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Message de katharos posté le 04-01-2006 à 14:17:30 (S | E | F | I)
Hello
Perhaps that I could apply for work as an English speaker commercial.
During the interview, I'll have to speak about myself about my experiences, and I would like you to help me to correct my faults.
This work will consist to take phone orders of costumers.
It's for society which sells clothes and beauty accessories.
I already have some experiences as a .
From April to June 1999, I have worked for the society "Quelle". I had to take the order of costumers whom were calling me.
I think that I have got the qualities needed for this work, which are:
I am polite, patient, good listener, a good diction.
I am able to take this order to a computer whereas speaking to a costumer.
It's just a little part of my self-presentation.
Thanks for correcting me.
Catherine.
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Edité par bridg le 04-01-2006 14:29
Lettre de motivation => divers
Message de katharos posté le 04-01-2006 à 14:17:30 (S | E | F | I)
Hello
Perhaps that I could apply for work as an English speaker commercial.
During the interview, I'll have to speak about myself about my experiences, and I would like you to help me to correct my faults.
This work will consist to take phone orders of costumers.
It's for society which sells clothes and beauty accessories.
I already have some experiences as a .
From April to June 1999, I have worked for the society "Quelle". I had to take the order of costumers whom were calling me.
I think that I have got the qualities needed for this work, which are:
I am polite, patient, good listener, a good diction.
I am able to take this order to a computer whereas speaking to a costumer.
It's just a little part of my self-presentation.
Thanks for correcting me.
Catherine.
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Edité par bridg le 04-01-2006 14:29
Lettre de motivation => divers
Réponse: job application de romanne, postée le 04-01-2006 à 14:38:11 (S | E)
Hello,
Just a few things ...
When talking about your past experience - the job you had in 1999 - you can't use the present perfect . You have to use the past simple : I worked...
In French we say ' une société' but in English you have to use other words : a company / a firm.
Nobody will see how you spell 'customer' in a job interview but your spelling is not correct...
When you say that you are a good listener, etc... you could express it differently by saying that you have good communication skills, that you are articulate.
whom is the object relative pronoun . In your sentence you need the subject pronoun : who
whereas should be changed to while. I suppose you mean that you can use a computer while speaking to a customer
consist i + V-ing
Réponse: job application de romanne, postée le 04-01-2006 à 14:39:25 (S | E)
Sorry for the typo : consist in
Réponse: job application de ourimba, postée le 04-01-2006 à 17:40:08 (S | E)
Here are some suggestions for you:
The work consists of taking customer orders by phone.
It's with a company that sells clothes and beauty products.
I already have some experience woking as a ? receptionist, office adminstrator, secretary ?
From April 1999 to June 1999 I worked for a company called "Quelle", where I was responsible for taking customer orders by phone.
I believe I have the qualities needed for this work, such as:
I am polite, patient and have excellent communication skills. (NOTE: I did not include the word you used "diction" which is not in common usage in USA)
I am able to process orders directly on a computer while speaking with a customer.
INDISPENSABLES : 