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Message de here4u posté le 01-12-2025 à 11:24:59 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,

Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...

Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :

1) People are becoming more and more individualistic...

2) Do you think cooking is a waste of time, or a passion?

3) With the Internet, you'll never be lonely again...

Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé le vendredi 12 décembre 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de here4u, postée le 02-12-2025 à 12:27:47 (S | E)
Hello dears,

ANSWER A: TOPIC 2: Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you...

Cooking is an Art that makes all the senses vibrate. First, there is the SIGHT of a beautiful display of fresh products. The TOUCH of the different ingredients the scrapes, the smoothies. When you cook, the SENS OF SMELL
regains its full range of smells that emanate in the kitchen - from the most delicate and subtle to the most intense-. Your HEARING is attracted by the ingredients that sizzling, and of course, you delight in the TASTE of the blends of flavours that you taste. As in all arts, there are the passionate, the gifted, the apprentices, and the more or less bad ones people.
Let's say that I place myself in the apprentices, it's like in all other fields, you need work and perseverance. But it is never a waste of time. Even if my preparation is not as presentable nor as tasty as expected, it is always better than an industrial dish, cooked for weeks and packaged under plastic. At least I do it with love.

for the writing and the future improvements.

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de alouettelulu, postée le 02-12-2025 à 16:27:17 (S | E)
ANSWER A: TOPIC 2: Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you...

I enjoyed this text, which was full of deliciousness !

Cooking is an Art that makes all the senses vibrate. First, there is the SIGHT of a beautiful display of fresh products. The TOUCH of the different ingredients the scrapes, the smoothies. When you cook, the SENS OF SMELL
regains its full range of smells that emanate in the kitchen - from the most delicate and subtle to the most intense-. Your HEARING is attracted by the ingredients that sizzling, and of course, you delight in the TASTE of the blends of flavours that you taste. As in all arts, there are the passionate, the gifted, the apprentices, and the more or less bad ones people.
Let's say that I place myself in the apprentices, it's like in all other fields, you need work and perseverance. But it is never a waste of time. Even if my preparation is not as presentable nor as tasty as expected, it is always better than an industrial dish, cooked for weeks and packaged under plastic. At least I do it with love.

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de gerold, postée le 02-12-2025 à 19:35:44 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: TOPIC 2: Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you...

Cooking is an Art that makes all the senses vibrate. First, there is the SIGHT of a beautiful display of fresh products xx The TOUCH of the different ingredients comma the scrapes , the smoothies. When you cook, the SENS OF SMELL regains its full range of smells that emanate in the kitchen - from the most delicate and subtle to the most intense-. Your HEARING is attracted by the ingredients that sizzling, and of course, you delight xx in the TASTE of the blends of flavours that you taste. As in all arts, there are the passionate, the gifted, the apprentices, and the more or less bad ones people.
Let's say that I place myself in the apprentices, it's like in all other fields, you need work and perseverance. But it is never a waste of time. Even if my preparation is not as presentable nor as tasty as expected, it is always better than an industrial dish, cooked for weeks and packaged under plastic. At least I do it with love.

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de magie8, postée le 04-12-2025 à 09:40:37 (S | E)
hello essai d'amelioration selon vos instructions avec mes remerciements

Cooking is an Art that makes all the senses vibrate. First, there is the SIGHT of a beautiful display of fresh products ( on the market stalls. The TOUCH of the different ingredients, the ( rough, the smoothies. When you cook, the ( (SENSE OF SMELL rejoices in all combination of scents that emanate in the kitchen - from the most delicate and subtle to the most intense-. Your HEARING is attracted by the ingredients that ( sizzle in the fry pan, and of course, you delight ( yourself in the TASTE of the blends of flavours that you ( savour. As in all arts, there are the passionate, the gifted, the apprentices, and the more or less ( talented ones people.
Let's say that I place myself in the apprentices, it's like in all other fields, you need work and perseverance. But it is never a waste of time. Even if my preparation ( has not nice appearance and it is not as tasty as expected, it is always better than an industrial dish, cooked for weeks and packaged under plastic. At least I do it with love.

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de gerold, postée le 04-12-2025 à 11:25:43 (S | E)
Hello!

Magie

Cooking is an Art that makes all the senses vibrate. First, there is the SIGHT of a beautiful display of fresh products ( on the market stalls, then the TOUCH of the different ingredients, the ( rough what do you mean? , the smoothies. When you cook, the ( (SENSE OF SMELL rejoices in all combinations of scents that emanate from (or spread in) the kitchen - from the most delicate and subtle to the most intense-. Your HEARING is attracted by/picks up* the ingredients that ( sizzle in the fry pan, and of course, you delight ( yourself in (with?) the TASTE of the blends of flavours that you ( savour. As in all arts, there are the passionate, the gifted, the apprentices, and the more or less ( talented ~~ones~~ people.
Let's say that I place myself in the apprentices, it's like in all other fields, you need work and perseverance. But it is never a waste of time. Even if my preparation ( doesn't have nice appearance and it is not as tasty as expected, it is always better than an industrial dish, cooked for weeks and packaged under plastic. At least I do it with love.

* I'm not sure we can say "hearing is attracted by (something)"?

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de here4u, postée le 04-12-2025 à 13:30:43 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Answer A: Here are my indications:

Cooking is an Art that makes all the senses vibrate. First, there is the SIGHT of a beautiful display of fresh products (on the market stalls, then the TOUCH of the different ingredients, the (rough what do you mean? , the smoothies.(and here, you're alluding to'touch'?) When you cook, the (SENSE OF SMELL rejoices in all combinations of scents that emanate from (or spread in) the kitchen - from the most delicate and subtle to the most intense-. Your HEARING is attracted by/picks up* the ingredients that (sizzle in the fryING pan, and of course, you delight (yourself in OK (with?) the TASTE of the blends of flavours that you (savour/ relish in. As in all arts, there are the passionate, the gifted, the apprentices, and the more or less (talented ~~ones~~ people.
Let's say that I place myself in the apprentices, it's like in all other fields, you need work and perseverance. But it is never a waste of time. Even if my preparation (doesn't have X nice appearance and it is not as tasty as expected, it is always better than an industrial dish, cooked for weeks and packaged under plastic. At least I do it with love.

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de gerold, postée le 04-12-2025 à 17:33:09 (S | E)
Hello again!

Answer A: Here are my indications:

Cooking is an Art that makes all the senses vibrate. First, there is the SIGHT of a beautiful display of fresh products (on the market stalls, then the TOUCH of the different ingredients, the (rough what do you mean? , the smoothies.(and here, you're alluding to'touch'?) suggestion : .. to check the tenderness of a steak (but we are not supposed to do that) When you cook, the (SENSE OF SMELL rejoices in all combinations of scents that emanate from (or spread in) the kitchen - from the most delicate and subtle to the most intense-. Your HEARING (EAR) is attracted by/picks up (capte) the sound of the ingredients that (sizzle in the fryING pan, and of course, you delight (yourself in OK (with?) the TASTE of the blends of flavours that you (savour/ relish in. As in all arts, there are the passionate, the gifted, the apprentices, and the more or less (talented ~~ones~~ people.
Let's say that I place myself in the apprentices, it's like in all other fields, you need work and perseverance. But it is never a waste of time. Even if my preparation (doesn't have a nice appearance and it is not as tasty as expected, it is always better than an industrial dish, cooked several weeks ago (cooked for weeks would mean "cuisiné pendant des semaines") and packaged under plastic. At least I do it with love.

"L'ouïe est attirée" me semble bizarre en français, mais se trouve sur Internet. En anglais, on dit plutôt apparemment "the ear is attracted to" (e. g. the ear is attracted to repetitive patterns, your ear is attracted to that particular tone)

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Modifié par gerold le 04-12-2025 17:33

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de here4u, postée le 06-12-2025 à 13:08:56 (S | E)
Hello dear writers and correctors!

Here is ANSWER B: please indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy:

2) Do you think cooking is a waste of time, or a passion?

Eating is vital. So, there is no way around cooking : home cooking, artisanal or industrial cooking.
Eating healthily, eating with pleasure, sharing a good meal, that's even better. For that, nothing better than homemade food.
We can cook with passion. Cook well for our family or for our clients. The difficulty is daily cooking. Three meals a day, that's quite a lot and becomes boring. It's never a waste of time, but that requires imagination and often dedication, if we are not passionate or if you are simply tired.

for your help!

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de gerold, postée le 07-12-2025 à 18:37:39 (S | E)
Hello!

Here is ANSWER B: please indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy:

2) Do you think cooking is a waste of time, or a passion?

Eating is vital. So, there is no way around cooking : home cooking, artisanal or industrial cooking. it would be great to use a word or words instead of ":"
Eating healthily, eating with pleasure, sharing a good meal, that's even better (than what?) . For that, nothing xx better than homemade food.
We can cook with passion. Cook well for our family or for our clients (this is not a sentence). The difficulty is daily cooking. Three meals a day, that's quite a lot and becomes boring. It's never a waste of time, but that requires imagination and often dedication is this the right word?, if we are not passionate or if you are simply tired.

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de alouettelulu, postée le 09-12-2025 à 08:37:23 (S | E)
Hello!

Voici ma proposition de correction :

2) Do you think cooking is a waste of time, or a passion?

Eating is vital. So, there is no way around cooking, whether it is home cooking, artisanal or industrial cooking.
Eating healthily, eating with pleasure, sharing a good meal is even better than simply feeding oneself. For that, nothing is better than homemade food.
We can cook with passion, whether for our family or for our clients. The difficulty is daily cooking. Three meals a day, that’s quite a lot and becomes boring. It’s never a waste of time, but that requires imagination and often devotion, if we are not passionate or simply tired.

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de magie8, postée le 10-12-2025 à 11:07:34 (S | E)
hello
recapitulation suite aux differentes interventions et suggestions En vous remerciant tous

Answer A:

Cooking is an Art that makes all the senses vibrate. First, there is the SIGHT of a beautiful display of fresh products (on the market stalls, then the TOUCH of the different smooth or raspy fruits and vegetables. When you cook, the (SENSE OF SMELL rejoices in all combinations of scents that ( spread in the kitchen - from the most delicate and subtle to the most intense-. Your (EAR picks up the sound of the ingredients that (sizzle in the frying pan, and of course, you delight (yourself in the TASTE of the blends of flavours that you ( relish in. As in all arts, there are the passionate, the gifted, the apprentices, and the more or less (talented ones people.
Let's say that I place myself in the apprentices, it's like in all other fields, you need work and perseverance. But it is never a waste of time. Even if my preparation (doesn't have a nice appearance and it is not as tasty as expected, it is always better than an industrial dish, cooked several weeks ago and packaged under plastic. At least I do it with love.

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de here4u, postée le 10-12-2025 à 11:33:21 (S | E)
Hello dears,

ANSWER B: topic 2) Do you think cooking is a waste of time, or a passion? My indications

Eating is vital. So, there is no way around cooking, whether it is home cooking, artisanal or industrial cooking.
Eating healthily, eating with pleasure, sharing a good meal is (even)1 better than simply feeding oneself. For that, nothing is better than homemade food.
We can cook with passion, whether for our family or for our clients. The difficulty is daily cooking. Three (il faudrait mieux relier ces différents segments...) meals a day, that’s quite a lot and becomes boring. It’s never a waste of time, but that requires imagination and often devotion, if we are not passionate or simply tired.

1 ne donne pas plus de force ici...
Bien ! Pas de 'fautes". Mais... Soigne mieux les liens entre les différentes phrases qui expriment différentes pensées... IL faut que l'on puisse te suivre sans (trop) réfléchir à ce que tu as voulu dire.

Réponse : Let's suggest 98/ Taking it easy 44 de here4u, postée le 10-12-2025 à 14:29:42 (S | E)
Hello dear,

Answer A: topic 2: following the different interventions and suggestions : my last indications.

Cooking is an Art that makes all the senses vibrate. First, there is the SIGHT of a beautiful display of fresh products on the market stalls, then the TOUCH of the different smooth or raspy fruits and vegetables. When you cook, the SENSE OF SMELL rejoices in all XXX combinations of scents that spread in the kitchen - from the most delicate and subtle to the most intense XXX-. Your EAR picks up the sound of the ingredients that sizzle in the frying pan, and of course, you delight (yourself in the TASTE of the blends of flavours that you relish in. As in all arts, there are the passionate, the gifted, the apprentices, and the more or less talented ~~ones~~ people.
Let's say that I place myself in the apprentices, it's like in all other fields,(:) you need work and perseverance. But it is never a waste of time. Even if my preparation doesn't have a nice appearance and (it) is not as tasty as expected, it is always better than an industrial dish, cooked several weeks ~~ago~~/ before and packaged under plastic. At least I do (je préfèrerais un autre temps !) it with love.

Très bonne expression. De plus, le premier paragraphe est même poétique et extrêmement bien construit !

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