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Message de redwane0307 posté le 08-04-2014 à 16:00:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois répondre à la question suivante et j'aimerais savoir si ce que j'ai écrit est correct.
Merci pour votre aide.
1) Do you feel pity for celebrities who are pursued by paparazzi ?
Yes, I feel pity for celebrities pursued by paparazzi because it must be hard to live everyday. Indeed, the celerities no longer private life. They are chased all the time same at home and during their hollidays away from people. The paparazzi not hesitate to be violent with the stars as for exemple nicole kidman grounded by a cycling photographer on september 2013. The paparazzi do not hesitate to be disrepectful , they insult the celebrities, same the children as for exemple Suri Cruise who has been insulted of "bitch" by paparazzi. I really feel pity for celebrities which no longer private life, who are insulted and which chased all the time and i understand the celebrities who become violent with paparazzies because the paparazzi have no respect for person.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-04-2014 18:47
Message de redwane0307 posté le 08-04-2014 à 16:00:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois répondre à la question suivante et j'aimerais savoir si ce que j'ai écrit est correct.
Merci pour votre aide.
1) Do you feel pity for celebrities who are pursued by paparazzi ?
Yes, I feel pity for celebrities pursued by paparazzi because it must be hard to live everyday. Indeed, the celerities no longer private life. They are chased all the time same at home and during their hollidays away from people. The paparazzi not hesitate to be violent with the stars as for exemple nicole kidman grounded by a cycling photographer on september 2013. The paparazzi do not hesitate to be disrepectful , they insult the celebrities, same the children as for exemple Suri Cruise who has been insulted of "bitch" by paparazzi. I really feel pity for celebrities which no longer private life, who are insulted and which chased all the time and i understand the celebrities who become violent with paparazzies because the paparazzi have no respect for person.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-04-2014 18:47
Réponse: Question/paparazzi de sherry48, postée le 08-04-2014 à 17:32:19 (S | E)
Hello. There are a few areas to take another look at.
Yes, I feel pity for celebrities pursued by paparazzi because it must be hard ___ ___ to live everyday. Indeed, the celerities (sp)no longer (verb) private life (plural). They are chased all the time same
at home and during their hollidays away from people. The paparazzi (negative requires auxiliary verb) not hesitate to be violent with the stars as for exemple nicole kidman ___ ___grounded by a cycling photographer on september 2013. The paparazzi do not hesitate to be disrepectful , they insult (the) celebrities, same the children as for exemple Suri Cruise who has been insulted of "bitch" by paparazzi. I really feel pity for celebrities which no longer (verb) private life,(plural) who are insulted and Sherry
Réponse: Question/paparazzi de redwane0307, postée le 08-04-2014 à 19:05:01 (S | E)
Merci, J'ai corrigé ce que j'ai pu mais mon niveau d'anglais est pas top et j'ai du mal.Merci
Yes, I feel pity for celebrities pursued by paparazzi because it must be hard to live everyday. Indeed, the celerities no longer have privates lifes. They are chased all the time even at home and during their holidays away from people. The paparazzi does'nt hesitate to be violent with the stars as for example Nicole Kidman grounded by a cycling photographer in September 2013. The paparazzi do not hesitate to be disrepectful , they insult the celebrities, same the children as for example Suri Cruise who has been insulted "bitch" by paparazzi. I really feel pity for celebrities which no longer have privates lifes, who are insulted and chased all the time and understand celebrities who become violent with paparazzi because the paparazzi have no respect for people.
Réponse: Question/paparazzi de sherry48, postée le 08-04-2014 à 20:16:29 (S | E)
Hello again.
Yes, I feel pity for celebrities pursued by paparazzi because it must be hard to live everyday. (I was thinking 'pour eux', but this is OK)Indeed, the celerities (sp)no longer have privates lifes. They are chased all the time
hesitate to be violent with the stars as for example Nicole Kidman, who was grounded (pushed to the ground/knocked to the ground?) by a cycling photographer in September 2013. The paparazzi do not hesitate to be disrepectful, they insult the celebrities, as well as their children as for example Suri Cruise who has been insulted (qui=?) no longer have privates lifes, who are insulted and chased all the time and understand celebrities who become violent with paparazzi because the paparazzi have no respect for people. **If paparazzi is plural, not doesn't.
Sherry
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