Let's suggest 100/ Taking it easy 46

Let's suggest 100/ Taking it easy 46
Message de here4u posté le 01-01-2026 à 18:25:21 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,

Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...

Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m'avaient dit être gênés d'exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l'impression - souvent fausse - de les exprimer maladroitement ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :

1) Imagine you may ask 3 questions to the character of a novel or of a film, what would they be?

2) What memory of you childhood is still making you smile or laugh?

3) Imagine each emotion has a colour. Which one would you picture to represent 'disgust' and why?


Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix ? en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu'à atteindre en tout un maximum d'environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d'abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert. Une fois le premier texte 'corrigé' au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé le samedi 11 janvier 2026 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 100/ Taking it easy 46 de here4u, postée le 02-01-2026 à 15:06:08 (S | E)
Hello,
All my best wishes to all of you! 🎉 🎊 🥳 🎉

Answer A: TOPIC3: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you...

Imagine each emotion has a colour, which one would you picture to represent "disgust" and why?

In my opinion, the colour that would seem the most appropriate to represent "disgust" would be brown.
In my eyes, brown is not a pleasant colour: it is the tone you get when you have mixed the colours together and you have done everything wrong." Your painting has become mud colour.
Brown is not luminous, it is sad. Apart from chocolate treats, brown is colour of everything dirty.
Even if you pair brown with pink or yellow, it still look ugly, brown overwhelms all other colours and highlights nothing.
Although in terms of interior apartment decoration, the mix of brown, grey and white has become fashionable, it seems to me that is depressing.

Thanks for your help.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 100/ Taking it easy 46 de gerold, postée le 03-01-2026 à 13:31:35 (S | E)
Hello!

Answer A: TOPIC3: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you...

Imagine each emotion has a colour, which one would you picture to represent "disgust" and why?

In my opinion, the colour that would seem the most appropriate to represent "disgust" would be brown.
In my eyes, brown is not a pleasant colour: it is the tone you get when you have mixed the colours together and you have done everything (other word?) wrong." Your painting has become mud colour.
Brown is not luminous, it is sad. Apart from chocolate treats, brown is colour of everything dirty.
Even if you pair brown with pink or yellow, it still look ugly, brown overwhelms all other colours and highlights nothing.
Although punctuation in terms of interior apartment decoration, the mix of brown, grey and white has become fashionable, it seems to me that is depressing.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 100/ Taking it easy 46 de magie8, postée le 05-01-2026 à 08:20:18 (S | E)
hello dears ma correction selon les indications fournies par Gerold. Un grand merci Gerold pour votre aide

Answer A: TOPIC3...

Imagine each emotion has a colour, which one would you picture to represent "disgust" and why?

In my opinion, the colour that would seem the most appropriate to represent "disgust" would be brown.
In my eyes, brown is not a pleasant colour: it is the tone you get when you ( mixed the colours together and you have ( made everything wrong/ you have messed up." Your painting has become mud colour.
Brown is not luminous, it is sad. Apart from chocolate treats, brown is the ( dirty substances colour.
Even if you pair brown with pink or yellow, it still ( looks ugly, brown overwhelms all other colours and highlights nothing.
Although, in terms of interior apartment decoration, the mix of brown, grey and white has become fashionable, it seems to me that is depressing.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 100/ Taking it easy 46 de gerold, postée le 06-01-2026 à 09:12:26 (S | E)
Hello!

magie!

Answer A: TOPIC3...

Imagine each emotion has a colour, which one would you picture to represent "disgust" and why?

In my opinion, the colour that would seem the most appropriate to represent "disgust" would be brown.
In my eyes, brown is not a pleasant colour: it is the tone you get when you ( mixed the colours together and you have ( made everything wrong/ you have messed up." Your painting has become mud colour. I would use simple past: when you mix the colours together (or if you mess up when mixing colours)
Brown is not luminous, it is sad. Apart from chocolate treats, brown is the ( dirty substances colour. the colour of dirty substances (I'm not sure about this compound word)
Even if you pair brown with pink or yellow, it still ( looks ugly, brown overwhelms all other colours and highlights nothing.
Although, in terms of interior apartment decoration, the mix of brown, grey and white has become fashionable, it seems to me that is depressing.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 100/ Taking it easy 46 de here4u, postée le 06-01-2026 à 11:37:21 (S | E)
Hello dears!

Answer A: TOPIC3...After Magie's indications and Gerold's,[ a lot to both of you!] here are mine...

Imagine each emotion has a colour, which one would you picture to represent "disgust" and why?

In my opinion, the colour that would seem the most appropriate to represent "disgust" would be brown.
In my eyes, brown is not a pleasant colour: it is the tone you get when you ( mixed (là, je mettrais un present perfect, c'est bien un bilan d'action.)the colours together and you have ( made everything wrong/ you have messed up."B Your painting has become mud colour. I would use simple past: when you mix the colours together (or if you mess up when mixing colours)(I can't see where you've put a simple past...)
Brown is not luminous, it is sad. Apart from chocolate treats, brown is the ( dirty substances colour. the colour of dirty substances (I'm not sure about this compound word)
Even if you pair brown with pink or yellow, it still ( looks ugly, brown overwhelms/ dominates all other colours and highlights nothing.
Although, in terms of interior apartment decoration, the mix of brown, grey and white has become fashionable, it seems to me that XX is depressing.

Très bonnes indications et suggestions.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 100/ Taking it easy 46 de gerold, postée le 06-01-2026 à 13:39:34 (S | E)
Hello again!

My mistake, T wanted to write simple present, sorry.

it seems to me that that/this/it is depressing.??

I felt vaguely that something was missing. But usually "that" as a conjunction can be omitted, can't it?

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Réponse : Let's suggest 100/ Taking it easy 46 de here4u, postée le 06-01-2026 à 19:57:26 (S | E)
Hello again!

it seems to me that that/this/it is depressing.?? yes! I'd write ...that it's depressing.

I felt vaguely that something was missing. But usually "that" as a conjunction can be omitted, can't it? yes, but here, I feel we're missing something. It's much clearer with the subject...

for your suggestions and questions.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 100/ Taking it easy 46 de here4u, postée le 06-01-2026 à 20:10:45 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Here is ANSWER B: Topic 1) Imagine you may ask 3 questions to the character of a novel or of a film, what would they be?

Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you. (You may also 'play the role of the character' and answer one of the questions...)

If I were to meet the main character of a novel, I would ask him a lot of questions and, in particular, the following ones: Did your author ask you for the permission to «use» you? Do you feel he «uses» you well and, more generally, are you fairly treated? Specifically, if you're not satisfied, does he listen to your complaints? If it's not the case, you should seek compensation. Now comes the most important question: Do you think you should be considered as a co-author? As such, you would be entitled to receive a decent part of your author's indecently high earnings. After all, you do most of the job, this guy is nothing without you, he isn't even able to write in correct English, why should he take all your money? Remember: You are NOT your author's slave. But he might be yours, if you are clever enough.

More or less 155 words

Thanks for your work and for your help!

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