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Message de stephmagg0107 posté le 2004-11-28 16:10:11 (S | E | F | I)
c'est l' expression que j'avais à rédiger pourriez vous vérifier si le sens et la grammaire son corrects merci beaucoup
- good evening, I go up in my bedroom I have full homeworks to finish for tomorrow.
- Goes down again please I will like to speak a few minutes with you of this incident of this morning, say Martin
- I have anything to say. I doesnét want to speak about it. If you want, you can keep the gun I make fun about it, Kevin answers
- It is not so simple, why you are in possession of this gun. You know the dangers of them.
- Yes (pas la peine de me faire la morale) it isn't mine it's to a buddy. I was to bring back today for him for not that his parents notice it.
- I know that you is reasonable thus you know well that a weapon does not have its place in the hands of child a 13 year old boy and even less at the school.
- You don't worried I did nothing but transport it, nothing moreover, affirmed Kevin
- I thought that it is the truth however I will prevenir his parents because it is anormal they must know more it is illegal I will have to submit a report to my captain of it.
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Edité par bridg le 28-11-2004 16:18
c'est l' expression que j'avais à rédiger pourriez vous vérifier si le sens et la grammaire son corrects merci beaucoup
- good evening, I go up in my bedroom I have full homeworks to finish for tomorrow.
- Goes down again please I will like to speak a few minutes with you of this incident of this morning, say Martin
- I have anything to say. I doesnét want to speak about it. If you want, you can keep the gun I make fun about it, Kevin answers
- It is not so simple, why you are in possession of this gun. You know the dangers of them.
- Yes (pas la peine de me faire la morale) it isn't mine it's to a buddy. I was to bring back today for him for not that his parents notice it.
- I know that you is reasonable thus you know well that a weapon does not have its place in the hands of child a 13 year old boy and even less at the school.
- You don't worried I did nothing but transport it, nothing moreover, affirmed Kevin
- I thought that it is the truth however I will prevenir his parents because it is anormal they must know more it is illegal I will have to submit a report to my captain of it.
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Edité par bridg le 28-11-2004 16:18
Réponse: re:vérifiez si c'est correct de cocoon, postée le 2004-11-28 18:06:48 (S | E)
Bonsoir!
- Good evening, I go up in my bedroom I have a lot of homework
- Come down again please I would like to talk to you a few minutes
- I don't have anything to say. I don't want to speak about it. If you want, you can keep the gun (I make fun about it??), Kevin answers
- It is not so easy, why are you
- Yes (pas la peine de me faire la morale) it isn't mine it's my friend's. I was to bring back today for him for not that his parents notice it.
- I know that you
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- I thought/think that it is the truth however I will tell his parents because it is not normal they must know more it is illegal I will have to submit a report to my captain
Je n'ai pas dû tout bien corriger, il doit encore rester des fautes, mais bon, j'éspère que ce sera déjà un bon début pour toi!
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