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Message de lizie posté le 21-02-2007 à 15:17:06 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour!!!!
pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes d'orthographe et de grammaire s'il vous plait??!!
et me dire ce qui n'est pas comprehensible??!!
je dois effectuer cette fiche lecture pour la rentrée!!!!!
merci d'avance!!
THE LANDLADY from kiss kiss by ROALD DAHL!!!
age: Billy Weaver was seventeen years old
physical description: He was wearing a new navy-blue overcoat, a new brown trilby hat, and a new brown suit, and he was feeling fine.
psychological portrait: he is energetic. Briskness, he had decided was the once common characteristic of all successful buisnessmen. He is amazing. He is enthusiasts.
occupation: businessmen
background: billy weaver had travelled down from london on the slow afternoon train, with a change at swindon on the way, and by the time he got to bath it was about nine o'clock in the evening and the moon coming up out of a clear starry sky over the houses opposite the station entrance. But the air was deadly cold and the wind was like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks.
Billy weaver had never never been to bath before. He didn't know anyone who lived there.
he walking briskly because he had decided, was the one common characteristic of all successful businessmen.
We can think that this story spends the winter, and in the evening, because billy arrives to bath it was about nine o'clock in the evening, and the air was cold and the wind was like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks.
Message de lizie posté le 21-02-2007 à 15:17:06 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour!!!!
pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes d'orthographe et de grammaire s'il vous plait??!!
et me dire ce qui n'est pas comprehensible??!!
je dois effectuer cette fiche lecture pour la rentrée!!!!!
merci d'avance!!
THE LANDLADY from kiss kiss by ROALD DAHL!!!
age: Billy Weaver was seventeen years old
physical description: He was wearing a new navy-blue overcoat, a new brown trilby hat, and a new brown suit, and he was feeling fine.
psychological portrait: he is energetic. Briskness, he had decided was the once common characteristic of all successful buisnessmen. He is amazing. He is enthusiasts.
occupation: businessmen
background: billy weaver had travelled down from london on the slow afternoon train, with a change at swindon on the way, and by the time he got to bath it was about nine o'clock in the evening and the moon coming up out of a clear starry sky over the houses opposite the station entrance. But the air was deadly cold and the wind was like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks.
Billy weaver had never never been to bath before. He didn't know anyone who lived there.
he walking briskly because he had decided, was the one common characteristic of all successful businessmen.
We can think that this story spends the winter, and in the evening, because billy arrives to bath it was about nine o'clock in the evening, and the air was cold and the wind was like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks.
Réponse: besoin d'aide the landlady roald dah de mp27, postée le 21-02-2007 à 16:17:41 (S | E)
Hello lizie!
-- buisnessme--> fais appel à ton dictionnaire pour rectifier
-- He is enthusiasts. --> pas de “s” et vérifie la traduction de cet “adjectif” dans le dictionnaire
-- occupation: businessmen. Singulier, donc, pas “men”....
-- Majuscules que tu dois mettre :
- billy weaver – prénom et nom
- swindon --> ville, donc, majuscule
- bath--> ville, donc, majuscule
-- he walking briskly --> qu'as-tu oublié?
-- he had decided, was --> le sujet de was est absent...
-- this story spends the winter--> non, pas le verbe “spend”. Vérifie la traductiom de “se passer” (lieu) dans ton dictionnaire
-- because billy arrives to bath it was..--> un mot manque entre because et “Billy”
-- and the air was cold and the wind was like a ...--> supprime le premier “and”
Réponse: besoin d'aide the landlady roald dah de lizie, postée le 21-02-2007 à 17:01:54 (S | E)
age: Billy Weaver was seventeen years old
physical description: He was wearing a new navy-blue overcoat, a new brown trilby hat, and a new brown suit, and he was feeling fine.
psychological portrait: he is energetic. Briskness, he had decided was the once common characteristic of all successful businessmen. He is amazing. He is enthusiastic.
occupation: businessman
background: Billy Weaver had travelled down from London on the slow afternoon train, with a change at Swindon on the way, and by the time he got to Bath it was about nine o'clock in the evening and the moon coming up out of a clear starry sky over the houses opposite the station entrance. But the air was deadly cold and the wind was like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks.
Billy weaver had never never been to bath before. He didn't know anyone who lived there. So, he asks to a porter if he know where he could pend the night.
he was walking briskly because for Billy it was the one common characteristic of all successful businessmen.
We can think that this story goes the winter, and in the evening, because billy arrives to bath it was about nine o'clock in the evening, the air was cold and the wind was like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks.
ceci est juste???
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