Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
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Correction/questions
Message de lizie posté le 21-02-2007 à 17:34:00 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour!!!
Pouvez-vous me dire si ces questions sont correctes??
Merci d’avance
How old was Billy Weaver in this time?
-billy was 17 wear old at the time
What the houses have?
-the houses had porches and pillars
In how many mile from here isTthe Bell and the Dragon?
-the bell and dragon is about a quarter of a mile away from. Here
Have you ever stayed in a boarding-house?
-never (answered billy)
Where billy bought his hat?
-he bout his trilby hat in a shop in LONDON
Pouvez-vous me dire si j'ai utilisé les bonnes formes verbales?
-before he went to london, billy have asked MR. greenslade some information about it.
-when he arrived at bath, he realized night fell; in fact it have fallen him a very long time to go to bath.
-I didn't expect the trip is so long
-I have travel for 10 hours now.
-I don't know where I will sleep tonight. I wish someone book a room for me in a hotel.
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Modifié par bridg le 21-02-2007 18:39
Message de lizie posté le 21-02-2007 à 17:34:00 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour!!!
Pouvez-vous me dire si ces questions sont correctes??
Merci d’avance
How old was Billy Weaver in this time?
-billy was 17 wear old at the time
What the houses have?
-the houses had porches and pillars
In how many mile from here isTthe Bell and the Dragon?
-the bell and dragon is about a quarter of a mile away from. Here
Have you ever stayed in a boarding-house?
-never (answered billy)
Where billy bought his hat?
-he bout his trilby hat in a shop in LONDON
Pouvez-vous me dire si j'ai utilisé les bonnes formes verbales?
-before he went to london, billy have asked MR. greenslade some information about it.
-when he arrived at bath, he realized night fell; in fact it have fallen him a very long time to go to bath.
-I didn't expect the trip is so long
-I have travel for 10 hours now.
-I don't know where I will sleep tonight. I wish someone book a room for me in a hotel.
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Modifié par bridg le 21-02-2007 18:39
Réponse: Correction/questions de ronron12, postée le 21-02-2007 à 18:34:32 (S | E)
bonjour,
Question 1 = ok pour moi
réponse = billy was 17 years old in the time
qustion 2 = what did have the houses ?
reponse = the houses had .....
Désolé mais je peux répondre qu'à ces questions j'espère que c'est bon.
Bon courage
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Modifié par bridg le 21-02-2007 18:37
Ne donnez pas les réponses mais aidez les membres à se corriger, c'est plus difficile mais plus aidant pour l'apprentissage.
Merci
Réponse: Correction/questions de trombone, postée le 21-02-2007 à 22:26:51 (S | E)
How old was Billy Weaver in this time? : je ne suis pas sure que this soit possible ici puisqu'il y a was et pourquoi est-ce que tu as transformé le "at" en "in" ?
What the houses have? : il manque l'auxiliaire du preterit
In how many mile from here isTthe Bell and the Dragon? : tu as mis plusieurs sujets et je ne pense pas que le "in" devant how soit possible
Where billy bought his hat? : là aussi il manque l'auxiliaire ; dans une question : l'ordre c'est auxiliaire/sujet/verbe
peut-être d'autres avis seraient les bienvenus
bonne soirée
Réponse: Correction/questions de lizie, postée le 21-02-2007 à 23:22:23 (S | E)
merci de votre aide !!!!!!
Réponse: Correction/questions de magstmarc, postée le 22-02-2007 à 00:09:15 (S | E)
Hello lizie
J'ai mis en rouge ce qui à mon avis ne va pas ; plus des parenthèses quand il manque quelque chose. Il y a des corrections faciles à faire et d'autres plus ardues, corrige ce que tu peux et reposte le résultat, on va s'en occuper pas à pas.
How old was Billy Weaver in this time?
-billy was 17 wear( ) old at the time
What ( ) the houses have?
-the houses had porches and pillars
In how many mile( ) from here isTthe Bell and the Dragon?
-the bell and dragon is about a quarter of a mile away from. Here
Have you ever stayed in a boarding-house?
-never (answered billy)
Where ( ) billy bought his hat?
-he bout his trilby hat in a shop in LONDON
Pouvez-vous me dire si j'ai utilisé les bonnes formes verbales?
-before he went to london, billy have asked MR. greenslade some information about it.
-when he arrived at bath, he realized night fell; in fact it have fallen him a very long time to go to bath.
-I didn't expect the trip is so long
-I have travel for 10 hours now.
-I don't know where I will sleep tonight. I wish someone book a room for me in a hotel.
J'attends tes corrections
Bye bye
Réponse: Correction/questions de lizie, postée le 22-02-2007 à 19:28:41 (S | E)
bonjour!!!
je suis désolé de vous déranger, mais pourriez-vous me dire si ceci est juste; merci!!
How old was Billy Weaver at this time?
-billy was 17 years old at the time
What did the houses have?
-the houses had porches and pillars
how many mile away from here is Tthe Bell and Dragon?
-the bell and dragon is about a quarter of a mile away from. Here
Have you ever stayed in a boarding-houses?
-never (answered billy)
Where billy bought his hat?
-he bout his trilby hat in a shop in LONDON
Réponse: Correction/questions de jean31, postée le 22-02-2007 à 19:41:44 (S | E)
1, ,2 OK
3 ... mileS ... sinon OK
4 ...a boarding housE? sinon OK
5 Where + auxiliaire + sujet + base verbale + COD. Rectifie
Réponse: Correction/questions de lizie, postée le 23-02-2007 à 00:59:29 (S | E)
bonjour!!
j'ai effectué des corrections, Pouvez-vous me dire si j'ai utilisé les bonnes formes verbales?
-before he went to london, billy has asked MR. greenslade some information about it.
-when he arrived at bath, he realized night was fallen; in fact it was fallen him a very long time to go to bath.
-I didn't expect the trip be so long
-I have travelled for 10 hours now.
-I don't know where I will sleep tonight. I wish someone booked a room for me in a hotel.
MERCI D'AVANCE!!!!