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Message de soleildujour posté le 23-07-2010 à 21:12:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois écrire une lettre pour solliciter une entrevue pour un travail que je dois faire pour l'un de mes cours. Je l'ai fait et je vous demande de me le corriger, merci bien

Dear Ms.
I am currently an undergraduate student at Txx-Uxxx at Quebec, bachelor in science. In one of my course which is ISO 14000, I need to contact a company who is or who desire to integrate an environmental management system.

I contact you to conduct an interview. It contains few questions that will take one to two hours maximum. These questions will help you to have a great idea about your system in a company and will allow a quick self-evaluation of some proceedings of you company.

I would greatly appreciate an opportunity to consider your thoughts about the environmental management system in the company. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time and consideration.
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Modifié par bridg le 23-07-2010 21:43
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Réponse: Demander une entrevue/correction de may, postée le 24-07-2010 à 03:33:03 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

Votre lettre est très bien, juste quelques remarques:

Dear Ms. Dear Sir/Madame

I am currently an undergraduate student at Txx-Uxxx at autre préposition Quebec, bachelor in (science) lettre capitale. In one of my course which is ISO 14000, I need to contact a company who (autre pronom) is or ~~who~~ desire to integrate an environmental management system.

I would like to contact you to conduct an interview. It contains manqué un mot few questions that will take (one to) about two hours maximum. These questions will help you to have get a great idea about your system in a company and will allow a quick self-evaluation of some proceedings of you your company.

I would greatly appreciate an opportunity to consider your thoughts about the environmental management system in the company. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours truly,

Hope this helps,

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Modifié par may le 24-07-2010 03:35

Réponse: Demander une entrevue/correction de soleildujour, postée le 24-07-2010 à 17:20:29 (S | E)
Merci pour la réponse. En ce qui concerne la première remarque

I am....student at xxxx in Quebec, "in" serait la préposition correcte ?

Bonne journée !

Réponse: Demander une entrevue/correction de may, postée le 25-07-2010 à 14:09:04 (S | E)

Good morning soleildujour,

Yes, you are absolutely right

Bonne journée,

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