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Message de brunk posté le 2004-12-21 10:03:17 (S | E | F | I)
Salut, j'aimerai avoir votre avis sur cet email pour corriger des fautes que je fais tout le temps !!! merci beaucoup ! Je compte sur vous !
How are you ? This is ***.. it's been already 3 months since we left SF and hopefully not more than 10 before going back !! We're planning to go back in california in september (maybe *** told you..) if I can get some vacation (which is definitely not sure) !! I actually found a job since december in France (***) as software engineer in a small company... I was looking for a job abroad (I tryed to check in the bay area) but I couldn't find any opportunities - they're always asking for the green card or for senior workers.. anyway I'll try to work there later,I guess that it will be easier when I have a few years of work experience. So, for the time being I'm stuck in France, 8hours a day, 5 days a week, wondering what is going on in San francisco !! *** told me you were thinking about visiting *** for thanx giving ? btw, are you still subleting your place ?
'Even' in France, we've been trying to party the most we can. We found a really kool bar for going out called *** where they got the world record of the number of rhum cocktails !! Since we found this place, we go there every single weekend !!
ooh.. and I was going to forget ... how is *** ?
Merci
Salut, j'aimerai avoir votre avis sur cet email pour corriger des fautes que je fais tout le temps !!! merci beaucoup ! Je compte sur vous !
How are you ? This is ***.. it's been already 3 months since we left SF and hopefully not more than 10 before going back !! We're planning to go back in california in september (maybe *** told you..) if I can get some vacation (which is definitely not sure) !! I actually found a job since december in France (***) as software engineer in a small company... I was looking for a job abroad (I tryed to check in the bay area) but I couldn't find any opportunities - they're always asking for the green card or for senior workers.. anyway I'll try to work there later,I guess that it will be easier when I have a few years of work experience. So, for the time being I'm stuck in France, 8hours a day, 5 days a week, wondering what is going on in San francisco !! *** told me you were thinking about visiting *** for thanx giving ? btw, are you still subleting your place ?
'Even' in France, we've been trying to party the most we can. We found a really kool bar for going out called *** where they got the world record of the number of rhum cocktails !! Since we found this place, we go there every single weekend !!
ooh.. and I was going to forget ... how is *** ?
Merci
Réponse: re:Correction email de brunk, postée le 2004-12-21 13:57:35 (S | E)
... personne pour une p'tite correction ou avis...
Réponse: re:Correction email de katou88, postée le 2004-12-21 14:31:52 (S | E)
J'ai pas une super expérience en anglais, mais je trouve que ton texte est bon sauf certaines phrases ( mais je suis pas sure du tout hein
it has been already 3 months
I tried to check in the bay
We found a really cool bar for going out called *** where they got the world record of the number of rhum cocktails !!
Voila voila..
Réponse: re:Correction email de brunk, postée le 2004-12-21 14:34:50 (S | E)
Merci, au moins ca fait plaisir d'avoir une réponse !
- Merci pour le tried (javais pas vu)
- Sinon pour que tu progresses :
- 'it's been' et en fait une compression de 'it has been'
- kool et juste une facon plus marrante d'ecrire cool !!
Réponse: re:Correction email de katou88, postée le 2004-12-21 15:01:54 (S | E)
2rien pour la réponse, j'aime pas non plus quand on me répond pas donc j'essaie toujours de répondre aux autres.
Ah merci pour mon amélioration je pense que ' s c'était seulement valable pour is. Et pour le cool, je trouvais ça bien buzarre que tu l'aies écrit comme ça mais je comprend mieux maintenant
!Réponse: re:Correction email de lucile83, postée le 2004-12-21 16:46:47 (S | E)
Hello !!!! glad to see you again !! here is my proposal;
See you soon
How are you ? This is ***.. it's been already 3 months since we left SF and hopefully not more than 10 before going back !! We're planning to go back to california in september (maybe *** told you..) if I can get some vacation (which is definitely not sure) !! I actually found a job starting in december in France (***) as a software engineer in a small company... I was looking for a job abroad (I tried to check in the bay area) but I couldn't find any opportunities - they're always asking for the green card or for senior workers.. anyway I'll try to work there later, I guess it will be easier when I have a few years of work experience. So, for the moment I'm stuck in France, 8hours a day, 5 days a week, wondering what is going on in San francisco !! *** told me you were thinking about visiting *** for thanx giving ? btw, are you still subletting your place ?
'Even' in France, we've been trying to party the most we could. We found a really kool bar for going out called *** where they have got the world ‘s record of the number of rhum cocktails !! Since we have found this place, we go there every single weekend !!
ooh.. and I was going to forget ... how is *** ?
Réponse: re:Correction email de brunk, postée le 2004-12-21 17:01:37 (S | E)
Merci c'est bien sympa ! je suis assez content c'etait pas trop mal !
Take it easy !
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