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Message de snoo posté le 2004-11-03 16:14:20 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Je me demande si cette traduction est juste.
Merci d'avance de me repondre et de me corriger.
Il y a cent ans, le 15 septembre 1890, Agatha Miller est née dans une famille d’anglais de classe supérieure. Elle n’est jamais allé à l’école et s’est apprise à lire, plus tard elle a rencontré le Lieutenant Archie Christie et l’a épousé en 1914. Quand Archie est parti pour la guerre, Agatha est allée travailler à un hôpital local où elle a appris beaucoup sur la médecine, le poison est devenu par la suite sa méthode favorite de meurtre.
Agatha n’a pas fait l’unanimité tout de suite, 4 éditeurs ont refusés son premier livre, en 1920.
Le deuxième livre a été publié en 1922 de cette date elle a publiée au moins un livre chaque années et quelques fois 2 ou 3.
La plupart de ces histoires se déroulent dans des villages anglais calmes où tout le monde est normal jusqu’à ce que l’on découvre un meurtre. Elle avait une très bonne écriture pour créer un suspect de grand nombre, quand vous tournez les pages, le soupçon va d’un suspect à l’autre.
Hercule Poirot est le personnage le plus populaire de Agatha. Il est belge, peu attrayant et snob, il est très poli et parle un Franglais pour l’humour. Il résout le crime avec son cerveau.
Agatha Chritie est morte en 1978, elle avait écrit 73 livres de mystères et de pièces.
Hundred years ago, on September 15th, 1890, Agatha Miller was born in a family of English of superior class. She never went to the school and learnt to read, later she met the Lieutenant Archie Christie and married him in 1914. When Archie left for the war, Agatha went to work on a local hospital where she learnt on the medicine a lot, the poison became afterward its favourite method of murder.
Agatha did not make the unanimity at once, 4 publishers refused his first book, in 1920.
The second book was published in 1922 of this date she published at least a book every years and several times 2 or 3.
Most of these stories take place in quiet English villages where everybody is normal until we discover a murder. She had a very good writing to create a suspect of big number, when you turn pages; the suspicion goes from a suspect to the other one.
Hercule Poirot is the most popular character of Agatha. He is Belgian, little attractive and stuck-up, he is very polite and speaks about a Franglais for the humour. He resolves the crime with his brain.
Agatha Chritie died in 1978, she had written 73 books of mysteries.
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Modifié par snoo le 03-11-2004 16:45
Bonjour,
Je me demande si cette traduction est juste.
Merci d'avance de me repondre et de me corriger.
Il y a cent ans, le 15 septembre 1890, Agatha Miller est née dans une famille d’anglais de classe supérieure. Elle n’est jamais allé à l’école et s’est apprise à lire, plus tard elle a rencontré le Lieutenant Archie Christie et l’a épousé en 1914. Quand Archie est parti pour la guerre, Agatha est allée travailler à un hôpital local où elle a appris beaucoup sur la médecine, le poison est devenu par la suite sa méthode favorite de meurtre.
Agatha n’a pas fait l’unanimité tout de suite, 4 éditeurs ont refusés son premier livre, en 1920.
Le deuxième livre a été publié en 1922 de cette date elle a publiée au moins un livre chaque années et quelques fois 2 ou 3.
La plupart de ces histoires se déroulent dans des villages anglais calmes où tout le monde est normal jusqu’à ce que l’on découvre un meurtre. Elle avait une très bonne écriture pour créer un suspect de grand nombre, quand vous tournez les pages, le soupçon va d’un suspect à l’autre.
Hercule Poirot est le personnage le plus populaire de Agatha. Il est belge, peu attrayant et snob, il est très poli et parle un Franglais pour l’humour. Il résout le crime avec son cerveau.
Agatha Chritie est morte en 1978, elle avait écrit 73 livres de mystères et de pièces.
Hundred years ago, on September 15th, 1890, Agatha Miller was born in a family of English of superior class. She never went to the school and learnt to read, later she met the Lieutenant Archie Christie and married him in 1914. When Archie left for the war, Agatha went to work on a local hospital where she learnt on the medicine a lot, the poison became afterward its favourite method of murder.
Agatha did not make the unanimity at once, 4 publishers refused his first book, in 1920.
The second book was published in 1922 of this date she published at least a book every years and several times 2 or 3.
Most of these stories take place in quiet English villages where everybody is normal until we discover a murder. She had a very good writing to create a suspect of big number, when you turn pages; the suspicion goes from a suspect to the other one.
Hercule Poirot is the most popular character of Agatha. He is Belgian, little attractive and stuck-up, he is very polite and speaks about a Franglais for the humour. He resolves the crime with his brain.
Agatha Chritie died in 1978, she had written 73 books of mysteries.
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Modifié par snoo le 03-11-2004 16:45
Réponse: re:Traduction de yannloic, postée le 2004-11-03 16:52:27 (S | E)
1) family of English of superior class je mettrai plutôt:
in a superior class familly of English.
2) The second book was published in 1922
from car c'est le point de départ de son écriture prolifique.
she published at least a book a year (c'est plus "english style") and sometimes 2 or 3 in the same year.
3) everybody is normal => everybody seems normal (c'est juste un avis)
4) je ne sais pas si Franglais existe!
Réponse: re:Traduction de ozymandias, postée le 2004-11-03 17:13:29 (S | E)
hello
voilà ce que j'ai relevé de plus flagrant :
Hundred years ago, on September 15th, 1890, Agatha Miller was born in an English upper-class family. She never went to school and learnt to read (alone). Later she met Lieutenant Archie Christie and married him in 1914. When Archie left for the war, Agatha went to work on a local hospital where she studied medicine a lot, afterwards the poison became her favourite method of murdering.
Agatha was not accepted unanimously at once :4 publishers refused her first book in 1920.
The second book was published in 1922. Since then,she published at least a book a year and sometimes 2 or 3.
Most of these stories take place in quiet English villages, where everybody is normal until a murder is discovered. She had a very good writing to create a suspect of big number, ? She really knew how to create a huge number of suspects : when you turn the pages of the book, suspicion goes from a suspect to another.
Hercule Poirot is the most popular character of Agatha. He is Belgian, little attractive and snobbish, he is very polite and speaks a Franglais (mix of French and English) for the humour ? in fun, to make us laugh ?. He solves criminal cases with his brain.
Agatha Chritie died in 1978, she had written 73 books of mysteries and plays.
voilà, il doit y avoir encore d'autres erreurs
en espérant que je ne t'ai pas raconté de bêtises.
Réponse: re:Traduction de madeline3, postée le 2004-11-03 17:27:14 (S | E)
Over a hundred years ago, on September 15th, 1890, Agatha Miller was born in an English Family of superior class. She never went to school or learned to read. Later she met Lieutenant Archie Christie and married him in 1914. When Archie left for the war, Agatha went to work at a local hospital where she learned about medicine. Poison became afterward her favourite method of murder.
Agatha did not become famous at once; in 1920, four publishers refused her first book.
The second book was published in 1922. After this date she published at least a book every year, and in some years she published 2 or 3.
Most of these stories take place in quiet English villages where everybody is normal until a murder happens. She had a very good way of creating different supsects. When you turn pages, the suspicion goes from one suspect to another one.
Hercule Poirot is Agatha's most popular character. He is Belgian, unattractive and stuck-up. He is very polite and speaks about a Franglais for humour. He resolves the crime with his brain.
Agatha Christie died in 1978; she had written 73 mystery novels.
>>>What is Franglais?
Réponse: re:Traduction de yannloic, postée le 2004-11-03 23:35:19 (S | E)
Hello madeline3.
I was quietly sure that you can't understand what franglais means. This designs words in english that doesn't exist in french but that can be used, and that in france we can understand because they are known enough.
For example, here is a list:
abstract résumé, abrégé
ace (tennis) as
acting-out passage à l'acte
after-shave après-rasage
airbag sac d'air, coussin de protection
applet applette, mini-application
aquaplanning aquaglisse
atomizer vaporisateur
attaché-case mallette
audit vérification
baby demi whisky
baby-boom printemps démographique
baby-boomer
baby-foot foot de table*, minifoute
babyliss friseur*
background historique, passé
backspace recule
baskets chaussure de sport
benchmarking référençage
best-of le meilleur de, florilège, compilation
best-seller succès de librairie, livre à succès,
blues (avoir) déprimer
boss patron, chef
catering traitance
challenge défi
chip puce
computer ordinateur
copyright droit d'auteur
crack as, craque, champion
crash catastrophe aérienne
deal marché
dealer revendeur, trafiquant
designer concevoir, dessiner
designe(u)r styliste
downloader télécharger
downsizing dégraissage
draft ébauche, brouillon, avant-projet
exhibition exposition
expertise compétence?
express rapide
fast-food restau-vite
flirt fleurette, amourette
freelance indépendant, solo, pigiste
freesbee discovole, discoplane
freeware gratuiciel, graticel
freezer congélateur, glacière
etc ...
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