Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45

Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45
Message de here4u posté le 16-12-2025 à 22:15:26 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,

Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...

Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m'avaient dit être gênés d'exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l'impression - souvent fausse - de les exprimer maladroitement ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :

1) People are becoming more and more individualistic...

2) Do you like detective stories? Why or why not?

3) With the Internet, you'll never be lonely again...

Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix ? en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu'à atteindre en tout un maximum d'environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d'abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert? Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé le dimanche 28 décembre 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de here4u, postée le 17-12-2025 à 14:13:27 (S | E)
Hello dears,

We have an answer to the tricky questions I asked you!

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic... Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy...

It is true that despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together and each with their smartphone and no one talking to the other
Education, new technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanization also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than association life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune, the populations help themselves.

Thanks for your help!

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Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de gerold, postée le 19-12-2025 à 11:28:39 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic... Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy...

It is true that punctuation despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together and each with their smartphone and no one talking to the other.
Education, xxnew technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanization also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than association life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune, the populations help themselves.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de here4u, postée le 20-12-2025 à 14:06:20 (S | E)
Hello, green required!

My indications:

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic...
It is true that punctuation despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together and each with their smartphone and no one talking to the other.
Education, xxnew technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanization also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than association life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune, the populations help themselves.
[ C'est une belle faute ! Grâce à toi, je suis en train de refaire un exercice sur le problème !

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Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de magie8, postée le 21-12-2025 à 09:14:14 (S | E)
Hello mon essai de correction

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic...
It is true that, despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together, (each person with their smartphones and no one talking to the other
Education, (the new technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanisation also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than (associative life/voluntary sector/investment in [/vert]volunteer.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune, ( (bad luck, people help each other.

qu'est-ce qui est faux avec misfortune?

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Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de gerold, postée le 21-12-2025 à 12:24:53 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: Topic 1: People are becoming more and more individualistic...
magie!

It is true that, despite all means of communication, people are increasingly isolated and disconnected from their surroundings. It is not uncommon to see four people sitting together, (each person with their smartphones (without "s", each person has usually only one) no one talking to the others/the other three.
Education and ((the) new technologies have made people more self-sufficient.
Urbanisation also isolates people. We live in tall buildings or houses surrounded by high walls and we do not know our neighbours.
The (or not "the"?) new customs have changed society: divorces, blended families, working women give more independence to everyone.
Personal success seems to have become more important than (associative life/voluntary sector/investment in volunteer/life in society/social life.
However, social ties remain the factor of well-being. We note that punctuation when solidarity is called upon, people respond present and mobilise. In case of major disasters or misfortune (I would put both either singular or plural, in case of a major disaster or (a) misfortune/disasters or misfortunes), ( (bad luck, people help each other I'm not sure that's what was meant. Could it be The population helps itself (that's to say without relying on state aid)?

qu'est-ce qui est faux avec misfortune?
La "belle faute", ce serait the populations help themselves ?)

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Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de polaroid, postée le 21-12-2025 à 20:43:42 (S | E)
2) Do you like detective stories? Why or why not?

I like detective stories because I like to search the assassin and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the assassin reaction when he or she committed the crime and at the moment he or she unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime are complex. I find that detective stories are very interesting. The assassin often had a lot of imagination.
There stories keep in suspense. Reads don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer to read books because it work the brain and the imagination to create the scene in the head. It permise to imagine murders and corpses for the non sensitive person for those who really like this kind. I find this stories funny.
I hate nothing detective stories.
To conclude, if you would like to pass a good moment, think to read detective stories. Good reading.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de here4u, postée le 22-12-2025 à 16:31:35 (S | E)
Hello dears!

Polaroid n'a pas respecté les modalités pour poster ce travail (à m'envoyer en mp!) , mais comme on n'était pas loin de la fin de ANSWER A, je laisse passer!

ANSWER B: Topic 2) Do you like detective stories? Why or why not? please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy.

I like detective stories because I like to search the assassin and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the assassin reaction when he or she committed the crime and at the moment he or she unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime are complex. I find that detective stories are very interesting. The assassin often had a lot of imagination.
There stories keep in suspense. Reads don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer to read books because it work the brain and the imagination to create the scene in the head. It permise to imagine murders and corpses for the non sensitive person for those who really like this kind. I find this stories funny.
I hate nothing detective stories.
To conclude, if you would like to pass a good moment, think to read detective stories. Good reading.

Thanks for you help, correcting polaroid.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 99/ Taking it easy 45 de gerold, postée le 22-12-2025 à 22:38:13 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER B: Topic 2) Do you like detective stories? Why or why not? please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy.


I like detective stories because I like to search xx the assassin and to understand why he or she killed someone. I like to see the assassin reaction when he or she committed (tense) the crime and at the moment xx he or she xx unmasked. Sometimes the crime is simple but sometimes the crime are complex. I find that detective stories are very interesting. The assassin often had (tense) a lot of imagination.
There stories keep in suspense. Reads don't want to finish detective stories quickly because there are actions. I prefer to read books because it work the brain and the imagination to create the scene in the head. It (what is "it"? permise to imagine murders and corpses for the non sensitive person for those who really like this kind. I find this stories funny.
I hate nothing xx detective stories.
To conclude, if you would like to pass a good moment, think to read detective stories. Good reading.

In English, "assassin" has a restrictive definition. This is not the most appropriate word here.

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