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Message de kiruban posté le 24-01-2007 à 20:29:40 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Je dois apprendre à écrire des emails. J'ai écrit mais j'aimerais savoir si c'est correct? Et eventuellement corriger mes fautes. S'il vous plaît.
merci d'avance
Hey, thanks for the message the other day and for the information about computers.
I'm not sure what kind of machine I want to buy, but I'm thinking about building my own computer with Windows vista installed.
My brother has the same kind of computer, so he can help me if I have problems. BTW, what kind of computer do you have?
You know one thing, my IBook has just crashed as I was meaning to update my blog this weekend.
Luckily, I had just bought an external hardrive to back everything up on Friday night and on Saturday my hardrive crashed!
Crashed as in it can't boot past the grey screen and there is a scary vibrating noise coming from deep within the hardware system...
I hope everything was saved ok but we'll have to see.
Regards,
Kiruban @ geek
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Modifié par bridg le 24-01-2007 20:30
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Message de kiruban posté le 24-01-2007 à 20:29:40 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Je dois apprendre à écrire des emails. J'ai écrit mais j'aimerais savoir si c'est correct? Et eventuellement corriger mes fautes. S'il vous plaît.
merci d'avance
Hey, thanks for the message the other day and for the information about computers.
I'm not sure what kind of machine I want to buy, but I'm thinking about building my own computer with Windows vista installed.
My brother has the same kind of computer, so he can help me if I have problems. BTW, what kind of computer do you have?
You know one thing, my IBook has just crashed as I was meaning to update my blog this weekend.
Luckily, I had just bought an external hardrive to back everything up on Friday night and on Saturday my hardrive crashed!
Crashed as in it can't boot past the grey screen and there is a scary vibrating noise coming from deep within the hardware system...
I hope everything was saved ok but we'll have to see.
Regards,
Kiruban @ geek
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Modifié par bridg le 24-01-2007 20:30
divers
Réponse: correction email de jean31, postée le 24-01-2007 à 21:25:41 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Quelques suggestions :
... message of the other day ...
... machine/PC
...... about assembling my own computer...
... as I intended to update my blog ...
Crashed as in <= ????
... but we'll have to wait and see.
Hope it helps.
Réponse: correction email de kiruban, postée le 25-01-2007 à 06:45:44 (S | E)
Hello,
voilà
Hey, thanks for the message of the other day and for the information about computers.
I'm not sure what kind of PC I want to buy, but I'm thinking about assembling my own computer with Windows vista installed.
My brother has the same kind of computer, so he can help me if I have problems. BTW, what kind of computer do you have?
You know one thing, my IBook has just crashed as I intended to update my blog this weekend.
Luckily, I had just bought an external hardrive to back everything up on Friday night and on Saturday my hardrive crashed!
Indeed, it can't boot past the grey screen and there is a scary vibrating noise coming from deep within the hardware system...
I hope everything was saved ok but we'll have to wait and see.
Merci encore
Réponse: correction email de jean31, postée le 25-01-2007 à 10:06:39 (S | E)
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