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Some hours with Betty/Traduction
Message de lucile83 posté le 13-12-2006 à 17:55:08 (S | E | F | I)
Hello,
Quelques nouvelles de cette chère Betty ....
correction par mp sans smiley rouge j'espère 
Vous devez traduire en entier
See you soon
Comme prévu Bobby arriva à 20h chez Betty qui avait dormi presque toute la journée tellement elle était fatiguée. Elle avait mis une très belle robe rouge et des chaussures noires à talons ce qui lui donnait l’air d’une princesse. Bobby fut impressionné et lui offrit les fleurs qu’il venait d’acheter à la boutique du coin. Ils parlèrent pendant un long moment et Bobby proposa qu’ils aillent au restaurant ce qui plut beaucoup à Betty. Dix minutes après un taxi les attendait et les conduisit au restaurant préféré de Betty. Ils passèrent une excellente soirée et Bobby raccompagna Betty chez elle.
Vous connaîtrez la suite quand ce petit texte aura été corrigé.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-12-2006 13:38
Je précise à nouveau que vous devez traduire le texte en entier, donc la dernière phrase aussi "Vous connaîtrez.....été corrigé" ; certains sont déjà tombés dans le piège de ne pas bien lire les consignes
Message de lucile83 posté le 13-12-2006 à 17:55:08 (S | E | F | I)
Hello,
Quelques nouvelles de cette chère Betty ....
correction par mp sans smiley rouge j'espère Vous devez traduire en entier
See you soon
Comme prévu Bobby arriva à 20h chez Betty qui avait dormi presque toute la journée tellement elle était fatiguée. Elle avait mis une très belle robe rouge et des chaussures noires à talons ce qui lui donnait l’air d’une princesse. Bobby fut impressionné et lui offrit les fleurs qu’il venait d’acheter à la boutique du coin. Ils parlèrent pendant un long moment et Bobby proposa qu’ils aillent au restaurant ce qui plut beaucoup à Betty. Dix minutes après un taxi les attendait et les conduisit au restaurant préféré de Betty. Ils passèrent une excellente soirée et Bobby raccompagna Betty chez elle.
Vous connaîtrez la suite quand ce petit texte aura été corrigé.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-12-2006 13:38
Je précise à nouveau que vous devez traduire le texte en entier, donc la dernière phrase aussi "Vous connaîtrez.....été corrigé" ; certains sont déjà tombés dans le piège de ne pas bien lire les consignes
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de frapedur, postée le 13-12-2006 à 18:09:05 (S | E)
Bonjour Lucile, je vais essayer mais le texte me paraît assez difficile
Like predicted, Bobby arrived to Betty at eight p.m who has slept about all day so she was tired. She weared a very beautiful red robe ans black shoes with heel, that she looks a princess like. Bobby was impressed and gave flowers which he bought in the boutik of coin. The spoke during a long time and Bobby put they go in the restaurant forward, and Betty was happy. After ten minutes, a taxi waited them and drived them in the restaurant that Betty prefered. They passed an excellent evening and Bobby came back Betty.
Voilà Lucile, j'ai essayé mais il y avait quelques phrases que je n'arrivais pas traduire donc j'ai reformulé à ma façon.
Je verrais bien la correction de toute façon
Et
pour l'exercice-------------------
Modifié par frapedur le 14-12-2006 19:55
You'll know the following episode when this short text has been corrected
désolé Lucile Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de magmatic_rock, postée le 13-12-2006 à 18:54:21 (S | E)
Hello,
ça faisait bien longtemps que je n'avais plus fait d'exercices mais maintenant c'est les vacances alors j'en profite
As expected, Bobby showed up at 8:00pm at Betty's who had slept almost all day long so tired she was. She dressed up with a georgeous red dress and black heels which made her look like a princess. Bobby was impressed and gave her the flowers he had just bought at the corner shop. They spoke for a long while and Bobby suggested to go to the restaurant that (not sure about the preposition there, how about which?) Betty really appreciated. Ten minutes later, a cab was waiting for them and drove them to Betty's favorite restaurant. They spent a wicked evening and Bobby took Betty back home.
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Modifié par magmatic_rock le 13-12-2006 21:41
You'll find out the continuation when this short text has been corrected.
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de fenics, postée le 13-12-2006 à 21:37:24 (S | E)
Hello lucile83,
Je me lance même si je crains les smiley rouges en abondance vu les nombreuses difficultés que comporte
As expected Bobby arrived at 8:00 p.m at
You'll know the continuation when this little text has been corrected.
Bye.
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Modifié par fenics le 13-12-2006 22:48
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-12-2006 09:02
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Modifié par fenics le 15-12-2006 11:34 correction
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de nanette33, postée le 14-12-2006 à 10:47:28 (S | E)
Hello Lucile
As expected, Bobby arrived at 8 p.m. at Betty's who had slept almost all day, she was so tired. She wore a very beautiful red dress and black heeled shoes which made her a look like a princess. Bobby was impressed and gave her some flowers which he had just bought to the corner shop. They spoke during a long moment and Bobby offered to go to the restaurant that Betty enjoyed really. Ten minutes later, a taxi was waiting for them et drove them to the Betty's favourite restaurant. They spent an excellent evening and Bobby took Betty home. You'll know the rest when this little text is marked.
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Modifié par nanette33 le 14-12-2006 17:50
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de pepe69, postée le 14-12-2006 à 11:43:13 (S | E)
Hello lucile,
Here is my proposal:
As planned, Bobby arrived at 8pm at Betty's who had slept almost all day so tired she was. She had put on a very beautiful red dress and black heels, which made her look like a princess. Bobby was overawed and gave her the flowers he had just bought at the florist's on the corner. They talked for a good while and Bobby suggested to go to the restaurant, which Beety like very much. Ten minutes later, a taxi was waiting for them and drove them to Betty's favourite restaurant. They spent a nice evening and Bobby went with Betty to her home.
Subsidiarily---> You will know the continuation when this little text has been corrected.
lucile-------------------
Modifié par pepe69 le 20-12-2006 07:35
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de shinygirl, postée le 14-12-2006 à 12:20:07 (S | E)
Bonjour lucile,
2ème proposition!
As planned, Bobby came at 8pm at Betty's who had slept almost during all day so much she was tired. She had put a very beautiful red dress and black heeled shoes so that she looked like a princess. Bobby was impressed and offered her the flowers which it had just bought in the corner-shop. They talked for a long moment and Bobby proposed that they go to the restaurant what Betty liked much. Ten minutes later, a taxi waited for them and drove them to the Betty’s preferred restaurant. They had an excellent evening and Bobby accompanied back Betty at her home.
You will know the continuation when this small text is corrected.
See you
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de annie, postée le 14-12-2006 à 12:45:17 (S | E)
Hello Lucille,
As expected , Bobby arrived at Betty’s home at 20h.She was so tired that she had slept nearly all day. She put on a very beautiful red dress and black heels which made her seem a princess. Bobby was impressed and gave her the flowers he just bought at the corner shop.
They spoke for a long time and Bobby offered they went to the restaurant which Betty like very much. Ten minutes after, a cab was waiting for them and drove to Betty’s favourite restaurant. They spent an excellent evening and Bobby got Betty back home.
You will know the rest when this short text is marked.
See you soon
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de marie11, postée le 14-12-2006 à 13:06:44 (S | E)
Bonjour lucile,
At the appointed time, Bobby arrived at 8pm at Betty's, who had slept almost the whole day so exhausted she was. She was wearing a resplendent red dress and black high-heeled shoes, which made her look like a princess.
Bobby was impressed and he offered her a bunch of flowers he had just bought at the florist's around the corner.
They had a chat for a while and then Bobby suggested that they go out for a meal, which made Betty enthusiastic.
Ten minutes later a taxi was waiting for them outside and drove them to Betty's favourite restaurant.
They spent a delightful evening and Bobby took Betty (back) home.
You'll know what follows when this short text has been corrected.
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de traviskidd, postée le 14-12-2006 à 15:35:32 (S | E)
As planned, Bobby arrived at Betty's at 8:00pm; Betty had been sleeping almost all day so tired was she. She had put on a very beautiful red dress and black high-heeled shoes which made her look like a princess. Bobby was impressed and presented her the flowers he had just bought at the shop around the corner. They talked for some time and Bobby proposed that they go to the restaurant which pleased Betty a lot. Ten minutes afterward a taxi was waiting for them and drove them to Betty's favorite restaurant. They had an excellent evening and Bobby accompanied Betty back to her place.
You'll know what happened next when this little text has been corrected! (Please don't keep us in suspense too long; this is getting juicy!
)Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de iry43, postée le 14-12-2006 à 16:37:21 (S | E)
Bonjour lucile ,
As planned Bobby arrived at 8 o'clock to Betty, who had slept almost all day long, so she was tired. She had put a very nice red dress and black heel shoes, which gave her Princess'look. Bobby was impressed and gave her flowers which he had just bought on the shop corner.They talked during a long moment and Bobby suggested to go to the restaurant, that's appealed a lot to Betty. Ten minutes later, a cab was waiting for them and drove them to Betty's favorite restaurant.They spent a great evening and Bobby took back Betty at home.
You will know the follow, when this short text will have been corrected.
a lot.-------------------
Modifié par iry43 le 14-12-2006 16:47
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de bridg, postée le 14-12-2006 à 16:37:22 (S | E)
As scheduled Bobby arrived at 8pm at Betty's who had slept almost all day long, she was that tired. She wore a very nice red dress and black heels which made her look like a princess.
Bobby was impressed and gave her some flowers he had just bought at the corner shop. They spoke for a long while and Bobby suggested eating out which made Betty very pleased. 
Ten minutes later a taxi was waiting for them and drove them to Betty's favourite restaurant. They enjoyed their evening and Bobby drove Betty back home. You'll read their happy end when this little text has been corrected
LucileRéponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de whynot95, postée le 14-12-2006 à 17:46:01 (S | E)
Hello dear Lucile.
As planned Bobby arrived at 8pm at Betty's who had slept almost all day so tired she was. She had put on a very beautiful red dress and black heels which made her look like a princess. Bobby was impressed and offered her the flowers which he had just bought at the shop on the corner. They spoke during a long moment and Bobby proposed they go to the restaurant which Betty liked very much. Ten minutes after a taxi was waiting for them and drove them to Betty's favorite restaurant. They spent an excellent evening and Bobby took Betty back home. You will know the continuation when this small text has been corrected.
Thanks a lot.
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de vero7000, postée le 14-12-2006 à 18:02:57 (S | E)
Ayez pitié des phrases traduites par une débutante!!
As expected Bobby arrived at eight o'clock pm at Betty's , who had been slept almost all the day.... she had been so tired.
She had has been wearing a beautiful red dress and black high-heel shoes, she looked like a princess.
Bobby was impressed and offered some flowers that he bought at the shop in at the corner. They spoke for a long time and Bobby proposed to go to a restaurant which interested Betty very much.
Ten minutes later, a taxi was waiting.... them and drove them to favorite favourite Betty's restaurant restaurant of Betty. They slipped by a wonderful evening and Bobby met drove Betty back at her home.
You'll know the end when this little story has had been corrected.
Puis-je inventer la fin?
Lucile -------------------
Modifié par vero7000 le 15-12-2006 16:36
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de maya13, postée le 14-12-2006 à 19:09:48 (S | E)
hello Lucille,
As planned, Bobby arrived at 8 p.m. at Betty's who had slept nearly the whole day tired as she was. She was wearing a very nice red dress and high-heeled black shoes that made her look like a princess. Bobby was gobsmacked and offered her flowers he had just bought at the shop round the corner. They talked for a long while and Bobby suggested to go to the restaurant, that delighted Betty. Ten minutes later, a taxi was waiting for them and drove them to Betty's favourite restaurant. They spent a great evening and Bobby took Betty back home.
(You'll know the following episode when this short text has been corrected)
It's nice to have some fresh news from Betty thank you Lucille.
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de mp27, postée le 15-12-2006 à 07:35:08 (S | E)
Hello lucile83!
I'm very happy to hear from Betty again! (I mean, Betty - and- Bobby)
As planned, Bobby arrived at Betty's at 8pm. She had been asleep for almost a whole day as she was so tired! She had put on a very beautiful red dress and black high-heeled shoes, which made her appear like a princess. Bobby was impressed and gave her the flowers he had just bought at the corner shop. They talked for a long while then Bobby suggested they go to the restaurant, which pleased Betty a lot. Ten minutes later, a taxi was waiting for them and drove them to Betty's favourite restaurant. They spent a marvellous evening and Bobby went back with Betty to her place.
What happened next? You'll know about it when I've finished correcting this little text.
-- Est-ce que "a great deal" aurait ici le même sens que "a lot" / "quite a lot"? Je ne sais pas s'il vaut mieux mettre simplement "very much".
-- (Je te laisse aussi la traduction plus proche de ta dernière phrase ---> You'll know what happened next when this little text has been corrected.)
Many thanks!... Bonnes corrections (et on attend patiemment "la suite", en espérant encore quelques bons épisodes avant "la fin").
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de cat3, postée le 15-12-2006 à 16:33:00 (S | E)
Bonjour Lucile
As planed,Bobby arrived at 8 p.m at Betty's who had splet almost all the day long,so she was tired She had put a very beautiful red dress and black heels So,she looked like a princess
Bobby was impressed and gave her some flowers,he had just bought at the shop around the corner
They spoke for a long moment and Bobby suggested to go to the restaurant that pleased Betty very much Ten minutes later,a cab was waiting for them ,to Betty's favourite restaurant .They spent an excellent evening and Bobby took back Betty at her home
You will know the following when this short text has been corrected
Merci Lucile
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de coferam, postée le 15-12-2006 à 16:42:05 (S | E)
Bonjour Lucile83
As scheduled Bobby arrived at eight o’clock pm at Betty who had slept all the day so she was tired. She wore a very nice red dress and black-heeled shoes ; she was looking a princess. Bobby was impressed and offered her the flowers which he came to buy to the shop at the corner. They talked for a long time and Bobby suggested to go to restaurant what liked much at Betty. Ten minutes after a taxi waited them and drove them to Betty’s prefered restaurant. They spent a keen evening and Bobby got back Betty at home.
Merci et bonne soirée.
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Modifié par coferam le 15-12-2006 16:42
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de adamolma4, postée le 15-12-2006 à 17:41:07 (S | E)
Hello lucile
As planned, Bobby arrived at 8.00pm at Betty's who had slept almost all day so tired she was.
She put on an alluring red dress and black heeled-shoes which made her look like a princess. Bobby was impressed and gave her the bunch of flowers he had just bought at the corner shop. They talked for a while together and Bobby suggested to go to the restaurant which enjoyed Betty a lot.
Ten minutes later a Cab was waiting for them and drove them at Betty's favourite restaurant.
They spent a pleasant evening and Bobby took Betty home.
You will know the following episode when this little passage will have been corrected.
Thank you very much lucile and see you soon.
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de masselotte, postée le 16-12-2006 à 08:57:25 (S | E)
Bonjour Lucile83
As expected Bobby arrived at 8.00 p.m at Betty’s home who almost slept all day so tired she was. She had put her beautiful red dress and a pair of black heels which made her look like a princess. Bobby was impressed and he offered to her flowers that he bought on the boutique corner. Both talked for a long time and Bobby proposed to her to go to the restaurant and Betty had been delighted by this proposal . Ten minutes later a taxi waited and driving them to preferred Betty restaurant. They spent a good evening and Bobby drove back Betty home. You will be able to know the sequel when the little text will has been corrected .
------------------- Merci lucile83
Modifié par masselotte le 16-12-2006 17:51
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de magstmarc, postée le 16-12-2006 à 16:21:30 (S | E)
Hi Lucile,
My first try in translations... hope it's not too bad
Like it had been planned, Bobby arrived at 8 P.M. at Betty's place. She was so tired she had been sleeping almost all day long. She had a very nice red dress and black high heel shoes on, which made her look like a princess. Bobby felt impressed and offerred her the flowers he had just bought in the local shop. They talked for a long while, then Bobby suggested they went to the restaurant, which pleased Betty very much. Ten minutes later, a taxi was waiting for them and drove them to Betty's favourite restaurant.. They had an excellent evening, then Bobby took Betty back to her home.
You'll know what follows when this little text has been corrected.
Thank you Lucile
I'm dying to know what happens next!
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de nick27, postée le 16-12-2006 à 16:38:53 (S | E)
Hello Lucile
As planned Bobby arrived at Betty's at 8:00 pm who had been sleeping for almost the whole day as she was exhausted. She had put on a beautiful red dress and black high-heeled shoes with which made her look like a princess. Bobby was impressed and gave her the flowers he had just bought at the corner shop. They talked for a long time and then Bobby suggested her to go to the restaurant. Betty liked the idea. Ten minutes later, a taxi was waiting for them and took them to Betty's favourite restaurant. They had a wonderful evening and Bobby drove Betty back home.
You will find out about what happened next when the short text has been corrected.
Thanks!
Bye
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de aimen7, postée le 16-12-2006 à 17:06:56 (S | E)
Hello lucile,
As planned, Bobby arrived at 8.00 pm at Betty's who had been sleeping almost the whole day as she was so tired. She had put on a very nice red dress and black heeled shoes which made her look like a princess.
Bobby was impressed and offered her the flowers he had just bought at the boutique nearby. They talked for a long while and Bobby suggested that they go to the restaurant which pleased Betty a lot.
Ten minutes afterwards, a taxi was waiting for them and drove them to Betty's favourite restaurant. They spent an excellent evening and Bobby took Betty home.
You'll know what happened next as soon as this little text has been corrected.
Vite la suite!!!
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de lucile83, postée le 17-12-2006 à 08:04:53 (S | E)
et Voici ma proposition :As planned Bobby arrived at 8.00 p.m. at Betty’s and found out she had slept nearly all day long so tired she was. She was wearing a very beautiful red dress and black heels, which was making her look like a princess. Bobby was impressed and he offered her the flowers he had just bought at the shop round the corner. They talked for a long time and Bobby suggested they would go to the restaurant , an idea that Betty found very enjoyable. Ten minutes later a taxi was waiting for them and drove them to Betty’s favourite restaurant. They spent a gorgeous evening and then Bobby drove Betty back home.
You’ll know what happens next when this short text has been corrected.
See you soon
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de mumuche, postée le 17-12-2006 à 15:23:07 (S | E)
You have to translate the whole text.
As arranged,Bobby arrived at Betty`s place at 08h00 pm.Betty had been sleeping all day long as she was exhausted. She had put on a very pretty red dress and black high heel shoes,which made her look like a princess.Bobby was very impressed and gave her the flowers he had just bought from the shop round the corner.
They talked for a very long time and Bobby offerd Betty to go to the restaurant, which she really appreciated.Ten minutes later, a taxi was waiting for them and drove them to Betty`s favourite restaurant.
They spent a brilliant night and Bobby brought Betty back home.
You will know the following as soon as the text is corrected.
Réponse: Some hours with Betty/Traduction de maylie, postée le 18-12-2006 à 19:41:32 (S | E)
As he said it, Bobby arrived at 20 H to Betty who had slept nearly all the day because she was so much tired. She putted a very nice red dress and high heels black shoes, she seemed to be a princess. Bobby was impressed and offered her flowers that he just bought at the corner shop. They talked while a long moment and Bobby proposed the go to restaurant, Betty enjoyed it very much. Ten minutes after, a taxi waited for them and drove them to Betty's prefered restaurant. They had an excellent evening and Bobby took home her. You'll know the continuation when this little text will be corrected.
INDISPENSABLES : 