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'indifferent' (correction)
Message de diabless_06 posté le 26-10-2005 à 10:55:50 (S | E | F | I)

Bonjour voici un essaie, je continue à m'exercer pour le bac à la fin de l'année donc pouvez vous me corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît quand vous aurez le temps bien sûr.
Merci pour votre patience

Sujet :

In our 21st century societies, are people becoming more and more indifferent to what happens around them? Give precise examples and analyse them. Give your opinion.

Brouillon (français)

Un sentiment de révolte m'anime lorsque je fais le triste constat de l'avancée inexorable, chaque jour, de l'indifférence sur notre planète. Face à l'actualité concernant des faits récurrents, les : "je n'ai pas regardé ! Je préfère ignorer! Qu’est-ce que tu veux que ça me fasse, ça ne me concerne pas!", sont autant de démonstrations d'indifférence et d'égoïsme, devant des drames qui nous concernent pourtant tous.

Les gens sont de plus en plus indifférents de ce qui se passe autour d'eux, c'est comme si chacun vivait dans son propre monde. Je ne sais pas si c'est par méfiance, par peur ou par ignorance...Tout le monde se dit " je ne me mêle pas" " ça ne me regarde pas" " ce n'est pas mon problème"... On le vit tous les jours, quotidiennement dans la rue… Alors que tout le monde est affecté de près comme de loin par tout ce qui se passe et par tout les évènements qui se déroulent dans le monde.
C'est comme l'histoire de Djouha, ce personnage comique de l'histoire, un jour, alors qu'il était de retour chez lui, on l'arrêta et lui annonça que son village était en feu.
Il répondis froidement : "Khetti Dari" que ma maison ne soit pas brûlée.
Effectivement, sa maison n'avait pas brûlé.
Une autre fois, toujours sur le chemin de retour chez lui, on lui apprend que sa maison est en train de brûler. Mais lui a répondu avec un aire insoucieux: "Khetti Rassi" que seulement ma tête soit sauvée.

La question qu'il aurait du se poser est " si c'était lui qui brûlait, qui avait des problèmes est ce que quelqu'un serait venu a son secours pour le sauver?
Je ne saurai pas répondre, car ce n'est pas tout le monde qui est et qui pense comme lui, il existe sûrement des gens non égoïstes prêts a se sacrifier pour d’autres comme par exemple ces pompiers qui en en portant secours à deux personnes bloquées dans leur voiture lors des inondations dans l’Hérault le 9 septembre 2002 ont connu la mort…


Mais qu’est ce que nous pouvons faire concrètement. Prenons la guerre en Irak, toute la terre entière a manifesté, ça n'a rien changé ! Prendre les armes ? Non ce n’est pas la solution! Le monde est dirigé par quelques hommes et on ne peut rien y faire !

Et pour la pollution tout le monde pourrait apporter du changement par quelques petits gestes que ce soit comme ne pas prendre sa voiture pour des courts trajets, faire du covoiturage et j’en passe…

Vouloir se voiler la face, jouer la "politique de l'autruche", sont les signes d'une indifférence totale pour nos semblables, des êtres humains comme vous et moi cependant. Ne pas connaître quelqu'un ne doit pas vouloir dire l'ignorer. Tous ces faits d'actualité qui nous bouleversent peuvent être notre sort à chacun : demain, dans un mois, dans dix ans mais, je l'espère jamais !
Un sentiment devrait toujours nous animer spontanément avant tout autre : celui d'être solidaire entre nous, celui d'avoir le réflexe inné de vouloir aider, son prochain, l'Humanité. Parce que nous sommes tous frères et sœurs et que nous devons nous aimer.

Méditons cela : l'indifférence est peut être pire que la haine.. Car si je hais quelqu'un aujourd'hui, demain je l'aimerai peut être. Alors que si l'indifférence m'habite, nos regards ne se croiseront sans doute jamais. Jeter sa haine dans l'Amour reste alors la meilleure alternative, et il n'en existe pas dans l'autre cas !
L'indifférence fait irrémédiablement de chaque être humain un aveugle en puissance.

Rédaction d’anglais :
A sensation of revolt animates me when I did the sad report of the inexorable
projection, each day, of the disregard on our planet. Facing the actuality concerning recurrent facts, : "I have not looked! I like better to be ignorent! That does not concern me ! » , are as much demonstration of disregard and of egoism, before dramas who
concern us though all.

People is more and more indifferent of what pass off round them, this is as if each was living in his clean world. I do not know if this is by distrust, by fear or by ignorance..all the world said " I do not mix me " " that does not look me " " this is not my
problem".. When everybody is concerned about when near as distantly by all that pass off and by all events who run out in the world. This is as the history of {Djouha}, this comic personage of the history, a day, when it was being returned to him, one stopped him and announced him that his village was being conflagrant . He answerred coldly : "Khetti Dari" that my house would not been smoulderred. Effectively, his house had not smoulderred. Another occasion, always the way on turn to him, one learns him that his house is abroach to smoulder. But has answerred him with a careless surface: "Khetti Rassi" that only my head so be rescued.

The question that it would have to lay him is " if this was him who was smoulderring, who was having problems perhaps what is somebody would been come has his help to save him?
I will not know to answer, because this is not everybody who is and who thinks as him, it exists surely people no egoistic lending to sacrifice for other as for example those firemen who in handle help two persons jammed in their carts on inundations in Hérault the 9 September 2002 have known the dead.

But what is what we can be concretely. Let us take the war in Irak, all the land entire has demonstrated, that nothing has not changed ! To take up arms ? No this is not the solution!
The world is directed by a few men and one can not do nothing him !

And for the pollution everybody could bring of the change by a few short
gestures soever as not to take his car for journeys quickests ways, to do of
the [co-conveyance] and I pass .

Will veil the face, to play the "policy of the ostrich", are signs of a total disregard for our fellows, human beings as you and me. Not to know must not somebody will not say to be ignorent him. All those topical facts who upset us can be our lot to each : tomorrow, in a month, in ten years but, I hope him ever ! A sensation always ought to animate us spontaneously above everything else other : that to being interdependent between ourselves , that to having the inborn reflex of will help, his neighbour, the Humanity. Because we are all brethren and sisters and that we must love us.

Let us meditate that : the disregard is perhaps worse that the hate.. Because if I hate somebody today, tomorrow I will love him perhaps . When if the disregard inhabits me, our looks will not cross no doubt ever. To throw his hate in the Love rest then the alternative better, and it not in exists not in the other case ! The disregard is irremediably of each human being a blind man in power.
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Edité par bridg le 26-10-2005 11:19


Réponse: 'indifferent' (correction) de babyscot59, postée le 26-10-2005 à 11:53:22 (S | E)
A sensation of revolt animates me when I did the sad report of the inexorable projection, each day, of the disregard on our planet. Facing the actuality concerning recurrent facts, : "I have not looked! I'd rather be ignorent! That does not concern me ! » , are as much demonstrationsof disregard and of egoism, before tragedies that concern us all though.


People are more and more indifferent to what happens round them, this is as if each was living in its own world. I do not know if this is by distrust, by fear or by ignorance..all the world said " I do not mix me " " that's none of my business" " this is not my
problem". We experience that everyday in the street and everybody is somehow affected by what occurs in the world

This is as the history of {Djouha}, , a day, when he was on his way home , somebody stopped him and announced him that his village was on fire . He answerred coldly : "Khetti Dari" that my house shall not burn. Effectively, Indeed his house didn't burn Another occasion, always on his way back home, one learns him that his house is about to burn. But has answered him in a careless way: "Khetti Rassi" be my head only safe

The question he should have asked to himself is " if this was him who was burning who was having troubles, would there be someone to rescue him? I cannot answer, because this is not everybody who is and who thinks as him, there may be selfishless people ready to sacrifice for others as for example those firemen who helped two persons jammed in their carts during the floods in Hérault on September, 9th 2002 and who died.

But what can we actually do? Let us take the war in Irak, the whole world has demonstrated, that nothing has changed ! To take up arms ? No this is not the solution!
The world is directed by afew men and one can not do anything about it!

And for the pollution everybody could bring of the change by a few short
gestures soever as not to take his car for journeys quickests ways, to practice carpool and so one.

Will veil the face, to play the "policy of the ostrich", are signs of a total disregard for our fellows, human beings as you and me. Not to know must not somebody doesn't mean to be ignorent him. All those topical facts who upset us can be our lot to each : tomorrow, in a month, in ten years but, I do not hope it ! A sensation ought to animate us spontaneously above everything else : being interdependent between ourselves , having the inborn reflex to help, ours neighbours mankind. Because we are all brethren and sisters and that we must love us.

Let us meditate that : disregard is perhaps worse than hatred Because if I hate somebody today, tomorrow I will love him perhaps . When if the disregard inhabits me, our looks will not cross no doubt ever. To throw his hate in the Love rest then the alternative better, and it not in exists not in the other case ! disregard makes each human being a blind man "

Apprenez à utiliser votre dictionnaire et à verifier les entrées pour les most que vous utilisez
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Edité par bridg le 26-10-2005 11:55
bug couleurs réparé


Réponse: 'indifferent' (correction) de diabless_06, postée le 26-10-2005 à 12:36:47 (S | E)
Oulala beaucoup d'erreur encore va falloir que je m'y remètte merci beaucoup c'est très gentil d'avoir pris de votre temps...


Réponse: 'indifferent' (correction) de jardin62, postée le 26-10-2005 à 15:51:11 (S | E)
Bonjour.

Each day when I sadly realise that people's indifference inexorably grows throughout the world I feel more and more revolted. Phrases like 'I didn't see', 'I prefer not to know', 'So what ?', 'This has nothing to do with me !'...are signs of indifference and selfishness in front of tragedies which concern all of us however.

People are more and more indifferent to what happens, as if each of them was living in a separate world. I don't know whether it's fear or ignorance. Every one says : ' I don't care'..., 'it's not my problem'..., ' I don't want to know about that'...We can experience that in everyday's life. But, how can one not be affected by the events that shake the other parts of the world ?

Let me tell to you about Djouba : One day, while he was back home, he was told that his village was on fire. He quietly replied : ' Khetti Dari', that is : 'My house be saved !' As a matter of fact his house was not lost.
Later on, coming back home again, he was told that his house was burning. But he just replied carelessly : 'Khetti Rassi !' That is : ' My head be saved !'

Couldn't he have asked himself if anyone would have come to rescue him if he had been in a difficult situation himself ?
I personally wouldn't be able to give a right answer : fortunately not every one is and reacts so selfishly as Djouba !
There are generous people ready to give their lives for the others : let's think of these firemen who died on september 9th 2002 while they were trying to rescue two people blocked in their car during those terrible floods in Hérault...

On the other hand, what can effectively be done ?
Let's take the example of the war in Iracq. Although a vast majority of the world have demonstrated, nothing has changed.
Some would suggest to take up arms...It isn't the solution, I say !
I think our world is ruled by a few important men and then so, what can we do ?

*(Ici il faudrait une transition)

Each of us could bring a little change in things as far as pollution is concerned : each of us should be able to behave differently.
Why not walk instead of drive to the shop at the corner ?
Why not practise 'carpool' ? and so on ...

How can we think that covering one's face with a veil, or ' burying one's head in the sand' will solve anything ? These attitudes are the true signs of a total indifference towards human beings. Not knowing someone doesn't mean ignoring him / her !

I want to remember that tomorrow I shall perhaps be a victim of a tragedy ! I do not wish it of course, but why should we be spared after all ?
The first feeling that should come straight forward to our hearts is 'solidarity'. We are all brethren (terme réservé au monde religieux) and sisters and we should love one another.

Let's ponder over this : indifference is probably worse than hatred.
- If I hate someone today, who knows if I shan't love him tomorrow ?
Whereas, if I only feel indifferent, I doubt whether my eyes will ever meet his!
Let's transform our Hatred into Love ! That's the only answer.
Indifference blinds people in the long end run...


(Petit aveu : je ne me suis pas relue avec l 'aperçu du message' qui met bien en évidence les erreurs de frappe et autres, alors je ne suis pas sûre à 100%100 de ce que je poste.

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Edité par jardin62 le 26-10-2005 15:52

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Edité par traviskidd le 26-10-2005 18:07
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Edité par traviskidd le 27-10-2005 00:55


Réponse: 'indifferent' (correction) de diabless_06, postée le 26-10-2005 à 19:38:51 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup encore une fois jardin62 d'avoir pris la peine de me consacrer un peu de votre temps


Réponse: 'indifferent' (correction) de jardin62, postée le 26-10-2005 à 20:58:07 (S | E)
Thank you very much, Traviskidd.

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Edité par traviskidd le 27-10-2005 00:56
Anytime




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