Now I will talk ... heroes study in classroom. In the classroom we studied of heroes in the career success. Some people like Oprah winfrey, Steve jobs, Thomas Edinson.

To be continued...



Réponse: Préparation/ oral bac de jozo10, postée le 10-05-2013 à 12:13:56 (S | E)
Après correction:


At first, I will define the notion of myth and heroes :
Originally, a hero was a demigod : a mortal man gifted with superhuman powers. Today a hero is most a person, a man or woman who is characterized by his bravery, his mental or physical strength. A man illustrious and famous for his exploits and actions, who has realised heroic actions. A hero can be a main character in a movie, a story or a poem. A hero has many humans  qualities, he is generous, loyal, just, determined, nice, brave, courageous. A hero can also be an illustrious person who is venerated and idealized.
A myth is a wonderful narrative, located outside of historical time and starring for characters of divine or heroic character. It is a fictional story, a narration legendary with the presence of imaginary characters (god, demigod) or supernatural (angels, demons, monsters), the presence of imaginary actions (person with powers, he can fly for example).

Now I will talk ... heroes studies in class. Indeed we studied heroes in the career success. Some people like Oprah winfrey, Steve jobs, Thomas Edinson. 



Réponse: Préparation/ oral bac de lucile83, postée le 11-05-2013 à 18:28:29 (S | E)
Hello,

On passe à la suite

Oprah Winfrey is a woman, a TV presenter, a journalist. She came from poor family, from the lower class. She is now one of the most influential women in America and is the world. She has influenced millions of people worlwide. It's a person who is very famous and very media ???. She is mainly known for his talk show The Oprah Winfrey Show, which has won several award.
Steve Jobs had an ordinary life story bur it's a genius. He overcame a lot of hardsships, he was as vulnerable as others people, for example he left school, fought to make his firm work, he was fired and had very important health problems. Steve Jobs was a inventors, he had improved and advanced the computerS and the computing.
Thomas Edinson was also an inventor. He was born into a modest family, he was recognized like a very important American inventors. It's an icons of the past with his invention, like the microphone, phonographe, bulbe, electric chair, phone. He worked lot for his inventions. With this inventions he improved and facilitated the daily life. In his life he had difficulty, he was deaf of the left hear.

With his example on Steve Jobs, Edison, Oprah Winfrey we can notice that be a hero in the career succes to come?? with difficulties met in the life.

Beaucoup de fautes basiques à corriger.




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