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Message de abdelkader123 posté le 22-01-2017 à 13:13:57 (S | E | F)
Hello tout le monde,
j'ai un texte à faire pour le 30 et j'aimerais avoir votre avis sur la correction et la grammaire s'il vous plait.
Le sujet est " "créer un super héro en anglais". m
Merci pour votre aide.
MY SUPER HERO
THE VERITABLE LIFE:
Her name in veritable life is Jymmi Jim .He was born on Tuesday April 13th,1995, in Los Angeles.He lives in New York at 94 Paradis Street.Jymmi plays the piano and the guitare. He is 22 years old.He as got red red eyes , very short and darck haire.He is tall.He is patient and class.He as got the bidg dog,It's a German Shepherd ,he is dangerous.Jymmi is very strong and courageous.He is very rich.He knows how to handle sabers.The sabers are made of crystal.He is orphan.
THE DOBLE LIFE:
In doble life , her name is Fre-Man . It's a figther .He detest the evil.He has got the gadgets multifunction, the fire bombs , wather lance, the sabres.
His worse ennemies is Wather-Mane .
THE POWER:
He can launch the laser beams.These sabers are unbreakable , they are done diamontium, it's very rare
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-01-2017 13:44
Message de abdelkader123 posté le 22-01-2017 à 13:13:57 (S | E | F)
Hello tout le monde,
j'ai un texte à faire pour le 30 et j'aimerais avoir votre avis sur la correction et la grammaire s'il vous plait.
Le sujet est " "créer un super héro en anglais". m
Merci pour votre aide.
MY SUPER HERO
THE VERITABLE LIFE:
Her name in veritable life is Jymmi Jim .He was born on Tuesday April 13th,1995, in Los Angeles.He lives in New York at 94 Paradis Street.Jymmi plays the piano and the guitare. He is 22 years old.He as got red red eyes , very short and darck haire.He is tall.He is patient and class.He as got the bidg dog,It's a German Shepherd ,he is dangerous.Jymmi is very strong and courageous.He is very rich.He knows how to handle sabers.The sabers are made of crystal.He is orphan.
THE DOBLE LIFE:
In doble life , her name is Fre-Man . It's a figther .He detest the evil.He has got the gadgets multifunction, the fire bombs , wather lance, the sabres.
His worse ennemies is Wather-Mane .
THE POWER:
He can launch the laser beams.These sabers are unbreakable , they are done diamontium, it's very rare
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-01-2017 13:44
Réponse : Super-hero /aide de here4u, postée le 22-01-2017 à 15:54:50 (S | E)
Hello !
SUPER HERO
THE VERITABLE LIFE:
Her= feminine! name in veritable life is Jymmi Jim .He was born on Tuesday April 13th,1995, in Los Angeles.He lives in New York at 94 Paradis Street.Jymmi plays the piano and the guitare. He is 22 years old.He as got red red eyes , very short and darck haire.He is tall.He is patient and class.He as got the bidg dog,It's a German Shepherd ,he is dangerous.Jymmi is very strong and courageous.He is very rich.He knows how to handle sabers.The sabers are made of crystal.He is XX orphan.
THE DOBLE LIFE:
In doble life , her name is X Fre-Man . It's a figther .He detest the evil.He has got the gadgets multifunction, the fire bombs , wather lance, the sabres.
His worse ennemies is Wather-Mane .
THE POWER:
He can launch the laser beams.These sabers are unbreakable , they are done XX diamontium, it's very rare.
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