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In the caribbean
Message de kikoukou posté le 21-02-2007 à 10:32:10 (S | E | F | I)
bonjourn pouvez vous me dire si ce texte est juste? merci beaucoup
In the caribbean sea, Jaak Sparrow, a pirate, sees his life changing the day when his enemy the perfidious captain Barbossa, steals Jack's boat, the Black Pearl. Then Barbossa attacks the city of Port Royal and he abducts the gouvernor's daughter , Elizabeth Swann. Will Turner, Elizabeth's childhood friend joins Jack to chase Barbossa. But Will doesn't know that a curse strikes Barbossa and his pirates. When, the moon shines, they change into living dead. Their terrible fate will end only the day when the fabulous treasure that piled up is restored.
I think that this film is very attractive. I'm interested in the character Jack Sparrow because he is charmer and he is very funny. Johnny Depp plays the part of the pirate wonderfully. I enjoy the setting and the costumes. The landscapes are very beautiful. I'm fascinated by the musicn it is very harrowing and terrifying. I'm fond of the film , the other characters , Will Turner is very naive. The film is very good and very funny.
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Modifié par bridg le 21-02-2007 16:11
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Message de kikoukou posté le 21-02-2007 à 10:32:10 (S | E | F | I)
bonjourn pouvez vous me dire si ce texte est juste? merci beaucoup
In the caribbean sea, Jaak Sparrow, a pirate, sees his life changing the day when his enemy the perfidious captain Barbossa, steals Jack's boat, the Black Pearl. Then Barbossa attacks the city of Port Royal and he abducts the gouvernor's daughter , Elizabeth Swann. Will Turner, Elizabeth's childhood friend joins Jack to chase Barbossa. But Will doesn't know that a curse strikes Barbossa and his pirates. When, the moon shines, they change into living dead. Their terrible fate will end only the day when the fabulous treasure that piled up is restored.
I think that this film is very attractive. I'm interested in the character Jack Sparrow because he is charmer and he is very funny. Johnny Depp plays the part of the pirate wonderfully. I enjoy the setting and the costumes. The landscapes are very beautiful. I'm fascinated by the musicn it is very harrowing and terrifying. I'm fond of the film , the other characters , Will Turner is very naive. The film is very good and very funny.
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Modifié par bridg le 21-02-2007 16:11
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Réponse: In the caribbean de babyscot59, postée le 21-02-2007 à 10:39:25 (S | E)
In the caribbean sea, Jaak Sparrow, a pirate, sees his life changing the day when his enemy the perfidious captain Barbossa, steals Jack's boat, the Black Pearl. Then Barbossa attacks the city of Port Royal and he abducts the gouvernor's daughter , Elizabeth Swann. Will Turner, Elizabeth's childhood friend joins Jack to chase Barbossa. But Will doesn't know that a curse strikes Barbossa and his pirates. When, the moon shines, they change into living dead. Their terrible fate will end only the day when the fabulous treasure that piled up is restored.
I think that this film is very attractive. I'm interested in the character Jack Sparrow because he is charming and he is very funny. Johnny Depp wonderfully plays the part of the pirate . I enjoy the setting and the costumes. The landscapes are very beautiful. I'm fascinated by the musicn it is very harrowing and terrifying. I'm fond of the film , the other characters , Will Turner is very naive. The film is very good and very funny.
Voilà normalement c'est parfait aucune faute!
sébastien
Réponse: In the caribbean de kikoukou, postée le 21-02-2007 à 10:55:13 (S | E)
wonderfully c juste non ?
Réponse: In the caribbean de babyscot59, postée le 21-02-2007 à 10:57:43 (S | E)
oui c'etait sa position dans la phrase qui posait problème selon moi
Réponse: In the caribbean de aoysklhb, postée le 21-02-2007 à 11:12:32 (S | E)
Your text is,to my mind, a masterpiece in writing.Your evaluation to the charaters and the scenery where the events took place are even wondrful.Your writing style is very high.I am impressed.
Réponse: In the caribbean de kikoukou, postée le 21-02-2007 à 11:35:05 (S | E)
thank you very much !!!
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