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trigonometry (correction)
Message de sylvia147 posté le 03-02-2006 à 11:48:55 (S | E | F | I)
Salut ! je voudrais savoir s'il n'y a pas de fautes et que le temps est correct, et si les phrases sont correct!
merci !
He took his exam ! He concentrated his revision on trigonomitry because he knew they concentrated on calculus last year !
He took his pen but as his neighbour took too ! Mr Bean retorted by taking many pens. He wanted to impress his neighbour.
He took too his alarm clock, the pink panther, and other toy. He behave like a child because he played with his toys.
his neighbour believed that it was a insane.
The examination started ! When Mr Bean opened his envelop he have seen than the subject dealed with on calculus. He was panick and shaked ! He tried to cheat on his neighbour by all possible means ! For example : he passed under the table and stole the sheet of his neighbour.
Two minutes before the ring, he had fulfiled there was an other subject on trigonomitry !
He stole the pen of his neighbour whereas he had a lot of pens ! he was very panick and angry because he had not finished !
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Edité par bridg le 03-02-2006 11:51
titre/ soyez originale pour l'archivage des sujets afin qu'on les retrouve en cas de besoin. Merci
Message de sylvia147 posté le 03-02-2006 à 11:48:55 (S | E | F | I)
Salut ! je voudrais savoir s'il n'y a pas de fautes et que le temps est correct, et si les phrases sont correct!
merci !
He took his exam ! He concentrated his revision on trigonomitry because he knew they concentrated on calculus last year !
He took his pen but as his neighbour took too ! Mr Bean retorted by taking many pens. He wanted to impress his neighbour.
He took too his alarm clock, the pink panther, and other toy. He behave like a child because he played with his toys.
his neighbour believed that it was a insane.
The examination started ! When Mr Bean opened his envelop he have seen than the subject dealed with on calculus. He was panick and shaked ! He tried to cheat on his neighbour by all possible means ! For example : he passed under the table and stole the sheet of his neighbour.
Two minutes before the ring, he had fulfiled there was an other subject on trigonomitry !
He stole the pen of his neighbour whereas he had a lot of pens ! he was very panick and angry because he had not finished !
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Edité par bridg le 03-02-2006 11:51
titre/ soyez originale pour l'archivage des sujets afin qu'on les retrouve en cas de besoin. Merci
Réponse: trigonometry (correction) de steeve34, postée le 03-02-2006 à 13:25:41 (S | E)
Hello,
Quelques remarques:
To deal with: to deal est un verbe irrégulier.
Avec le verbe to steal il faut utiliser la préposition from.
To cheat on sb :to be unfaithful to your husband or wife.
Ce n'est donc pas ce verbe qu'il faut employer ici.
Pourquoi mettez-vous des points d'exclamation partout ?
See you soon.
Réponse: trigonometry (correction) de sylvia147, postée le 03-02-2006 à 14:37:24 (S | E)
boujour !
je mets quel verbe à la place de cheat (tricher )!
parce que dans mon dictionnaire je vois que ce verbe !
"!" : il y a aucune signification
merci
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Modifié par bridg le 03-02-2006 15:15
Réponse: trigonometry (correction) de willy, postée le 03-02-2006 à 17:53:06 (S | E)
Hello !
Tu utilises :
- to crib from (a friend, another student, a student sitting next to you, ...)
- to crib/to copy another student's work.
NB : tricher = copier ; quand on ne trouve pas, il faut chercher des synonymes en langue maternelle ; quand tu as trouvé une traduction qui paraît convenir, tu dois aller contrôler le sens et l'usage dans la partie anglais-français.
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Modifié par willy le 03-02-2006 17:53
Réponse: trigonometry (correction) de jardin62, postée le 03-02-2006 à 19:16:02 (S | E)
Bonsoir.
- Les temps employés me ' chiffonnent'...
Etait-il en train de ... ? auquel cas : past continuous.
He was taking his exam.
+ plu perfect :
He had concentrated
They had concentrated on...
...had not finished
He was behaving as a child playing with his toys.
His neighbour seemed to be sure that Mr Bean was completely crazy.
He saw
He was panicked
- Phrase incorrecte - le sens ? - : 'Two minutes ...'
His neighbour's pen : cas possessif
Orthographe :
envelope - other toys
Réponse: trigonometry (correction) de jardin62, postée le 03-02-2006 à 20:12:59 (S | E)
J'ajoute :
- trigonometry
* Avez-vous été jeté un coup d'oeil dans un bon dictionnaire pour savoir à quoi correspond exactement le mot que vous employez : calculus ?
* Qu'est-ce que vous vouliez exactement traduire ? des calculs arithmétiques ? => arithmetics...
ou bien le calcul infinitésimal, ou de probabilités => differential and integral calculus, theory of probabilities ...
Réponse: trigonometry (correction) de sylvia147, postée le 04-02-2006 à 08:40:39 (S | E)
"jardin62" en fait c'est notre professeur qui a donné ce mot " calculus" !
on a vu un film de mr bean et on doit maintenant faire un résumé !
"two minutes .." est incorrecte ?! je mets quoi à la place
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Modifié par bridg le 04-02-2006 10:42
Réponse: trigonometry (correction) de willy, postée le 04-02-2006 à 09:03:19 (S | E)
Hello !
Two minutes before the bell rang, he realized (noticed) (to fulfil, fulfill(US) = accomplir, exécuter, réaliser un plan, un rêve, un ordre, une tâche - voir mon commentaire sur l'usage du dictionnaire !) that he had left a question unanswered/that he hadn't answered a question.
He snatched (s'empara de) a pen from his neighbour though he had lots
Voilà ce que je te propose pour la fin. A toi de voir si cela te convient.
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Modifié par traviskidd le 04-02-2006 10:44
neighbor(US)
INDISPENSABLES : 