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Message de pauline55 posté le 03-02-2018 à 13:55:20 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, pourriez vous me corriger et m'indiquer mes erreurs, merci par avance de votre aide

Jeff Koons is a provocative and eccentric designer, plastic, sculptor, photographer and painter artist. He uses several artistic techniques : installation, photography, painting, sculpture on all materials (marble, plastic, inox and wood) until computer-aided creation. He claims to try to make art for the greatest number and always work with the concern to deal with things with which everyone can create a link .
Koons collaborated with BMW in order to decorated the 17th Art Car of the brand. He also created Lady Gaga’s Artpop album cover and collaborated with Snapchat on an augmented reality art projet. In 2017, he designed for Louis Vuitton five bags printed with famous paintings that inspires him.
This artist is inspired by the world of childhood imbued with innocence and makes toys and inflatable animals.

Hoop vacuum cleaners and hanging basketballs from Koons seem to respond to Duchamp's most iconic works and his concept of the « ready-made ». Unlike Duchamp's ready-made, Jeff Koons's sculptures reproduce the objects and images chosen in a different size and medium.

 We can’t discuss Koons' interest in everyday life without mentioning the work of Andy Warhol. True icons of pop art, the two artists are part of a generation seeking to constantly push back the limits of the art world, at a time controlled by the media. Jeff Koons also uses photo and advertising, hijacking them in often humorous posters so that his art reaches more people, using popular topics. In a society where reproduction, the media, the development of images are ubiquitous : the border between real work and reproduction becomes weaker.

Koons is also fascinated by the icons of popular culture in his logic of questioning this culture, he is the author of the famous sculptures of Michael Jackson, Popeye and Pink Panther.
Jeff Koons is a very criticized artist because even if he describes himself as an accessible artist, he is the favorite of the billionaires and his works are extremely expensive and convey a very commercial spirit. His simplistic-looking achievements are often described as kitsch and cheap because of shinny materials and flashy colors he uses.

Last year, Jeff Koons was convicted for plagiarizing in his sculpture "Naked" a photograph of French photographer Jean-François Bauret. This is the third conviction for Koons, who claims an art of appropriation and often ignores copyright which forced him to withdraw his works from his exhibitions. In 2016 Koons announced its intention to offer to the City of Paris a bouquet of tulips to be placed on the square of Tokyo, a monumental and original work,"symbol of memory" after the attacks that plunged into November 2015 the French capital. A work that has sparked a great debate for a year and a half.


Réponse : Petite rédaction de sherry48, postée le 03-02-2018 à 16:20:54 (S | E)
Hello. It's good, but you can improve it!
Jeff Koons is a provocative and eccentric designer, plastic, sculptor, photographer and painter artist. (One of these is not a person and all could further define the word artist.) He uses several artistic techniques: installation, photography, painting, and sculpture on all kinds of or various/diverse materials including (marble, plastic, inox and wood) until computer-aided creation.( Do you mean that he used these other mediums prior to the advent of computer-aided technology?) He claims to try to make (a stronger verb would be better) art for the greatest number (of __?) and always work (subject is he) with the concern to deal with things with which everyone can create a link. (usually a form of the verb connect is used in this sense)
Koons collaborated with BMW in order to decorated (infinitive?) the 17th Art Car of the brand. He also created Lady Gaga’s Artpop album cover and collaborated with Snapchat on an augmented reality art projet.(spelling) In 2017, he designed for Louis Vuitton five bags (it sounds more natural if you tell what he designed first) printed with famous paintings that inspires (agreement) him.
This artist is inspired by (consider a possessive with a noun form) the world of childhood imbued with innocence and makes toys and inflatable animals.

Hoop vacuum cleaners and hanging basketballs from Koons seem to respond to Duchamp's most iconic works and his concept of the « ready-made ». Unlike Duchamp's ready-made, Jeff Koons's sculptures reproduce the objects and images chosen (you could eliminate, or use it as an adjective for objects) in a different size and medium.
We can’t discuss Koons' interest in everyday life without mentioning the work of Andy Warhol. True icons of pop art, the two artists are part of a generation seeking to constantly push back the limits of the art world, at a time ___ controlled by the media. Jeff Koons also uses photo(plural) and advertising, hijacking them in often humorous posters so that his art reaches more people, using popular topics.(Consider working this in earlier in your sentence.) In a society where reproduction,(plural) the media, and the development of images are ubiquitous : the border between real work and reproduction becomes weaker.(OK, but you might try another word.)

Koons is also fascinated by the icons of popular culture. In his logic of questioning this culture, he is the author (or creator) of the famous sculptures of Michael Jackson, Popeye and Pink Panther.
Jeff Koons is a very(adverb of frequency would work here) criticized artist because even if he describes himself as an accessible artist, he is the favorite of the billionaires, and his works are extremely expensive and convey a very commercial spirit. His simplistic-looking achievements are often described as kitsch and cheap because of the shinny materials and flashy colors he uses.

Last year, Jeff Koons was convicted for plagiarizing (noun form with of?) in his sculpture "Naked", a photograph of/by French photographer Jean-François Bauret. This is the third conviction for Koons, who claims an art of appropriation and often ignores copyright.(plural) This has forced him to withdraw his works from (his-you could eliminate one) exhibitions. In 2016, Koons announced its(incorrect possessive adjective) intention to offer (to) the City of Paris a bouquet of tulips to be placed on the square of Tokyo,(Tokyo Square?) a monumental and original work, a "symbol of memory"(you could use an adjective form instead of memory) after the (adjective here instead of plunged into?)attacks that plunged into November 2015 the French capital. (word order change would sound more natural) A work that has sparked a great debate for a year and a half. ( a work that has...is a good phrase for the end of another sentence, but start a new sentence differently.)
Bon courage! Sherry




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