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Message de bamoo posté le 01-01-2005 à 21:11:39 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, j'aurais besoin d'un peu d'aide pour corriger un texte. En fait, c'est juste une petite présentation que je dois faire à l'oral, mais j'aime autant avoir le moins de fautes possibles :-)
Voici mon texte :
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After the south Asia disaster where more than 100 000 people were killed, solidarity was organized by many countries (including France).
Many people gave money, even with Christmas feasts where everybody spent a lot of money.
For the moment, worldwide donations to aid those battered by the huge waves that slammed Asian (but also African) nations approached $1 billion.
Situation is serious because there is starvation. People haven't had food or water for at least five days. There are dead body and it could have an epidemic.
Hopefully, officials and volunteers struggled to deliver tons of rations, clothes, bed sheets, oil, and other items, hampered by lack of transportation.
France's aid to tsunamis stricken countries rises to 41.3 million euros and the government wants to reduce or cancel debt of these countries. Even the poorest countries in the world want to help since Senegal president offers 150,000 euros to Asia quake victims.
There are also a lot of people who do something (they make donations). Some VIP do advertisement to encourage donations. Enterprises, associations,… feel concerned about people who have lost everything (home, money but particularly their family).
For example, the ATP (the governing body of men's tennis), will donate the $25,000 sanctioning fee for the Chennai Open to UNICEF.
So, everybody wants to help because this is one of the biggest disasters in recent history. I think it a beautiful proof that humans can also do something else that war.
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Merci beaucoup et bonne année !!!
Message de bamoo posté le 01-01-2005 à 21:11:39 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, j'aurais besoin d'un peu d'aide pour corriger un texte. En fait, c'est juste une petite présentation que je dois faire à l'oral, mais j'aime autant avoir le moins de fautes possibles :-)
Voici mon texte :
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After the south Asia disaster where more than 100 000 people were killed, solidarity was organized by many countries (including France).
Many people gave money, even with Christmas feasts where everybody spent a lot of money.
For the moment, worldwide donations to aid those battered by the huge waves that slammed Asian (but also African) nations approached $1 billion.
Situation is serious because there is starvation. People haven't had food or water for at least five days. There are dead body and it could have an epidemic.
Hopefully, officials and volunteers struggled to deliver tons of rations, clothes, bed sheets, oil, and other items, hampered by lack of transportation.
France's aid to tsunamis stricken countries rises to 41.3 million euros and the government wants to reduce or cancel debt of these countries. Even the poorest countries in the world want to help since Senegal president offers 150,000 euros to Asia quake victims.
There are also a lot of people who do something (they make donations). Some VIP do advertisement to encourage donations. Enterprises, associations,… feel concerned about people who have lost everything (home, money but particularly their family).
For example, the ATP (the governing body of men's tennis), will donate the $25,000 sanctioning fee for the Chennai Open to UNICEF.
So, everybody wants to help because this is one of the biggest disasters in recent history. I think it a beautiful proof that humans can also do something else that war.
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Merci beaucoup et bonne année !!!
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