Message de néné93 posté le 2004-03-24 16:36:08 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour je m'appelle Anne et je viens juste de rejoindre le club j'en suis très heureuse c'est vraiment ce que je cherchais.Je suis actuellement en classe de première STT et demain je dois présenter un exposé oral en anglais,je l'ai fais biensur mais j'ai quelques petites difficultés il ya certains mots que je ne trouve pas.Serait-il possible que vous jetiez un coup d'oeil et me corrigiez là où il ya des fautes SVP??????????,
Début de l'exposé consacré à AALIYAH :
Aaliyah Dana Haughton was born on january 16 in 1979 at New York.
However she spends the major part of her childhood in an another large metropolis Detroit in the Michigan.Her passion for the song and the dance does not leave indifferent to her family in particular her uncle Barry Hankerson.It's thanks to him that she sings.She made her true beginnings in 1994 with an album where artists such as Missy Elliott,Timbaland take part in.Her music is a mixture of R&B and Hip Hop attract an increasingly large audience but she wishes to explore other tracks,the large screen ( l'attire ?).She takes down a first role in "Romeo must die". Five years ago her last album she returns to us with a third album entitled "Aaliyah". She doesn't know yet but it's her last album. She describes it as album of the maturity.The August 26,2001 the new one falls into all the agencies from press. She died in an accident of plane with 7 others passagers. Her career was short among us but from now she becames a legend for many people. Voila c'est terminé sa me rendrais un grand service que vous me corrigiez.Merci de votre compréhension.A bientôt