Let's suggest 92/ Taking it easy 38

Let's suggest 92/ Taking it easy 38
Message de here4u posté le 01-09-2025 à 21:11:30 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Another easy exercice that everyone can do!


Les vacances sont terminées, et nous reprenons doucement notre travail ! Courage !
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :

1) Do you like gardening? What do you grow?

2) What is your best (or your worst) memory of school?

3) Do you believe in Astrology and Horoscopes?

4) What sort of restaurant is your favourite?

Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé le vendredi 12 septembre 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 92/ Taking it easy 38 de here4u, postée le 02-09-2025 à 19:31:29 (S | E)
Hello dear friends!

Here is our first EXPRESSION of the school year!

ANSWER 1: TOPIC 2: 2) What is your best (or your worst) memory of school?
Please, indicate the possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.

I was in primary school and must have been about seven years old. My teacher was known to be strict. But this year, she was pregnant, often tired and irritable, not with most of the classroom, but always with the same little girl, shy, humble, always frightened. The teacher told off very often and one day, she grabbed the little girl by his hair and shocked her. I was feeling very, very bad, but I did not say anything, not even to my parents. I have never forgotten that and this is one of my worst memories of school.

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's suggest 92/ Taking it easy 38 de here4u, postée le 03-09-2025 à 12:17:50 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Wake up, please!

We have other ANSWERS in the waiting! A lot of work in perspective...

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Réponse : Let's suggest 92/ Taking it easy 38 de gerold, postée le 03-09-2025 à 17:53:46 (S | E)
Hello here4u!

ANSWER 1: TOPIC 2: 2) What is your best (or your worst) memory of school?
Please, indicate the possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.

This is a good text.

I was in primary school and must have been about seven years old. My teacher was known to be strict. But this year, she was pregnant, often tired and irritable, not with most of the classroom, but always with the same little girl, shy, humble, always frightened. The teacher told off very often (something missing?) and one day, she grabbed the little girl by his hair and shocked her. I was feeling very, very bad, but I did not say anything, not even to my parents. I have never forgotten that and this is one of my worst memories of school.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 92/ Taking it easy 38 de alouettelulu, postée le 03-09-2025 à 22:24:03 (S | E)
ANSWER 1: TOPIC 2: 2) What is your best (or your worst) memory of school?

Merci à Gerold pour ses indications. Voici ce que je propose pour corriger mon texte :

I was in primary school and must have been about seven years old. My teacher was known to be strict. But that year, she was pregnant, often tired and irritable, not with most of the pupils, but always with the same little girl, shy, humble, always frightened. The teacher told off her very often and one day, she grabbed the little girl by her hair and shocked her. I was feeling very, very bad, but I did not say anything, not even to my parents. I have never forgotten that and this is one of my worst memories of school.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 92/ Taking it easy 38 de here4u, postée le 03-09-2025 à 22:50:31 (S | E)
Hello Lulu thelark! I'll pluck you! (just kidding!)

Here, you're disobeying 2 rules...
- indications (mistakes) are blue, but 'suggestions' (corrections) are green.
- but most important: you mustn't give your corrections before due time! (2 days - especially as Magie is posting from the other side of the world! ) Then, only then and usually not before I gave my extra indications, are you allowed to 'suggest' in green...

Here is your (partly) corrected text with my own indications:

I was in primary school and must have been about seven years old. My teacher was known to be strict. But that year, she was pregnant, often tired and irritable, not with most of the pupils, but always with the same little girl, shy, humble, always frightened. The teacher told off her very often and one day, she grabbed the little girl by her hair and shocked her. I was feeling very, very bad, but I did not say anything, not even to my parents. I have never forgotten that and this is one of my worst memories of school.

A good text, indeed!

No hard feelings, Alouette... but please, don't correct this before tomorrow at noon, to give other members an opportunity to participate!

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