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Message de xxguizmo95xx posté le 08-05-2016 à 13:10:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un devoir à rendre en anglais et j'aimerais que vous m'aidiez un peu, et que vous me disiez s'il y a des choses à changer ou pas.
In my opinion "Dorian Gray" is a good movie but it's not the best movie i've see. Altough the actors, in particular Ben Barnes and Colin Firth is very good. The musics in the movie was very good because these musics plunge the viewer in an atmosphere dismal. Howewer i tkink there is a lot of repetitive stage. Moreover sometimes this movie is scary with the "portait" or the murder of basil and with the end of the movie. Nonetheless the end is bad because at the end it's not a realistic fire.
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2016 14:05
Message de xxguizmo95xx posté le 08-05-2016 à 13:10:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un devoir à rendre en anglais et j'aimerais que vous m'aidiez un peu, et que vous me disiez s'il y a des choses à changer ou pas.
In my opinion "Dorian Gray" is a good movie but it's not the best movie i've see. Altough the actors, in particular Ben Barnes and Colin Firth is very good. The musics in the movie was very good because these musics plunge the viewer in an atmosphere dismal. Howewer i tkink there is a lot of repetitive stage. Moreover sometimes this movie is scary with the "portait" or the murder of basil and with the end of the movie. Nonetheless the end is bad because at the end it's not a realistic fire.
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2016 14:05
Réponse: Movie/aide de gerondif, postée le 10-05-2016 à 11:21:45 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert
In my opinion "Dorian Gray" is a good movie but it's not the best movie i've see.(I en majuscule, seen au participe passé) Altough the actors, in particular Ben Barnes and Colin Firth is(pluriel, ils sont deux) very good. The musics in the movie was very good because these musics (rarement pluriel, ou alors these songs) plunge the viewer in an atmosphere dismal (l'adjectif épithète est devant le nom). Howewer i tkink there is(pluriel) a lot of repetitive stage(pluriel). Moreover sometimes this movie is scary with the "portait" or the murder of basil and with the end of the movie. Nonetheless the end is bad because at the end it's not a realistic fire.
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