Let's suggest 93/ Taking it easy 39

Let's suggest 93/ Taking it easy 39
Message de here4u posté le 16-09-2025 à 10:42:31 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...

Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :

1. Do you watch series? If so, what category/ categories?

2. Saying goodbye…

3. Do you like jogging?

4. What program do you never miss on TV?



Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé le samedi 27 septembre 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 93/ Taking it easy 39 de here4u, postée le 16-09-2025 à 12:07:37 (S | E)
Hello arnaudsurf!

You're fast... but you didn't read the rules well.

You have to choose ONE or TWO topics (questions) and develop your answer in 150 words. You should send this answer TO ME by mp, and then I will post the answer on the forum on a first-come, first served basis... and then, your friends will help you correct it.

Take your time...

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Réponse : Let's suggest 93/ Taking it easy 39 de here4u, postée le 17-09-2025 à 22:58:17 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here is our first ANSWER: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy.

ANSWER A: Topic 3. Do you like jogging ?

As a child, even as a teenager, I could not run for a long time. I frequently stopped, breathless or getting stitch on the side. I didn't like jogging. One day, a friend taught me how to run long : « Breathing in is natural. You don't need to think about it. Just think about breathing out. And don't stop, but slow down when you get a stitch ». I ran a few times with him, following his advice. Gradually I got better. Step by step, I have been feeling at ease. I was running longer and longer without fatigue. I started to enjoy jogging. Since then, each time I can, I go running alone in the park, changing my route according to my whims, watching the nice landscape. I am feeling good. When the weather is bad, It is hard to start, but I always come back happy. Thanks a lot to my friend.

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's suggest 93/ Taking it easy 39 de here4u, postée le 19-09-2025 à 14:26:15 (S | E)
Hello!

Nobody?

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Réponse : Let's suggest 93/ Taking it easy 39 de here4u, postée le 21-09-2025 à 17:24:49 (S | E)
Hello dears!

I know that ANSWER 1 was quite good, but this is not a reason to remain silent! You should be either admirative or helpful, trying to enrich and perfect the text, and congratulating the writer for the good points!

ANSWER A: Topic 3. Do you like jogging ?

As a child, even as a teenager, I could not run for a long time. I frequently stopped, breathless or getting stitch on the side. I didn't like jogging. One day, a friend taught me how to run long : « Breathing in is natural. You don't need to think about it. Just think about breathing out. And don't stop, but slow down when you get a stitch ». I ran a few times with him, following his advice. Gradually I got better. Step by step, I have been feeling at ease. I was running longer and longer without fatigue. I started to enjoy jogging. Since then, each time I can, I go running alone in the park, changing my route according to my whims, watching the nice landscape. I am feeling good. When the weather is bad, It is hard to start, but I always come back happy. Thanks a lot to my friend.
Apart from these two lapses, a very good text, indeed.

Who can help?

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Réponse : Let's suggest 93/ Taking it easy 39 de gerold, postée le 21-09-2025 à 17:28:50 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: Topic 3. Do you like jogging ?

As a child, even as a teenager, I could not run for a long time (is this ambiguous?). I frequently stopped, breathless or getting xx stitch on the side. I didn't like jogging. One day, a friend taught me how to run long : « Breathing in is natural. You don't need to think about it. Just think about breathing out. And don't stop, but slow down when you get a stitch ». I ran a few times with him, following his advice. Gradually I got better. Step by step, I have been feeling at ease. I was running longer and longer without fatigue. I started to enjoy jogging. Since then, each time I can, I go running alone in the park, changing my route according to my whims, watching the nice landscape. I am feeling good. When the weather is bad, It is hard to start, but I always come back happy. Thanks a lot to my friend.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 93/ Taking it easy 39 de alouettelulu, postée le 22-09-2025 à 22:58:58 (S | E)
Let's suggest 93/Taking it easy 39
Answer A: Topic 3. Do you like jogging ?

Merci, here4u et Gerold !

As a child, even as a teenager, I was not able to run for long. I frequently stopped, breathless or getting a stitch on the side. I didn’t like jogging. One day, a friend taught me how to run on a long distance: « Breathing in is natural. You don’t need to think about it. Just think about breathing out. And don’t stop, but slow down when you get a stitch ». I ran a few times with him, following his advice. Gradually I got better. Step by step, I felt at ease. I ran longer and longer without getting tired. I started to enjoy jogging. Since then, each time I can, I go running alone in the park, changing my route according to my whims, watching the nice landscape. I am feeling good. When the weather is bad, It is hard to start, but I always come back happy. Thanks a lot to my friend.

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