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Message de diline posté le 07-01-2016 à 12:01:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
J'aurais besoin d'aide s'il vous plaît .
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes éventuelles fautes d'orthographe et me dire si ça a du sens ?
Merci beaucoup de votre aide.
C'est une synthèse que je dois faire sur les MOOCs.
Massive Open Online Courses are the latest development in Online education. This is a method to help student to complet their degree. It is a coursera who is easily accessible, simple of registration, really practical and free. There are more than 70.000 students who enrolled a week because they are opened to all. The courses on this coursera are very varied as for example economics, management, health, science, history, French, …
The only necessary elements to participate in a MOOC are a computer and an internet connection what allows teachers to be in contact with the students all around the wold. Students can follow the course distance at a time when he wishes without having the constraint to move. Furthermore, the MOOCs offers the luck to attend courses from top tier universities as Oxford or Harvard, that could be an advantage for students having an activity intense professional where those who do not have the means to follow studies where alive people in the poor countries so it give an opportunity to the students to have an acces to higher education.
But MOOCs raise some problems because if students are struggling to move forward or to divert a problem, they can not ask questions Because they do not exist direct links between teachers and students. Furthemore, there are not corrections of homework made by a professor, it is the students themselves who correct the work of other what can be considered as a way of learning by the students. Thus, students must take responsibility for their learning, because they are not supervised, they are left to themselves.
To conclude, I think that it would be necessary to have both educational systems : traditional system in the classroom and MOOC system which can be complementary. We could wonder if the MOOC system will be still free in the future ?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-01-2016 12:46
Message de diline posté le 07-01-2016 à 12:01:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
J'aurais besoin d'aide s'il vous plaît .
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes éventuelles fautes d'orthographe et me dire si ça a du sens ?
Merci beaucoup de votre aide.
C'est une synthèse que je dois faire sur les MOOCs.
Massive Open Online Courses are the latest development in Online education. This is a method to help student to complet their degree. It is a coursera who is easily accessible, simple of registration, really practical and free. There are more than 70.000 students who enrolled a week because they are opened to all. The courses on this coursera are very varied as for example economics, management, health, science, history, French, …
The only necessary elements to participate in a MOOC are a computer and an internet connection what allows teachers to be in contact with the students all around the wold. Students can follow the course distance at a time when he wishes without having the constraint to move. Furthermore, the MOOCs offers the luck to attend courses from top tier universities as Oxford or Harvard, that could be an advantage for students having an activity intense professional where those who do not have the means to follow studies where alive people in the poor countries so it give an opportunity to the students to have an acces to higher education.
But MOOCs raise some problems because if students are struggling to move forward or to divert a problem, they can not ask questions Because they do not exist direct links between teachers and students. Furthemore, there are not corrections of homework made by a professor, it is the students themselves who correct the work of other what can be considered as a way of learning by the students. Thus, students must take responsibility for their learning, because they are not supervised, they are left to themselves.
To conclude, I think that it would be necessary to have both educational systems : traditional system in the classroom and MOOC system which can be complementary. We could wonder if the MOOC system will be still free in the future ?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-01-2016 12:46
Réponse: MOOCs/aide de laure95, postée le 08-01-2016 à 11:45:10 (S | E)
Bonjour,
-in Online education: mettre une autre préposition.
- It is a coursera who is easily accessible: WHO a pour antécédent une personne.
-70.000 students who enrolled: pourquoi le passé?
- they are opened: utiliser l'adjectif "open" plutôt que le verbe.
- The courses on this courser: répétition.
-what allows teachers: "what" ne convient pas ici, cherche l'autre relatif traduisant aussi "ce qui".
- wold: faute de frappe?
- at a time: mal dit.
- the luck: pas le bon mot ici, chercher le mot "opportunité".
- an activity intense Professional: ordre des mots.
- where those: ?
- where alive people: ?
- it give: conjugaison.
- Because they do not exist: THEY ne veut pas dire "il y a".
- it is the students: mal construit.
- the work of other: mal construit.
- traditional system: il manque un article.
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